OS: God's plan is better than mine! (Updated) - Page 4

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Wow...wow.......superb....beautiful 😍 .....

You have very beautifully written Sai's fears and insecurities which are stopping her from acknowledging his actions......

I really liked the part where he first ran to the room to meet her without thinking about others in house which is so unlike of virat....

Kaash...they would show something like this in show....but no..they won't.....if they show this then there won't be separation.....and our CV's want it.......

And considering present scenario of their relationship in serial.......separation is important to push them to acknowledge their own feelings about the other......

Keep writing more.......

@Bold. Yes I did ponder few minutes whether Virat would do that. But in my story I wanted to build up the restlessness to the point that they behave differently from their usual nature. In the ending also, Virat does all the talking and Sai just observes...so unlike them. I felt that is what needed from both of them. So the running around, anxiousness is needed for him to come out of his comfort zone. I am not a psychologist but little things i gathered from my own experience and others.

But a valid point to be noted.

Originally posted by: sadiltl

@Bold. Yes I did ponder few minutes whether Virat would do that. But in my story I wanted to build up the restlessness to the point that they behave differently from their usual nature. In the ending also, Virat does all the talking and Sai just observes...so unlike them. I felt that is what needed from both of them. So the running around, anxiousness is needed for him to come out of his comfort zone. I am not a psychologist but little things i gathered from my own experience and others.

But a valid point to be noted.

Haa...yes....I did not notice earlier......

Yes you are true.... restlessness, anxiousness and longing will push them to come out their comfort zone and express themselves.....

Hey you have written beautifully can you plz send me also the next part