MG FF Oh Saathi re.. thread 2 updt Epilogue pg 45 Apr 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

part 89

How can the baby sleep without seeing the end? How can Maan answer that one?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Part 90

Such a sweet update 💕

Love how geet has bonded with geet

I think she gets along with mansi so well b/c she is so childish herself 😆

And finally mansi gets to come to KM

& what a grand homecoming!!!

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

wow.............lovely update............


really......tara should understand.........lovely way geet is managing...........

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

maan bhi na shudega nahi........


lovely update..........


loved it...........

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

awesome.............


loved it very much...........


cant describe only

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Geet's actions might just have the needed impact on Tara.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Lovely part

Mansi and Geet’s bond is so unique

Cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Mansi finally made it home. What a grand welcome!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Part – 91

Next day…

Maneet are in their room with Mansi…

Geet: Maan, aap ko patha hai ki mera phet itna bada kyun hai?

Maan looks at Geet confused..

Geet: Mansi ko bathao Maan

Maan: kya bathaoon?

Geet: hare, hummare ghar me ek aur mehmaan aanewale haina, Mansi ke saath khelne

Maan: Geet, usko ye sab samajh mein nahi aayegi abhi

Geet: Mansi, yahan aao

Geet makes her touch her baby bump….

Geet: andar kya hai?

Mansi: kya hai?

Geet: andar cute baby hai, just like Mansi

Maan: Geet, how do you know it’s a girl?

Geet: Maan I was just saying baby, not girl baby

Maan: tum kahoge ki baby Mansi ke tarah hogi toh uska matlab kya hai Geet?

Geet: Maan, aap bhi uss warden ki tarah sawaal mat karo, humme koi problem nahi hai ki baby girl hai ya boy hai, haina Mansi?

Mansi: Mansi wants girl baby

Mansi is used to playing with Ritusa….

Geet: Maan, Mansi ko girl baby chahiye

Maan: Geet, baby koi toy nahi hai, jo chahe mil jaaye, tum usko bigaad rahi ho

Geet: aap na, apna gyaan aap ke paas hi rakho, Mansi, aap aao, baby se baat karo

Mansi: baby, baat karegi?

Geet: abhi nahi, par aap ke baat ko sunegi

Maan: sunegi? nahi, sunega

Geet: Maan ?

Maan: agar ladhka hotha toh?

Geet: aap ko kya problem hai? Aap ko boy chahiye kya?

Maan: meinne aaise kahan bola?

Geet: phir ye aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Mansi ko bathana hai ki boy bhi ho sakta hai

Geet: Maan, jab baby bahar aayega toh phir Mansi apne aap samajh jayegi, ya phir tab aap usko samjhaana, abhi se kyun pareshaan hothe ho?

Maan: toh tum log ko jo bhi karna hai karo, mein baat nahi karoonga

Geet: Mansi, dekho papa naraz ho gaye, aap bade hoke aaisa nahi karna, baby, aap bhi, aap mama ki tarah achche bache banna

Mansi: baby, baby

Mansi also wants to talk to the baby…

Geet: haan, hum baby ke saath baat karte hai

Mansi: hi baby, I’m Mansi, what’s your name?

Geet: woh baby bahar aake bathayegi, ab aap isko rhymes sunao koi

Mansi sings a rhymes…

Geet: baby ko bahut pasand aaya, baby is happy

Geet then looks at Maan…

Geet: Maan, aap bhi baat karo na

Mansi: papa, papa aao

Mansi catches Maan’s hand and tries to pull him…

Maan: ok, baby, how are you?

Geet laughs….

Geet: Maan, baby answer kaise karegi?

Mansi too laughs….

Maan: baby, ye Mansi hai, aur ye papa hai, aur ye kaun hai? Mansi, aap bathao baby ko ki ye kaun hai

Maan points to Geet…

Mansi: Geet

Maan: aaise nahi beta, dekho mein papa hoon aur ye mama hai, mama bolo aap

Mansi looks at Geet quietly…

Maan: baby mama ko naam lekhe nahi bhulayegi, baby mama hi bhulayegi, toh Mansi darling bhi kaise bhulayegi?

Geet: Maan, itni bhi kya jaldhi hai?

Maan: nahi Geet, ab Mansi bhi badi ho gayi hai, uski baby bhi aanewali hai, haina Mansi?

Mansi: haan

Maan: toh aap baby ko bathao ki mama ko kaise bhulathe?

Mansi: mama

Maan: very good Mansi, aap sach mein bade ho gaye ho

Geet is in tears…

She pulls Mansi and hugs her…

Maan hugs them both… family hug….

That afternoon….

Maan goes out to meet the lawyer… it’s very urgent, else Maan wouldn’t leave his daughter even for a moment, he has got only these weekends to spend with her…

But Geet is here and Mansi is nowadays more eager to play with Geet…

Geet comes up with all this interesting games while Maan is boring…

Moreover Geet becomes a kid while she is with Mansi, or Geet is a bigger kid if you have to say in other words….

Maan is not much bothered for Mansi has got her favorite company…

Geet and Mansi are bored watching TV…

Maan has strictly warned Geet that no more physical games, specially when Maan is not around, for he is scared that Geet would be very careless…

Mansi: Geet, game

Geet hesitates….

Geet: hum aap ka favorite cartoon dekhte hai

Mansi: nahi, godha game

Geet: par aapka godha toh bahar gaye hai

Mansi: Geet godha

Mansi wants Geet to become the godha…

Geet kaise godha banegi…

But Geet can’t disappoint Mansi…

Geet: Mansi, hum naye game khelte hai

Mansi is excited….

Geet: hide and seek

Mansi doesn’t know what that is…

Geet explains her…

Geet shows her baby bump…

Geet: ab baby chupega, aaise

Geet covers herself with the quilt.

Mansi is eagerly watching her…

Geet: Mansi, baby kahan hai?

Mansi looks at her confused…

Geet: baby, aap kahan ho?

Geet pretends to look around..

Then she slowly lifts the quilt and peeps…

Geet: hare, baby yahan hai

Mansi laughs seeing Geet’s expressions….

Geet: ab Mansi darling chup jayenge, ready?

Mansi: haan

Geet pretends to close her eyes…

Geet: ek, do ….

Mansi sneaks inside the quilt alongside Geet…

Geet: dus, Mansi kahan hai?

Mansi couldn’t control her laughter…

Geet: baby, aao ne Mansi darling ko dekha?

Geet acts as if baby is answering her…

Geet: achcha, ye baat hai, toh Mansi aap ke saath hai

Geet uncovers the quilt and finds Mansi….

Geet: hare, aap yahan ho?

Mansi: haan

Geet: ab meri bari, aap aankh band karo

Mansi closes her eyes with her hands but is seeing thru her fingers…

Geet: Mansi aap aasakte ho

Geet is hiding behind the screen…

Mansi directly comes and finds Geet….

Geet: wah wah, aap bahut samajhdar ho, mama ki tarah

Geet: chalo, aap ka turn

Mansi goes and hides behind the couch…

Geet pretends to search for a while and then finds her…

Its Geet’s turn now…

Geet slowly goes to the washroom and hides behind the door… .

Geet waits for a while and then comes out herself to help Mansi…

But Mansi is not there..

Geet: Mansi, aap chup gaye ho dubara? Humne socha aap humme dhoondh rahe honge

Geet: Mansi kahan hai?

Geet looks around… behind the door, under the bed, under the table…

But Mansi is not there…

Geet panics…

Geet goes down and asks Dadi if Mansi came down…

But no one saw Mansi…

Geet gets really worried… she remembers Maan’s warnings…

Maan was concerned about Geet’s safety and now Mansi is missing…

Geet alerts all the servants and ask them to go find Mansi before Maan comes…

They all run in and around the house and search the whole neighborhood….

Geet too goes out to look for Mansi…

One neighbor informs his daughter who is a police officer… he asks her to help poor Geet who is pregnant…

That officer calls her team and the news spreads to the department too…

Maan comes and he is furious…

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ohh where is mansi , hope she is fine

Waiting to see how maan react update soon

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