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Originally posted by: ltelidevara

The scene is too good. Only afraid of Didi and her terrible acting. She will spoil everything.

yes the only time I felt bad for RK. Rono appears very disconnected but speaks the truth. Here I don’t want virat to be emotional. I want him to be as disconnected as he was when they confronted when sai was in hospital. He should carry the same feel.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

This is Rono RK discussion at cafe...Requested by some friends..

Rk is waiting alone at cafe..Rono comes

ROno : Bolo

RK : I am really sorry I bothered you

Rono : Bhumika wagairah dene ki zarurat nahi hai..Come to the point!

RK : What do I do now

ROno : What you should do, I would tell?

RK : If not you then you, listening to you only I am here today

ROno : Listening to me?

RK: I feel today, we should clearly clear things between us..And I want to ask something..What do you want? Why did I come to this house? Ofcourse I had no expectations from your brother..And surely I was not in love with other people of the family..Surely my parents place have no place for me is not the reason for me to stay here..What is in your mind Rono? Why do I have to go through this disrespect at your place? Why? You forgot everything...You have moved on..I am not able to

Rono: See RK , the times have changed, in one year.. I agree we had a relationship between us once(stops when coffee is served) And what I thought did not happen..And you also agreed for the marriage..

RK: I agreed, but the reason is very well known to you..

ROno: I dont want an argument there...(not looking at her making coffee), What has happened at the moment I am analyzing that...If you were married to someone else and not my brother, would you have this conversation with me even then?

RK : What has not happened, there is not point talking about that! The point is I am married to your brother..

ROno : You were already getting married RK.. Dont talk about events that way..if I turn out to be his brotehr, you have no rights to cheat my brother.

RK: ROno you cannot talk to me like that!!

Rono : I dont have a choice RK...Today my brother is misunderstanding me..He is not even talking to me..Just talking about our relationship. Talking about the relationship we had once. And if it continues, Dadabhai would leave our house...He herat us talking that night (RK stop him here)

RK : fine you are right..Absolutely correct..Now tell me why did you tell Emon while getting married to her that you are committed to some one else? That you would not be able to love her ever..You said this right...You said this? Or I am lying..

Rono : I told you what was in my heart then, That happened a year back , When I married EMon, I did not like her/love her..

RK: Then

Rono : In this one year time has changed..situation has changed..

RK: you also changed.

ROno : Yes I did.. The duration I knew you, I have spend much more than that with Emon..I dont know If I am right or wrong.. But I can say this confidently...that I love Emon..

RK: Its not like you tell me and I would know it (tear dripping)..I already know it..But you dont know one thing Rono.. Emon does not love you...

RONO : That I already told you.. When you constantly kept asking did I not tell you, on anniversary day I stopped having any expectations from my life..

RK: Then why do you keep doing Emon EMon...

Rono : How can I not do Emon Emon..Legally she is my wife...She is my responsibility....I have certain degree of duty towards her..and loving is bigger than even taking responsibility...LOve is beyond everything..I dont feel good telling you this and I know you are not able to forget me RK..

RK : I am not able to...I am not at all able to forget you..See how my life has scattered..Nothing is right...

Rono : I would suggest RK, please try to mend your life...Dadabhai is 1000 times better man than me...and to be a wife of that kind of a man is a result of someone's luck..

RK : Are you trying to console me?

Rono : No I am not.. Telling you the truth of life..Try to understand Dadabhai..Try to love him..and you would know one day, How lucky you are.. And you would come and tell me...Thankyou Rono...

RK: Stop it Rono...I am done with all my talks with you..Infact I done with all my talks with you for life...And do know one thing, If I have to stay with your brother, I wont stay because of love, but because of force..he cannot take your place...In my life love does not come again and again.. (start crying here badly) I cant fall in love again and again Rono.. I am sorry.. I can love my whole life, only one man..and that's you Rono... My whole life I will just love you Rono...

Rono : I will request you one thing...Dont stay with Dadabhai without love, dont hurt him...Thats right, it takes time to fall in love and thats why I say, be positive.. keep your mind open...dont deny things like that..Dadabhai is a sensible man...tell him everything clearly and openly..I am sure Dadabhai would understand for sure..

Meanwhile EMon is going back with her friends, lost in her own world...They decide to have a cup of coffe at a cafe..

Emon : I cant come for coffee, I have to go home... My husband is unwell..understand,,,

Friend: Arey just a cup of coffee...and the coffee shop is here only

Emon: No no, I cant disturb him by roaming here and there at this time...

EMon (to herself) : He has not even contacted me today on phone..I think he is truly very angry on me..This time he felt really insulted..I should not have done that..But what would I have done anyway..Why did we have to celebrate a fak day..and he gave me a (mithya) surprise..A single day have not been true with him in its real sense..I have really good memories with him but the truth of both our lives are different...He in his hearts of heart loves RK didi..

Friend : Come for coffee today..

EMon : No yaar I cant, My husband is unwell..

Friend : Then why did you even come today..She says because there are so many people at home (thinks even RK didi is there and good I am keeping away, the more I stay away the more I can make my heart strong..) Friend pull her in..

In the cafe

ROno : Please Rk DOnt behave this way..I am not able to take it..

RK: You dont love be a bit no? Do you have any feelings, any love, anything at all for me? I am nothing to you...and to know this it hurts Rono..It hurts..I am shatterd..I have loved only one man in life and thats you...I am wiating for you..If something changes..If something happens..Just tell me I will wait..If not in this life, next life..just tell me and in the wait of my next birth.. I will spend my whole life.. But you are not even saying this..You love only EMon..WHy did you change.. Men change ..You also changed..Why ROno..

ROno places his hand on her hand..

ROno : See EK i still treat you as my friend..To see you like this I feel really bad, but what should I do?I wish I can help you, but I dont have anything to offer you..

And Here enters EMon with her friends...sees their hand in hand..The moment ROno sees her, removed his hand.

Emon's friends: What EMon you kept saying your husband is unwell and he is having coffee here with someone else..

EMon says nothing..both RK and ROno look at her.. ROno removes his hand and both ROno and RK get up..

Emon's friend : Who is she..Emon your husband is out with a woman having coffee and you had no clue..and the laugh..EMon asks them to keep quite..

ROno asks for bill..Emon friends say to him, you were having coffee with friend now ask him for coffee treat...

ROno : SUre you have coffee, I will pay the bills but I cant stay..

EMon's friend : You were having coffee peacefully , and the moment Emon came you are leaving..What is this Emon, osbtruct your husband..

EMon : How am I supposed to obstuct him, when he is already obstructed..(Rk ROno look at her)

Friends move away..

RK : I had something really important to talk to him , so we came here for that..

Emon : Please dont give me any explanation RK didi...I dont want any explanation from you..I wont stay like this here..wont disturb you guys here.. I am leaving for home..

RK : We were also leaving , just after the billing..

Emon : Why is it needed..You can sit here..All your imprtant talks are over now?

Rono to RK: I have to leave RK, I will have to leave for my office..

stops back and to EMON : my event, ellaboration yours.. You can explain yourself about this incident in anyway you want in your head..but please dont get Dadabhai in your explanation of yours..I dont want you to go and say anything to Dadabhai..Because listening to your explanation...Dadabhai would open his mouth infront of the whole society..And the society will come up with different meanings of this and I dont want that.. I want the society to see RK and Dadabhai together..See you..

(Leaves)

And then Rk leaves

I was in a hurry..Ignore mistakes..

Even though heart breaking, the writing and dialogues are beautiful in here!

@green: I hope none of these parts are edited, because without them misinterpretations between the characters or the audience would only increase. I hope the conclusion to this conversation, in terms of words in no way is a takeaway for P to think she has a chance atleast from Virat's side and his words.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

This is Rono RK discussion at cafe...Requested by some friends..

Rk is waiting alone at cafe..Rono comes

ROno : Bolo

RK : I am really sorry I bothered you

Rono : Bhumika wagairah dene ki zarurat nahi hai..Come to the point!

RK : What do I do now

ROno : What you should do, I would tell?

RK : If not you then you, listening to you only I am here today

ROno : Listening to me?

RK: I feel today, we should clearly clear things between us..And I want to ask something..What do you want? Why did I come to this house? Ofcourse I had no expectations from your brother..And surely I was not in love with other people of the family..Surely my parents place have no place for me is not the reason for me to stay here..What is in your mind Rono? Why do I have to go through this disrespect at your place? Why? You forgot everything...You have moved on..I am not able to

Rono: See RK , the times have changed, in one year.. I agree we had a relationship between us once(stops when coffee is served) And what I thought did not happen..And you also agreed for the marriage..

RK: I agreed, but the reason is very well known to you..

ROno: I dont want an argument there...(not looking at her making coffee), What has happened at the moment I am analyzing that...If you were married to someone else and not my brother, would you have this conversation with me even then?

RK : What has not happened, there is not point talking about that! The point is I am married to your brother..

ROno : You were already getting married RK.. Dont talk about events that way..if I turn out to be his brotehr, you have no rights to cheat my brother.

RK: ROno you cannot talk to me like that!!

Rono : I dont have a choice RK...Today my brother is misunderstanding me..He is not even talking to me..Just talking about our relationship. Talking about the relationship we had once. And if it continues, Dadabhai would leave our house...He herat us talking that night (RK stop him here)

RK : fine you are right..Absolutely correct..Now tell me why did you tell Emon while getting married to her that you are committed to some one else? That you would not be able to love her ever..You said this right...You said this? Or I am lying..

Rono : I told you what was in my heart then, That happened a year back , When I married EMon, I did not like her/love her..

RK: Then

Rono : In this one year time has changed..situation has changed..

RK: you also changed.

ROno : Yes I did.. The duration I knew you, I have spend much more than that with Emon..I dont know If I am right or wrong.. But I can say this confidently...that I love Emon..

RK: Its not like you tell me and I would know it (tear dripping)..I already know it..But you dont know one thing Rono.. Emon does not love you...

RONO : That I already told you.. When you constantly kept asking did I not tell you, on anniversary day I stopped having any expectations from my life..

RK: Then why do you keep doing Emon EMon...

Rono : How can I not do Emon Emon..Legally she is my wife...She is my responsibility....I have certain degree of duty towards her..and loving is bigger than even taking responsibility...LOve is beyond everything..I dont feel good telling you this and I know you are not able to forget me RK..

RK : I am not able to...I am not at all able to forget you..See how my life has scattered..Nothing is right...

Rono : I would suggest RK, please try to mend your life...Dadabhai is 1000 times better man than me...and to be a wife of that kind of a man is a result of someone's luck..

RK : Are you trying to console me?

Rono : No I am not.. Telling you the truth of life..Try to understand Dadabhai..Try to love him..and you would know one day, How lucky you are.. And you would come and tell me...Thankyou Rono...

RK: Stop it Rono...I am done with all my talks with you..Infact I done with all my talks with you for life...And do know one thing, If I have to stay with your brother, I wont stay because of love, but because of force..he cannot take your place...In my life love does not come again and again.. (start crying here badly) I cant fall in love again and again Rono.. I am sorry.. I can love my whole life, only one man..and that's you Rono... My whole life I will just love you Rono...

Rono : I will request you one thing...Dont stay with Dadabhai without love, dont hurt him...Thats right, it takes time to fall in love and thats why I say, be positive.. keep your mind open...dont deny things like that..Dadabhai is a sensible man...tell him everything clearly and openly..I am sure Dadabhai would understand for sure..

Meanwhile EMon is going back with her friends, lost in her own world...They decide to have a cup of coffe at a cafe..

Emon : I cant come for coffee, I have to go home... My husband is unwell..understand,,,

Friend: Arey just a cup of coffee...and the coffee shop is here only

Emon: No no, I cant disturb him by roaming here and there at this time...

EMon (to herself) : He has not even contacted me today on phone..I think he is truly very angry on me..This time he felt really insulted..I should not have done that..But what would I have done anyway..Why did we have to celebrate a fak day..and he gave me a (mithya) surprise..A single day have not been true with him in its real sense..I have really good memories with him but the truth of both our lives are different...He in his hearts of heart loves RK didi..

Friend : Come for coffee today..

EMon : No yaar I cant, My husband is unwell..

Friend : Then why did you even come today..She says because there are so many people at home (thinks even RK didi is there and good I am keeping away, the more I stay away the more I can make my heart strong..) Friend pull her in..

In the cafe

ROno : Please Rk DOnt behave this way..I am not able to take it..

RK: You dont love be a bit no? Do you have any feelings, any love, anything at all for me? I am nothing to you...and to know this it hurts Rono..It hurts..I am shatterd..I have loved only one man in life and thats you...I am wiating for you..If something changes..If something happens..Just tell me I will wait..If not in this life, next life..just tell me and in the wait of my next birth.. I will spend my whole life.. But you are not even saying this..You love only EMon..WHy did you change.. Men change ..You also changed..Why ROno..

ROno places his hand on her hand..

ROno : See EK i still treat you as my friend..To see you like this I feel really bad, but what should I do?I wish I can help you, but I dont have anything to offer you..

And Here enters EMon with her friends...sees their hand in hand..The moment ROno sees her, removed his hand.

Emon's friends: What EMon you kept saying your husband is unwell and he is having coffee here with someone else..

EMon says nothing..both RK and ROno look at her.. ROno removes his hand and both ROno and RK get up..

Emon's friend : Who is she..Emon your husband is out with a woman having coffee and you had no clue..and the laugh..EMon asks them to keep quite..

ROno asks for bill..Emon friends say to him, you were having coffee with friend now ask him for coffee treat...

ROno : SUre you have coffee, I will pay the bills but I cant stay..

EMon's friend : You were having coffee peacefully , and the moment Emon came you are leaving..What is this Emon, osbtruct your husband..

EMon : How am I supposed to obstuct him, when he is already obstructed..(Rk ROno look at her)

Friends move away..

RK : I had something really important to talk to him , so we came here for that..

Emon : Please dont give me any explanation RK didi...I dont want any explanation from you..I wont stay like this here..wont disturb you guys here.. I am leaving for home..

RK : We were also leaving , just after the billing..

Emon : Why is it needed..You can sit here..All your imprtant talks are over now?

Rono to RK: I have to leave RK, I will have to leave for my office..

stops back and to EMON : my event, ellaboration yours.. You can explain yourself about this incident in anyway you want in your head..but please dont get Dadabhai in your explanation of yours..I dont want you to go and say anything to Dadabhai..Because listening to your explanation...Dadabhai would open his mouth infront of the whole society..And the society will come up with different meanings of this and I dont want that.. I want the society to see RK and Dadabhai together..See you..

(Leaves)

And then Rk leaves

I was in a hurry..Ignore mistakes..

Thank you Asmi ❤️

I want a better dialogue from Virat to Sai at the end

Originally posted by: tptwi

Yaar my main worry is that they will cut it short neilsha will save their crappy writing as usual

Bhoot story bhi cut short kiya tha inn logo ne. Yaha aisa kuch na ho🤞🤞🤞🤞

Asmi when sai tends to him the conversation was very good right?! She says she is everything because of him and she made mistakes with him because she considers him as close to her as her aaba and stops at “you are my..” . I don’t understand the extract dialogues but it went in those lines.

Gadha forgets everything the next morning . Normal veeru would have picked it up from the kiss the next morning 😅

Originally posted by: sadiltl

yes the only time I felt bad for RK. Rono appears very disconnected but speaks the truth. Here I don’t want virat to be emotional. I want him to be as disconnected as he was when they confronted when sai was in hospital. He should carry the same feel.

Vankar’s creativity will surely make Virat cry

Originally posted by: sadiltl

yes the only time I felt bad for RK. Rono appears very disconnected but speaks the truth. Here I don’t want virat to be emotional. I want him to be as disconnected as he was when they confronted when sai was in hospital. He should carry the same feel.

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Writers should just copy and execute sairats confrontations letter to letter, scene to scene. KD is top notch (except Ofcourse man handling ones). the pain and love for each other comes out beautifully in the dialogues and expressions.

Rest they can use their creativity is my honest opinion.

not even once I felt the direction was lagging or disconnected, no body doubles nor inconsistencies in the setting of sairats room. Here the room changes every episode. It puts off the feel. Seriously. It screams mediocrity. Why can’t they handle basics properly

Oh I so agree there..So so agree there..thats why I feel LEENA understood her characters..the manhandling they got in was for drama purpose....CVs are hell bent are destroying Leena's write up and their favouritism towards and actor..

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Writers should just copy and execute sairats confrontations letter to letter, scene to scene. KD is top notch (except Ofcourse man handling ones). the pain and love for each other comes out beautifully in the dialogues and expressions.

Rest they can use their creativity is my honest opinion.

not even once I felt the direction was lagging or disconnected, no body doubles nor inconsistencies in the setting of sairats room. Here the room changes every episode. It puts off the feel. Seriously. It screams mediocrity. Why can’t they handle basics properly

In short Ghum has lost its production value long back. The whole team care a damn about it since they are getting it without much inputs.. Aish's latest interview was the proof that how arrogant they are 🤢

She is actually the voice of this PH that no matter what we say they don't care 👎🏼

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Asmi when sai tends to him the conversation was very good right?! She says she is everything because of him and she made mistakes with him because she considers him as close to her as her aaba and stops at “you are my..” . I don’t understand the extract dialogues but it went in those lines.

Gadha forgets everything the next morning . Normal veeru would have picked it up from the kiss the next morning 😅

thats why I say..IT was ROno's ego...When Emon leaves finally with Bhanu ,,when Samrat Mohit Aayi everybody is worried and Mohit tries to explain him that its not about anniversary , she hd a lot in her heart unsaid things...he says dont forget how she behaved with me...you are my brother..not hers..and leaves for DIG office for transfer without caring where she is..

The reason I dont think they would show the kiss, because Virat is perceptive..