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OS 6 Yeh Dil Hai Mushkil

Fabulous OS….amazingly written

so Maan does not relationships

well he only bonds with his dadima

of cos she wants Maan to find love and have a family

sad that he lost his family in his childhood

liked that Maan is thinking of his secretary

hmm she is on leave cos there is an alliance for her

as expected Maan was upset hearing about the alliance

agree with Adi that only Geet can handle Maan

Maan was lost in the past and when he met Geet for the first time

great that she was not scared of Maan

oh Maan and Geet have coffee together

sad that Geet's alliance is fixed

Maan was shocked

now her wedding is soon

upset that she resigned

not surprised that Maan was affected Geet's absence

its Geet's wedding day

at least Maan went

loved their past moments

good that Maan noticed that Geet was sad

Dev is so demanding

dismayed that the Handas gave in to his demands

nice that Maan confronted Geet

Gosh he is willing to stop the wedding if she wants

she agrees provided she finds the right man for him

and its him

glad that she knows he is for her

finally they got married

OS 7 School Diaries

Good OS… nicely written

so Maan and Geet are from opposite statuses

she is at this school cos of the quota system

well Geet is attracted to Maan

upset that Maan taunts Geet

of cos she was hurt with this

hmm so he also desires Geet

as expected Maan was angry as Geet's house won

Geet was indeed shattered seeing Maan getting initmate with a girl

alas Maan saw her

not surprised that he confronted Geet

she denies that she was jealous

Gosh he kissed her

liked his concern for Geet

intense dance

they are arguing while dancing

at least he was direct with her

glad she was upfront

she was amazed seeing his house

can understand why she wanted to leave

he again makes her angry

Geet's questions were justified

passionate moments

OS 8 Two Love Birds Lost in each other's arms

Superb OS… marvelously written

loved that Geet makes Maan's life beautiful and lively

well Maan recalls their first meeting

as expected dadi pesters Maan to get married

of cos he is disinterested

ha ha Maan had to take a bus to work

Gosh the coin to pay for the bus ticket fell into Geet's kurti

awkward situation

great that he wanted to apologised

his tension was justified

liked Maan's reaction when his eyes met hers

at least they met again at KC

oh she thought he was following

finally she gets to know he is her boss

their working together brought them closer

not surprised that they fell for each other

glad that Maan proposed

hmm she wants to hear those 3 words

ahh he teased her

pleased that Maan and dadima went to Geet's house to ask for her hand

they got married........

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@sly ans blameless

Maan is quite chubby in this one geet is one of the hotty

but she dates him for money lol when she herlself was no less richie

but she did fall for him eventually and was looking forward to be with him when everything fell apart

maan heard her convo with ron

then begins his revenge

maan returns back totally changed shocking everyone

here geet has been hoping for him all this while

finally geet is the girl maans parents got

maan forgives her and what a hot reunion

@dance to remember

such a sweet n cute one

maan wanted to learn dancing to impress sam so heads to studio

geet who secretly loves him gets to teach him

ending was the sweetest its geet with who maan wants all his dances

they are partners for lifetime

loved it❤️

@happy mother's day

concept is amazing

maaneet has lost their first baby and the way maan wished her mothers day was emotional

geet got a pregnancy test done but shebis afraid to see the result

maaneet gonto dargah to pray

and yepi geet is pregnant

this time she became mommy to a girl

pummi is funny

loved the reading this one

@yeh dil hai mushkil

awesome one

geet is maans perfect secretary and she is going to get married

maan is clearly lost without her

here dev who is a greedy man is chosen for geet

maan knows this so he tries to stop geet to marry him

but geet want maan to get her the person she wants and its maan

loved how maan hugs her n maan ki geet was superr

love the flow of the story

@two love birds lost in.....

sweet on

i can clearly guess who wrote it😉

maaneet meeting was different, i liked reading thia part

poor maan though

later geet accuses maan but shocked to know he is the MSK

no wondee they fought all the while falling in love

the purposal scene was cute too

did he say ily want another part for this one