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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
This is so beautifully written ❤️ Meera suspects Rangeela and he is helping her genuinely may be has fallen for the daring girl. Meera, has that soft corner for this mysterious guy. Superb update and Please update the next part soon, can't wait long for their nok jhonk.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Awesome update👏
I love the way you write😳
Aag dono taraf lagi hai😛
Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Nice update.
Your pairing choice is good. As a reader felt connected.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Ria 🤗
Brilliant update as expected

I am loving Rangeela and Meera .. 😳

But you stopped at such a cliffhanger 😡 update jaldi 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Amazing Work 😃
All the chapters are good 😃
You really write very well 😳
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Nice prologue
You write well and the plot is interesting.
Will read chapters and comment again,
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: romaila

Awesome update...and said before am loving your writing style and the detailed explanation on the emotion part👏

Acha what is Kund jao?😕 Ek baat bolo, u know Haryanvi?😲

This hide and seek, her running away from him and Him trying to protect her from malik k gunde is worth reading! Something I would love watching in the show but with a new girl in town-obviously!😳

Dono ko zara kopche mein thodi der aur rakhna...u know maal milne ka chances high hote hain😛

Next update soon 😎

Arey that Kund Jao Means... Jump... He is telling her to jump inside the gorge. 😆😆
New girl in town too mujhe bhi mangta...😆😆... pata nahin CVs itne meherbaan higey bhi yaa nahin...

Bechare do hatte katte insaan ko khopche mein kyun babdh rakhna chahti hain... Kabootar nahin hain woo...🤣

Thank You...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sawaira

This is so beautifully written ❤️ Meera suspects Rangeela and he is helping her genuinely may be has fallen for the daring girl. Meera, has that soft corner for this mysterious guy. Superb update and Please update the next part soon, can't wait long for their nok jhonk.


Thanku...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: burn-shine-live

Awesome update👏

I love the way you write😳
Aag dono taraf lagi hai😛
Update soon...

🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: BornAries

Ria 🤗
Brilliant update as expected

I am loving Rangeela and Meera .. 😳

But you stopped at such a cliffhanger 😡 update jaldi 🤣


Amar Malai Shona...Hugs!!🤗

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