SS: Bliss! (epilogue Page 9) - Page 7

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Quoted you above so tagging you.

Thank you so much for this.❤️

And truly, you have written this so well. The best thing about stories is that we as readers journey through all the emotions and experiences along with the characters. Your potrayal of a shy and naive, yet curious and passionate woman through Sai is brilliant. It is easy to get lost in the exhilaration of our perfect imagination so much that we forget the reality. In reality, it isn't always smooth and perfect, and that's what makes it all so beautiful. Making love for the first time is an experience which couple share together. They both play equal role and guide each other through it. It's intimate, passionate and so sensual. That intimacy was clearly visible in your writing.

It was wonderfully written, and deserves all the praise it is getting.

So...kudos to you!🤗

Oh the no protection thing I assumed you were referring to Sai is aware she wasn't ovulating since she is a medical student and should know what days she should use protection😆

Originally posted by: Rdigest

Oh the no protection thing I assumed you were referring to Sai is aware she wasn't ovulating since she is a medical student and should know what days she should use protection😆

yes that’s what I meant. But will it coincide with her first time?! That’s where I took creative liberties .

Do we have another part too.

Sairat are in kid section as per bts.

☺️

Originally posted by: tinafans

Do we have another part too.

Sairat are in kid section as per bts.

☺️

I have to write the after talk in epilogue. Soon will.

No yaar not into kids for sairat yet. Nope

Originally posted by: sadiltl

I have to write the after talk in epilogue. Soon will.

No yaar not into kids for sairat yet. Nope

We are putting too much pressure on you, jaldi likho 😆

This is beautiful Sadhika 🤩. I got so emotional reading their heartfelt confession, talking about their insecurities and how each of them put the other above themselves. You almost made me cry 😭.

Originally posted by: Rdigest

This is beautiful Sadhika 🤩. I got so emotional reading their heartfelt confession, talking about their insecurities and how each of them put the other above themselves. You almost made me cry 😭.

hey did you understand the object of desire part in the last para? I am thinking if people will be able to get it the right way. 😏

Epilogue is very nice yaar, frankly speaking I am not so comfortable reading bold stories 😆 completely my problem, but the second part of the story is awesome, you used best lines and best way to put forward insecurities or mind set of both especially sai. One line that triggered to write this comment is " it's easy to go away from you but very difficult to stay with you" and lines that's fall in this meaning that loving virat is easy but accepting it is difficult, with these two lines you perfectly described sai mindset and all her struggle she faced all this one year, awesome , a big round of applause for that . 👏👏

We usually get think once in a while why sai is not understanding when virat is showering love when he is normal but these two lines describe her situation, she want to understand him but how can she when the person is continuously reminding her that virat is hers, one can easily say pakhi is saying that but virat is not, but how can sai believe when pakhi is openly confidently claiming her right. Too good yaar