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apologies for late comments on the OS!

OS 1 Ye Raatein Ye Mausam

Amazing OS.... wonderfully written

so Maan and Geet forced Geet to marry him

Maan's thoughts understandable

at least he knows everything is in their hands

well Maan's fiancée ditched him at the engagement

and Geet helped her leave with her lover

Maan was indeed angry

that's how he forcefully made Geet get engaged to him

great that dadima fixed their marriage

liked this confident, brave and sassy Geet

she was determined not to let Maan win

oh she married him to punish him

glad that Maan was impressed with Geet

hmm Maan is pulled towards Geet

Gosh Maan could not get Geet out of his mind

finally they talked

good that she confronted him about his actions

loved that he asked if she is happy

pleased with her response

she certainly bowled Maan over

nice that she also likes him

now they are both ready to explore their relationship

OS 2 Hold on to Me

Beautiful OS... fabulously written

those words "hold on to me...." takes Geet back to her past

sad that she managing everything alone

alas she cannot accept that he is not there with her

so Geet is a single mom

admire how she handled everything

but its indeed tough

she asked Maan to hold on to her and give her strength

well she saw Maan at a grocery store but thinks its her imagination

hmm that Maan felt that Geet was there

liked that he has not forgotten Geet

pleased that he knows that she is waiting and asking him to hold on to her

at least he refused to meet Sameera

hate Ruchi

angry that she sent Geet away and lied to Maan

good that Ruchi's husband shouted her

upset that she ruined Maan and Geet's lives

finally Maan and Geet meet

the world certainly stopped for them

of cos Geet ran away

as expected Maan went after her

Geet's restlessness was justified

wonderful that he is at her Geet's place

emotional moments....

her feelings well portrayed

nice that he assures her that he is there for her

though she denied that Advay was his, he knew better

Maan's anger seeing how she suffered was reasonable

now they are together

loved that he wants to introduce his wife and son to the world

Ruchi was taken aback

Gosh she blurted out what she did

Maan knows the truth

glad that Maan warned Ruchi and put her in her place

Geet naturally wants Maan to hold on to her

aww Maan will never let Geet go and hold on to her

@ye raatein ye mausam

superb one

geet helps her friend to escape but in turn gets engage with maan

glad geet didn't run away

and their convo at the end was amazing

both clearly are smitten by eachother

OS 3 Sly and Blameless

Wonderful OS... greatly written

sad that girls are attracted to Maan only cos his bank balance

hate that he is bullied

admire that he does not care, is his focused on his work and runs KC

hmm Maan was attracted and perhaps liked Geet

well she is noticed this

angry that Geet makes of fun

of cos she wants to date him cos of his money

as expected she gets his attention

dismayed that she gets some guys to bully him

liked how Maan handled them

Maan was amazed when she called him her boyfriend

not surprised with his question

but she assures him

Maan was indeed on cloud nine

oh his dad has issues with his weight

upset that she is using Maan for his money

well Ron was furious seeing Geet with Maan

he confronted her

alas Maan heard that her insulting him and that she was just using him

Maan's reaction and anger was reasonable

feeling for Maan

hmm so Maan made a place in her life

good that she got rid of Ron

great seeing a changed Geet

Gosh Maan has toned his body and is a hot handsome hunk

Geet was shocked

so he ignored Geet

but he still loves Geet

at least Geet helped Maan

Gosh the alliance for Maan is Geet

loved that she confessed and wants to marry him

however he tried to act indifferent

their marriage is fixed

passionate moments

OS Dance of Romance

Nice OS…. well written

so Maan wanted to learn how to dance to impress Sameera

well Geet is a good teacher

alas Maan is not a good dancer

admire her patience and his determination

of cos Geet has fallen in love with Maan

seems like Sam is not interested in Maan

liked that Geet wants Maan's happiness

she is happy to bask in those moments in his arms

as expected Sam turned Maan down for another date

sad that Maan is so into Sam that he cannot understand dancing should not matter

great that Maan mastered the new dance that Geet taught him

glad that Maan complimented Geet

not surprised that Sam was impressed

now Maan is no longer interested in Sam

loved that Maan finally realised his feelings for Geet

@hold on to me

simply amazing

geet along with her son advay living alone for 6 years hoping one day maan will come

she feels his presence all the whipe imaginings him everywhere holding on to him for past years

here same with maan he too has been holding on to geet unknown how his own his threatened geet to leave him forever

finally he sees geet on the fashion show n runs behind her

lovely reunion he knew advay was his also knows what his sis did, wants to give geet n hktheir son all respects

loved the ending totally ❤️✨

Loved all the one shots! Thanks to you guys for the efforts. Specially loved Hold on To me a lot & Happy Mother’s Day a lot coz they both made me emotional.

Shot 4, Such a sweet and cute one atlast maaneet became partners for lifetime lovely one

OS 5 Emotional OS…. beautifully written

adore the bond between Geet and her mom

sad that Geet lost her baby when she was 7 months pregnant

feeling for Geet

her thoughts well portrayed

her fears were reasonable

liked Maan's surprise, wish and gift for Geet

she was overwhelmed

Maan's curiosity seeing the letter from the hospital was justified

great that he spoke to Geet

he was naturally tensed and restless

glad that she opened up to Maan

so they offered a prayer and mannat at the dargah

Gosh Geet is pregnant

so happy for Maaneet

aww Geet had a cute baby girl

enjoyed the banter and teasing all round

lovely name....

hmm Maaneet love their baby girl so much

she has bought love and joy in their lives

she also healed them