JUNOON - Pyaar ka... updt Part 100 on pg 148 Jun 26 - Page 70

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Part 59

Intense update..... greatly written

Well Maan pretends that she does not exist for him

sad that Geet has destroyed KC

of cos Maan is worried not seeing Geet at KC

so he gets to know through Adi where Geet went

Maan is angry and concerned

Seems like Geet did not make a wise decision

how can she think of giving her KC shares to Rahul

she is making things worst

glad Maan arrived there

he is shocked hearing what Geet said

liked that Maan is determined to make the business a success

as expected Rahul wants Geet

good that Maan pushes Rahul

Geet assumes Maan cos she went to meet Rahul

Maan's thoughts are understandable

update soon

Part 59

Interesting and Dangerous Too

Geet now meets up with Rahul

and Maan finds this out through Adi

actually I'm glad that Maan came and took Geet away

otherwise this Rahul could get dangerous

Maan is angry with Geet but I think now he is more hurt by her actions

hope they can at least talk and sort out some issues

Part – 60

Maan drives so fast that Geet doesn’t utter a word in fear…

They are back at KC….

Maan stops the car in front of the gate, he quickly gets down, gives the keys to the security to park the car and he just walks in while Geet keeps watching him from the car…

The security is confused… he looks at the car and Geet who is sitting there in silence…

Geet then gets down and goes inside….

Whatever it may be, Maan doesn’t want this to happen again..

However hard he tries he can’t just stop himself when he gets to know that this stupid girl is in some kind of trouble….

He wants to make sure that this ends here, he can’t continue this….

He would be happy if she disappears from his life like some magic…

He just prays for some kind of peace, an escape from this self imposed punishment, yes, something that was his lifeline, his insane love for her looks like a punishment now..

Maan goes to his cabin…

Geet follows him… she enters in without waiting for his permission….

She has always took her own liberties when it comes to Maan…

Maan can’t do anything about that….

Maan gets irritated….

Why is she following him? Can’t she just give him a break?

Maan calls Adi…. He doesn’t want to have any conversation with her…

Maan: Adi, kahan mar gaye ho? Andar aao

Adi is shocked… he has been actually hiding from Maan these days.. now Maan himself is calling Adi… Adi has to face his destiny… there’s no escape it seems…

Adi comes and knocks…

Geet: aap aaise usko kaise chod skate? Uss ko aaise jeetne nahi de sakte hum, ye hummara project hai

Maan: come in Adi

Maan shouts…

Adi would have preferred to run away from there…

But he had to go in to help Geet… Adi knows that Maan is really mad at Geet….

Geet samajhthi kyun nahi ki aaise waqt pe Maan ko samna karna achcha idea nahi hai…

Adi gets in…

Maan: Adiii, tum kya samajh ke ye sab kar rahe ho? You people never learn from your experiences, phir se wahi galti kar the jaathe ho, na jaane kab akal aayega?

Adi doesn’t know what Maan is talking about…

Adi: sir, meine kya kiya?

Maan: kya kiya? Why do you have to keep going to that Rahul always?

Adi: sir, he doesn’t deserve that project, it’s ours, we can’t let him win like this

Maan: Adi, you know what? Why don’t you understand a simple fact? That Rahul didn’t win this time, I lost, Rahul jeeta nahi, mein har gaya hoon

Adi: par kya farak hai sir? donno baat ek hi hai, jaise bhi usko jeetne nahi de sakte

Maan: ye uski jeet nahi hai, ye meri har hai, mein iss bar apne logon se hi har gaya, mein nahi jaantha tha ki mere hi log mujhe hi trust nahi karthe, mein bhi kitna stupid tha ki meine socha ki koi mera apna hai jab aaisa koi nahi hai, koi mera apna nahi hai yahan

Maan is only talking about Geet… but Adi knows that even he didn’t trust Maan, of he did, he wouldn’t have believed Geet and helped her…

So, It includes Adi too…

Adi: I’m sorry sir, ho sake toh mujhe maaf kijiye

Maan: Adi, you can go now

Maan hints that he has no business with Geet now…

Geet leaves for she too can’t see him being hurt because of her, she had given him enough trouble, now she has to make sure that whatever she does, doesn’t create more trouble for him…

She knows that it was her fault to go back to that Rahul…

She has failed because she took the shortcuts, now she is going to face it directly, no more shortcuts….

Geet vows to confront Maan only after accomplishing her mission to get back the project somehow…

Moreover he turns mad when he comes face to face with her, while he is trying hard to control his emotions, when Geet goes in front of him, it triggers his anger back and he goes back to his sulking again…

Geet should give him a break so that he could overcome this situation on his own…

Geet will take this time to find a solution for the company’s problem…

From the next day Geet makes sure that she never meets Maan, even by mistake, she is confined to her cabin where Maan would never step in, she calls Adi and Pinky for her help and even has her lunch inside the cabin itself…

Maan is in a way relieved that she has stopped running around that Rahul to beg for help, thinking that she would reverse what she did…

But even now she doesn’t understand Maan, he is not hurt because of the loss at KC, but he is hurt because she doubted his pure love for her..

She thought he did everything to get to her somehow…

How could she think like that?

That’s what is bothering him and will keep eating him further for he knows that the damage is not temporary as Geet might think, but it’s permanent, there is no way he could get over this…

Geet goes to meet Adi and Pinky….

Geet: Adi sir, aap ko kuch patha chala?

Adi: nahi Geet, but I’m on it, jaldh hi kuch patha chal jayega, I too believe that there is something that is wrong

Pinky: Geet, tum ne kuch socha kya?

Geet: mujhe patha nahi ab hum kya karein?

Pinky: ye loh, isse kaoo, tabhi dimag teek se kaam karega

Pinky offers her samosas….

Geet: tujhe na, kissi bhi tarah ki koi bhi matlab nahi seva khane ki

Adi: Pinky, ye kya hai? Don’t you understand how serious this is?

Geet: kash mein bhi aaise hothi? Par nahi, mujhe toh apne hi logon ko shak karna hai aur unko hurt karna hai

Adi: Geet, don’t think too much about it, meine bhi wahi galti kiya hai, aaisa galtiyan ho jaatha hai kabhi kabhi

Geet: nahi Adi sir, aap nahi jaanthe ki meine sirf galti hi nahi par bahut bada guna kiya hai

Adi: aaise kuch nahi hai, hum sab sambalenge

Geet: aur yahan kya ho raha hai? Maan bahut pareshan dikhte hai, aur aaj bhi office aagaye? Zaroor koi badi problem hogi, what’s it Adi sir?

Adi fumbles..: ha ha ha ha ha, it’s nothing, aap kamakaam pareshaan ho rahe ho

Geet: Adi sir, aap mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho, Pinky tu batha

Pinky stuffs her mouth with the samosas immediately…

Pinky: hmm hmmm

Geet: Adi sir, mujhe shak tha ki zaroor kuch gadbad hai, issiliye mein yahan aayi hoon, aap bathao toh hum kuch kar sakte

Adi: woh lenders are pressuring Maan sir to clear the debts immediately

Geet: aaisa kaise ho sakta? We must be paying the interests

Adi: but they have lost trust in our business after we lost that tender

Geet: ab Maan kya karenge?

Adi: Maan sir issiliye thoda pareshaan hai, par tum fikar mat karo, Maan sir koi bhi problem ko asaani se manage kar sakte hai

Geet: nahi, lagta hai mujhe hi kuch karna padega, ye sab meri wajah se hi hua haina?

Adi: Geet, iss mein hum kya kar sakte?

Geet: mujhe kuch sochna hai, jaldhi

Adi: I think we should be thinking about that Rahul and let Maan sir handle the lenders

Geet: nahi Adi sir, this is more important now

Adi: we can’t do much about it Geet, let’s not mess this up too, then Maan sir wouldn’t spare us

Geet: aap ne sahi kaha, humme bas uss Rahul ke barein mein sochna chahiye, mujhe hi kuch karna padega

Maan just comes to see what’s going on and he hears Rahul’s name again… oh no, not again….

Part 60

Feisty Update

Maan angry on Geet and wants to stay away from her

as this is exactly what she wanted

but in this process Geet wants to help Maan get back

the tender he lost to Rahul

but Geet forgets this is a business deal now and Rahul will never

hand over what he has stolen from Maan and KC

Adi tells Geet that the lenders are putting pressure on Maan

I just hope Geet does not mess anything up further as this time

Maan will be furious with her

but now he hears her talking about Rahul

wonder what will happen next

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Part 60

Captivating update.... awesomely written

Maan's anger with Geet is justified

well Maan indirectly cautioned Geet when he shouted Adi

so Geet wants to get the project back

but she is cannot be that naïve that Rahul will just give back the project

of cos Maan wants Geet to stay away from him

sad that Geet fails to understand why Maan is angry

upset that Geet is making no effort to mend her relationship with Maan

seems like Geet has not learnt her lesson

hope she does not do further damage

oh Maan heard the convo and Rahul's name

what will he do?

update soon

Wonderful update great

Maan is angry on Geet he doesn't want to see her or meet her he try to convey his msg by talking to Adi he doesn't want to talk to Geet directly

Geet again want to help Maan seeing him tense Maan was coming to Geet cabin and heard Rahul name again

Nice update

Waiting for next update. . . .

How is Geet going to help? Maan needs money. The project is gone.

oh man is geet agian going to mess up with lenders??? hope not....just wish adi would advice her to just talk to maan...but then he does not know the extent of hurt which geet has caused maan....he is sad because she did not trust him or even love him....

if he knows geet loves him then he would forgive everything she has done....