Ice Cream...U Scream - TS Series_You complete me - Completed - Page 8

As I said, I have read everything at a time and and...

Wow wow.... what a Masterpiece....👌🏻

No words to describe.... everything is so beautifully written.....😍

You are so good at writing emotions👏🏻 .....

You are my inspiration ❤️

Last few paragraphs were so beautifully written..... not everyone can write that way.... really... Awesome 👌🏻 👏🏻 👍🏻

If possible, please give epilogue to it..... would lobe to read....

If possible, just update your Masterpieces in wattpad where many people would love to read..... there are many people just waiting to read such beautiful stories......

And as always don't forget to tag me whenever you update....

So so so beautiful ❤️.

You have described Virat's feelings at losing their child so clearly which the writers failed to capture. I teared up when you described what the room meant for him, before and after the mishap.

Sai breaking down choked me! I am in that space now where I could not stand one more hurt to Sai. Her wailing and her incompleteness is so well worded. it is painfully beautiful.

And the much needed, heart to heart talk 👏. Anytime, this is needed.

Last two paragraphs are icing on the cake. It really appeared one mind, body and soul!!

beautifully written, the words are so good!!

I am surprised how writers cant invest 1-2 episodes only on such talks! NeilSha would do magic with those dialogues. Even TRP aunties would love such episodes, any woman likes when her husband listens or talks!. I wonder why they dont show such talk.

I am not complaining now after reading yours. ❤️ Again well done. Loved it.👍🏼

And yeah congratulations on writing a mature chapter! it was so beautiful...like a poetry. Very sensual and romantic. The emotions made it even more intimate. Too good 👍🏼

OMG!! I do not have any words for the conversation.

I loveeddd the way whole conversation flowed and my eyes teared up when sai cried with those mittens in her hands.

you are an excellent writer sherry.

Can I be a little greedy and demand for an epilogue with their little Savi.

Wow! Too too beautiful

Originally posted by: sherry_24

Thanks for sharing your thoughts ❤️

I agree. As humans we can be unpredictable in our responses to situations. It varies. Yet there is a pattern. Virat is so repetitive in his faults, and so unapologetically self absorbed while ignoring Sai that he cuts a very sad figure. A very weak one at that. While V always apologises, it is Sai who has forgiven even without apologies.

I was actually staying in the forum to finish your stories. Do tag me if by chance you plan to write more.

I love your writing. It is so good. But Virat still came off very selfish to me. I guess I didn’t want an understanding Sai I guess, I wanted Sai to be the one pouring her feelings and hurt down and Virat responding to her questions kinds. Like to me even in a fanfic am not able to relate to Virat’s pain and loss for a child that he would let Sai deal with it alone, whatever might be the reason guilt or shame. Your first chapter was so powerful, the hurt was so well written and that’s exactly how Sai is. Sai is expert at burying her pain cos she truly doesn’t have anyone to be vulnerable withX she is scared that she will chase away the only people she has, or she think she has to always be strong even if she faced the same pain. With samrat Virat’s pain is greater cos he is his own brother , her pain and sadness is not to be counted cos she is responsible. Again with the child Virat’s dreams are greater than hers? Why?

I love the story but I don’t know what will be Sai’s happy ending. Is this how she would always be , will aaba be the only person she can truly be herself with? Retreading this story just makes it even more cruel and out of all the shows I see, no FL life is as cruel as Sai’s. They have some family to call their own. Not this paltas who keep changing sides as and when convenient.

I think I am so disconnected with sairat as a couple.

What an awesome writer you are! Just fabulous … all emotions so well put together! Loved and enjoyed reading and imagining Sai and Virat!!! 🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️

this is how husband and wife grow together!

I understand that you are not convinced with the story. And now I know why. I have been off this for a while and today read and saw a lot which kind of has me upset with the way the story has progressed and how some of the characters have behaved esp Virat. For that one clip that I saw of him having no qualms about having P as the surrogate completely ignoring Sai's sentiments as usual and the laws around it has made me despise him even before he actually agrees to it in the coming episodes.

I was better off away. Atleast was able to write without any reservations and dislike clouding my imagination.

Thanks a bunch for those lovely words ❤️ They are so encouraging.

I don't think I would have been able to write this if I was following Ghum. Like you sentiments differ now 🤦‍♀️

Guess its better to detach and write for our own creative satisfaction. 😜. Or else toxicity kills imagination or line of thought.

Thanks a bunch ❤️

Your words always make me feel so good and boosts up my confidence to write more. 💕

I'm not sure about the epilogue though. Coming back to ghum track has me upset again esp with V. Maybe once I get over it. Cant promise.

Thanks for that thought. Will definitely try putting it all up, now that I have a few to my collections😉