Well written episode but... (Spoiler alert)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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My take on episode:

I dont know if its because i saw the clip of the scene in KD and therefore I am being unfair or biased. But as much as the dialogues were all well written, infact probably better than the original , the scene lacked the intensity, intimacy i was hoping to see.

Neil-Ayesha still did a good job. But something was missing for me...i dont know why.

I really wish there was no interruption of the Sairat scene with UM/mohit/karishma. I ff'ed it anyway. It ruined the flow of the scene. I dont even know what they spoke coz i fast forwarded.

I loved the dialogue where virat exclaims that tum mere liye maayne rakhti ho and i am your family but apart from that all the other things didnt quite match up to my expectations. The episode felt very very rushed. They really need to show some tehraav. This was the perfect episode for a couple of eye locks..

I wish they had held each other's face instead of this "one finger" tear wiping. Infact as soon as virat said i am your family was the moment perfect moment for a hug.

All he did was hold one hand and then touch her head to give kasam that he won't behave harshly again.

I dont get the feeling of husband-wife, it feels like virat is trying to be her guardian/parent...

The budhiya ke baal moment was very sweet and a nice touch but again not romantic/intense enough.

We need to see that these 2 are starting to actually feel for each other.

I cant help but feel like off screen equations maybe impacting this. I hope not. I'd like to believe that actors can be professional

Maybe i am being unfair and i need to watxh the episode again without expectations, comparison and with a clear mind....

And Perhaps reading the more optimistic pov's of some forum members will make me relook at the episode and enjoy it more. But as an immediate reaction, i'm left with a sense of " it was good but could've been much better"....

I apologise if my slightly "negative " pov brings down people 's enthusiasm.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

My take on episode:

I dont know if its because i saw the clip of the scene in KD and therefore I am being unfair or biased. But as much as the dialogues were all well written, infact probably better than the original , the scene lacked the intensity, intimacy i was hoping to see.

Neil-Ayesha still did a good job. But something was missing for me...i dont know why.

I really wish there was no interruption of the Sairat scene with UM/mohit/karishma. I ff'ed it anyway. It ruined the flow of the scene. I dont even know what they spoke coz i fast forwarded.

I loved the dialogue where virat exclaims that tum mere liye maayne rakhti ho and i am your family but apart from that all the other things didnt quite match up to my expectations. The episode felt very very rushed. They really need to show some tehraav. This was the perfect episode for a couple of eye locks..

I wish they had held each other's face instead of this "one finger" tear wiping. Infact as soon as virat said i am your family was the moment perfect moment for a hug.

All he did was hold one hand and then touch her head to give kasam that he won't behave harshly again.

I dont get the feeling of husband-wife, it feels like virat is trying to be her guardian/parent...

The budhiya ke baal moment was very sweet and a nice touch but again not romantic/intense enough.

We need to see that these 2 are starting to actually feel for each other.

I cant help but feel like off screen equations maybe impacting this. I hope not. I'd like to believe that actors can be professional

Maybe i am being unfair and i need to watxh the episode again without expectations, comparison and with a clear mind....

And Perhaps reading the more optimistic pov's of some forum members will make me relook at the episode and enjoy it more. But as an immediate reaction, i'm left with a sense of " it was good but could've been much better"....

I apologise if my slightly "negative " pov brings down people 's enthusiasm.



Even i felt the same. I guess sumthing was a miss in the episode. I hav watched tamil version where he express out in a better way saying i was concerned fr ur safety, i wanted to spend time with u since i am fed up of criminals fr whole week. He says he was ok with dropping off her bt she didnt allow that also.

These certain things wud hav added more to scene.

The feeding scene was sweet bt i dont know why the sorry wasnt upto mark.

One more vaada of virat boy is here. I dont know whether it vl b maintained or not becoz sooner when he will throw her out of house in devi matter he wudnt even allow to eat food in other version. Bt lets see wat they vl do here.


Cuming to hugs i felt they arent in that stage where hugging is a reaction to them. They hav to cum a long way fr that.

Bt the way virat said consider me as ur family and u r importnt to me was heart breaking moment. Banda is realising his budding love fr her bt isnt sure abt his feelings. He needs time and a reality check then his love vl b out.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

My take on episode:

I dont know if its because i saw the clip of the scene in KD and therefore I am being unfair or biased. But as much as the dialogues were all well written, infact probably better than the original , the scene lacked the intensity, intimacy i was hoping to see.

Neil-Ayesha still did a good job. But something was missing for me...i dont know why.

I really wish there was no interruption of the Sairat scene with UM/mohit/karishma. I ff'ed it anyway. It ruined the flow of the scene. I dont even know what they spoke coz i fast forwarded.

I loved the dialogue where virat exclaims that tum mere liye maayne rakhti ho and i am your family but apart from that all the other things didnt quite match up to my expectations. The episode felt very very rushed. They really need to show some tehraav. This was the perfect episode for a couple of eye locks..

I wish they had held each other's face instead of this "one finger" tear wiping. Infact as soon as virat said i am your family was the moment perfect moment for a hug.

All he did was hold one hand and then touch her head to give kasam that he won't behave harshly again.

I dont get the feeling of husband-wife, it feels like virat is trying to be her guardian/parent...

The budhiya ke baal moment was very sweet and a nice touch but again not romantic/intense enough.

We need to see that these 2 are starting to actually feel for each other.

I cant help but feel like off screen equations maybe impacting this. I hope not. I'd like to believe that actors can be professional

Maybe i am being unfair and i need to watxh the episode again without expectations, comparison and with a clear mind....

And Perhaps reading the more optimistic pov's of some forum members will make me relook at the episode and enjoy it more. But as an immediate reaction, i'm left with a sense of " it was good but could've been much better"....

I apologise if my slightly "negative " pov brings down people 's enthusiasm.



First of all it was rushed. And the direction was lacking. Plus, I think they had to work around ayeshas injury so since there was lack of movement, the whole thing was still.

More than the intimacy, it was rushed. They could have dragged it to 2 episodes and still would have gotten the same good TRPS.

Did ayesha call this romance in the article ? 😂


I really hope they work on that because their chemistry is the only thing that holds all of our interests and if it’s going to be affected by offscreen dynamics it’s too stupid.


they could copy every bloody thing from the original why couldn’t they copy the cupping her face and wiping the tears part . That MUCH intimacy is allowed, offscreen or not, that’s not a big ask from the actors. Something is really off with the direction. Our forum members will do a better job at directing saiRat scenes


I really wish it was a Ekta or Gul show for romance part.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Don't worry. I expected a watered down version of the apology! I think it's better to keep expectations low. I thought Star is famous for creating great Jodis but here maybe because trps are high, they are not getting into it at this point.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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typical itv apology. real root cause ke bare mein to baat hi nahi kiye hain. na virat ne baat chedi na sai ne. all those brushed under the carpet. it was disappointing eisode for me.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This wasn't the case previously but nowadays somehow SaiRat's affection towards each other is not reachable to the viewer. Their fights are so real and like usual couple fights but when it comes to friendship, affection, tender love....they are not convincing. We can't expect to see romantic feelings at the moment but the slight closeness they keep displaying is not satisfying and enjoyable. Are the actors feeling any awkwardness due to certain relationship status?? or Is the creative team failing to bring in the required intensity for such scenes??

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chattering-Lory

This wasn't the case previously but nowadays somehow SaiRat's affection towards each other is not reachable to the viewer. Their fights are so real and like usual couple fights but when it comes to friendship, affection, tender love....they are not convincing. We can't expect to see romantic feelings at the moment but the slight closeness they keep displaying is not satisfying and enjoyable. Are the actors feeling any awkwardness due to certain relationship status?? or Is the creative team failing to bring in the required intensity for such scenes??

i really hope it’s not the offscreen dynamics. Maybe PP will be in the same room when they shoot. That will be awkward for anyone. Ayesha did say aish and her tease Neil during romantic scenes.


but I am more leaning towards the creative teams fault. I hope it is that because then they can correct it, if it’s the offscreen dynamics then it will be the same henceforth.


That one hand tear wiping scene makes me sooooo angry and annoyed. Good god, what a waste of chemistry between themZ

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I think honestly dialogues were very good but there was a little more intensity and intimacy needed. Hugging kissing nahi kar sakte abhi because they need more time but they could have stood closer, he could have held her shoulders or her face with both hands with tenderness.

The dialogues were pretty good ecept for few things that could've been added.

I liked Sai saying that this asli roop of yours which you showed in your anger is darawana. Thats the crux. Virats behavior scared Sai. More than anger she was hurt and scared to see the man she trusts behave this way.

And instead of ehsaan i wish Sai had used the word "bojh". Ehsaan toh shes being made to feel like virat is doing. I wish she had said- you should thank me because ab mein aapke upar bojh nahi banoongi and virat could've said "you are not a bojh!"

The lines from virat- mein dil se chahta tha ki tum chalo because mujhe tumhaare saath vakt bitana tha....And the "your sach different from my sach" mujhe pata hai ki mein tumhaare life mein koi maayne nahi rakhta but tum meri life mein bahut maayne rakhti ho. And please dont think pf me as your enemy, I'm your family! That was heart wrenching.

And the way Sai ssid- aise bewakufon ki tarah kyun ro rahe hai....aww!

The way she forgot her gussa and got concerned when virat said he skipped lunch. And asking why aai didnt bring him food and why he fought with pp.. she is SO innocent, so pure hearted.

I loved that little bit where Sai makes him promise he will never deny anyone good. And then holds his hand and says- aapne mujhe manane ka tareeka dhudh liya hai na.

This girl literally melts like butter on a hot plate.

But they really should have done this over 2 episodes with some tehraav, some eye locks and some more intensity/intimacy.

Ab jitna mila hai usi mein khush hona padega.

But i know neil-ayesha need to get some more screen time and some tehraav to give us the full chemistry that Sairat is capable of.

Edited by neeraja91 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes they can do a better job with romance but I think building it slowly will be if it sairat.. see they aren’t that close, plus if we see it is an arranged marriage of sorts a marriage of convenience so the realization of their love should be a little slow (not very)

I feel they are moving towards that! Aisa pyaar zindagi bhar yaad rehta hai, aur misalen kayam karta hai!


slow and steady wins the race.

I don’t think their is any awkwardness between Neil and Ayesha in doing romantic scenes. They share a great bond and it is evident from the last BTS of the game, you can’t fake that..

The CVs need to use their chemistry better and write more sairat scenes that is what is missing...



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Posted: 4 years ago
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https://www.instagram.com/p/CLk42iMHxAi/?igshid=1tub63vywexp7



aur yeh dekh kai kaun kahega chemistry nahi hai!!

Look at these two adorable cuties, this is the kind of love I want them to build.. dheere dheere kareeb aa rahein hain dono!!



the song suits them..


Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi, kismat pe aaye naa yakeen
Utar aayi jheel mein, jaise chaand utarta hai
Kabhi haule haule dheere se
Gunguni dhoop ki tarah se tarannum mein tum
Chhooke mujhe Guzri ho yoon
Dekhoon tumhe, Ya main sunoon
Tum ho sukoon, Tum ho junoon
Kyun pehle na Aayi tum?

How did you become mine, I can’t believe my good fortune

You came to my life.. like the moon descends into the lake sometimes

Slowly and graciously

Like the touch of warm sunrays

You touched me with melody so that

Should I look at you or should I listen to you

You are my solace, you are my passion

Why you didn’t you come earlier?

Main to ye sochta tha ke aaj kal
Upar wale ko fursat nahi
Phir bhi tumhe banake woh
Meri nazar mein chadh gaya
Rutbe mein woh aur badh gaya

I used to think that nowadays

God has no free time

But, having created you,

He has risen in my eyes

His status has become higher..


Badle raaste jharne aur nadi,
Badle deep ki tim tim
Chhede zindagi dhun koi nayi,
Badle barkha ki rim jhim
Badlengi rituyen adaa
Par main rahoongi sada
Usi tarah teri bahon mein bahen daalke
Har lamha Har pal

Roads, falls and river may change their course

Radiance of lamps may change

Life may initiate a new tune

Raindrops may hum a different note

Seasons will change their style

But, I will remain forever

In your embrace, like always..

Each moment each second


Zindagi sitar ho gayi,
Rimjhim malhaar ho gayi,
Mujhe aata nahi kismat pe apni yakeen, Kaise mujhko mili tum

Life has become like (melodious sound of) sitar

Like showers of Malhaar

I can’t believe how fortunate I am to have you in my life



Lyrics and meaning via bollymeaning



the song is just perfect


Edited by Svt611 - 4 years ago

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