OS: God's plan is better than mine! (Updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Finally learnt to update the title!

Hope you Enjoy reading and provide feedback 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aww...this was SO beautiful! I can just picture Sairat hugging. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ Thank you for such a sweet, beautiful update! I loved Sais conversation with her aabaa too. So honest!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Absolutely loved the whole OS so much.smiley31smiley42smiley27. I know this is not happening in the show but totally fallen in love with your piece. Can't wait for the hug to happen on-screen.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice part. Hug. Both missed eachother. If pakhi sow there hug she will br j

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow...wow.......superb....beautiful 😍 .....

You have very beautifully written Sai's fears and insecurities which are stopping her from acknowledging his actions......

I really liked the part where he first ran to the room to meet her without thinking about others in house which is so unlike of virat....

Kaash...they would show something like this in show....but no..they won't.....if they show this then there won't be separation.....and our CV's want it.......

And considering present scenario of their relationship in serial.......separation is important to push them to acknowledge their own feelings about the other......

Keep writing more.......

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow,how did I missed this. Absolutely love ❤

It was amazing.

Pls do write more.💕

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it. Awesome!


Loved how Sai missed Virat and how she thinks about her jealousy.


Nothing matters, she was in his shirt and he went running to his room ❤❤ and aaww the hug ❤❤


And about the jalebis served in ghum 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiltl

Finished the story but not sure how to update the topic to grab eyeballs. So tagging few people


Wow!! You have written this story so beautifully.

I loved the OS, both their POVs, how all he cared about when he came back home was to see her, not caring what his family thinks, just run to her, and how she was wearing her shirt, ran to hug him and their conversation at the end.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very beautiful piece.

I loved this one❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I don't know whether to laugh or cry; Its beautiful.I hope to see this kind of confession if /when it happens.

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