
HERES THE PARAGRAPH!!!!!
The Absurd Story We Have Created:
Kakul was worried sick. She did not know who to call, so she decided to go see Samman. Bu then Nana said you can't. Luckily Sharrad was nice to Neha and finally she said "I love you" to him. But Kakul is thinking "Where is Cynthia?" because Cynthia told Sharrad that she is going to tell Samman about how evil Saxena is. That's why Kakul was crying for her baby. But she's been pregnant while its raining. She thinks her baby is running around. That's why people think "Why is he flying around?" Om Shankar, however, tried to tie the knot. But it was impossible to as Kakul interrupted being the Rona Dhona queen and being a big sacrificer!
The Absurd Story We Have Created With My Comments:
Kakul was worried sick. She did not know who to call, so she decided to go see Samman. (Samman of all people) But then Nana said you can't. (Haha! Good going Nana!) Luckily Sharrad was nice to Neha and finally she said "I love you" to him. (Well, at last! Never thought that was gonna happen) But Kakul is thinking "Where is Cynthia?" because Cynthia told Sharrad that she is going to tell Samman about how evil Saxena is. (So Samman doesn't already know? Is he dumb or what?!) That's why Kakul was crying for her baby. (You mean the one she's never gonna have?) But she's been pregnant while its raining. (In the rain? What?) She thinks her baby is running around. (Is she skitzophrenic?) That's why people think "Why is he flying around?" (Are they all skitzophrenic?) Om Shankar, however, tried to tie the knot. (Knot…hmmm…the schizophrenic knot?) But it was impossible to as Kakul interrupted being the Rona Dhona queen and being a big sacrificer! (I agree!)