SaiRat OS - Isolation - Page 4

Aww.. thank you so much. It's a huge compliment coming from you. ❤️🤗

Hi..its really nice to see a story that connects with real world, COVID. Virat will be worried about Sai's health surely. Looking at Virat right now in the show, he seems to have given up on her n family. Even after divorce, Sai will not be able to move forward without getting her answers to what really happened. Maybe with just the two of them in isolation for 2 weeks, they will be more calm n open for discussion.

Everything was okay until Day 7, why are you making us cry😢? But that is the reality of our society. The family, not all, blamed her for Virat finding another woman infront of him. And she even said the reason she backdated the divorce is she dont want to hear people saying she was left for another woman. But I dont think he had registered it. When he is hurt, he is blind to others hurt, thats how he is. He needs to realize the effect of his action on Sai n his family. As always he needs an 'external factor' for that. And here the nurse's words n Sai crying hearing it.

Really like you put the backdated divorce cert here. Sai actually went against her principle, gave a forged document to DIG knowing fully well its a crime. Thats the length she is ready to go and the risk she is willing to take for him. DIG caught onto her lies but still advised Virat to submit it as proof so he can continue his duty. DIG still believes he is hiding something. Thats the difference between family n third person.

Where is Sunny in all this? He is the first one to say there must be a reason for Virat's action. Virat's news was even in the newspaper but he is gayab. Even if Virat cannot tell him the truth, he will be able to make Virat see the situation from Sai n his family's POV. So is Sai's friends, gayab. There is a lot the makers can change in this track. They even have the ability to create their own track, like the MiMo track. Dont know how they gonna end this.

Lastly, your ending is 👏 👍 . Sai questioning him back about trust n Virat realizing where he went wrong. He said to Shruti if he is in the same situation, he would trust Sai n wait for sahi waqt. But can he walk the talk? He was confident when he proposed the deal to Sai n tell Patralekha he will hold on to his promise. But look at what happened. Not 'trolling' anyone, but thats the reality.

Sorry for the unwanted gyan. Do continue writing. Its always great to read the stories here.

It's very nice. Virat explain to Sai it's highly impossible. If Sai treat him like this virat self victimize himself. I want SAI to be like this only.

Virat's self victimizing is the main reason for shuthi to fall for him. Now a days unable to watch him. Very well written

Thanks for tagging me

Thank you so much for such a long and sweet comment. 🤗

I have always felt that these two would gel better if they don't have CN wasis between them and their ridiculous bakbak.

Both V and Sai are sensitive in nature and are professional so they would understand each other if the situation is dealt calmly and thoughtfully. But ofcourse it's a show aur sab kuch hunkydory hoga to show kaise chalega. Thats why we have all the drama in ZA.

And Pakhi is a big thorn in their relationship, whenever she is absent or ignored, SaiRat is love.

As you said, he is right now too adamant to listen to family members, feels betrayed by them. Therefore the POV of a third party.

I love Sai too much and her moral and ethical compass. Hence for her to create an illegal document would be too much. But that is also her trust in V in a way because right now she feels that he has only broken a deal marriage and doesn't know about Shruti being naxal.

V has been repeatedly asking her to trust him but he doesn't the meaning behind it. Always thinks in the negative when it comes to her. Hence I don't want Sai to forgive him so easily and make him introspect of what would have happened if he had trusted her right from the start.

I didn't mind the rant.. it's a pleasure to read such detailed comment. Feels good that a stupid piece like this is appreciated. 🤗. Thank you again.

P.S. the idea for Day 7 came from Nikki's OS. Do read if you can. Sunny has an appearance in another TS. Uncoupling.

Haha.. that's so true.

In the show he may never explain. He is too arrogant and self centred.

But thats precisely why this OS. Kahi to bhadas nikalni padegi na 😆😆

Thank you reading and liking it 🤗

Originally posted by: Moor278

Kahan ho tum log?

Haha kahin nahi. Kal geography test hain🤢 And God, I hate geography with passion. So studying.

My exams will get over tomorrow. Then I will read and comment on this OS of yours and also write my OS😳

Originally posted by: Moor278

Kahan ho tum log?

Shifted to different forums for positivity 😂😂😂. They have actual MLs and FLs.

But seriously, I'm trying to find motivation to write. Because even the crying Sai is irritating me.

Tamarind is good, positive all around. I wrote 2 completely 18+ shots there. Read them if possible (I'll help you with the story if you want)

Nakuul's show has amazing acting.

You should try both of them

Oh then.. so sorry for disturbing you.

Do well.. and all the best.👍🏼

I read them already 🙈🙈. So so good 🔥🔥. Was tempted for a second to watch this guy. Thevsecond one is better.

I want similar ones for Arjun. And now that I know you can write this.. my expectations are high

BALH i watch too. Priya ka auto wala accident. 😆 Though not on forum there. Ghum forum hi addictive hai. Don't want to add another. 😆

But tag me if you write something there.

Planning to write Sumit today. This one is different though.

Originally posted by: Moor278

I read them already 🙈🙈. So so good 🔥🔥. Was tempted for a second to watch this guy. Thevsecond one is better.

I want similar ones for Arjun. And now that I know you can write this.. my expectations are high

BALH i watch too. Priya ka auto wala accident. 😆 Though not on forum there. Ghum forum hi addictive hai. Don't want to add another. 😆

But tag me if you write something there.

Planning to write Sumit today. This one is different though.

I have been trying to detach from this forum a lot. I guess all it needed was a different show. You should watch that guy !!!! Go, I beg you.

I'll give you a bait. He faints good.

Because having you replying to my stories is amazing. You read them and had nothing to say ???? Et tu brute ?

Oh crap, now you guys are going to expect them for Arjun 😂😂😂 I'll write it though, because I plan on wrapping this one up in the next 10 parts or so.

Can't wait for Sumit, though you'll have to wait a little for Arjun.

If KD is exactly followed, Pakhi and Shruti are going to bash Sai when Virat is injured. I'll write super chapters then. All that anger against that show will manifest.