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Part – 26

Maan is shocked to hear that…

He didn’t expect that….

Ye kya ho gaya hai?

Maan: what? Aaise nahi ho sakta, are you sure?

Geet: yes yes yes, ab kya hoga? Kal sab ko patha chal jayega, mein kaise jee sakti?

Maan suddenly catches hold of her and takes her out…

Geet: ye kya kar rahe ho? Chodo mujhe, aap mujhe bacha nahi sakte, aaj nahi toh kal mein chali jaoongi, aaise mein jee nahi sakti

Maan closes her mouth…

Maan: chup, bilkul chup, kabardar tumne aaise baat kabhi bhi kaha toh, tum mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakti, tum meri ho Geet, Maan ki Geet

Maan fills her forehead with vermilion….

Just then the whole family arrives..

Geet tries to wipe off the kumkum…

Maan stops her…

Maan: usski koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet, ab sab se chupa nahi sakte

Dadi: humse kya chupa rahe ho Maan bete?

Everyone was shocked to see Geet’s forehead… even Dadi… she didn’t expect that…

So Maan wanted to marry Geet and take her with him to US?

Maan was holding her hand tight… Geet couldn’t run even if she wished….

Sheetal was not ready to accept that…

Sheetal: Maan, ye kya hai?

Dadi: Maan bete, aap apne dadi se bathathe toh hum aapki madat karthe

Sheetal: aap thoda chup rahiye maaji, Maan, what’s this? Do you think Madan would like this?

Kiran: Geet, I never expected this from you, you have ruined our family name, achcha hua ye sab dekhne ke liye bhai zinda nahi hai

Maan: Geet ki koi galti nahi hai, mujhse hi galti ho gayi thi

Sheetal: kaise galti? This is not a marriage, this is a joke, you can’t run away, get married and come back with the expectations that you have successfully fooled everyone, I would never accept this marriage, never ever, Maan, let go off her hands, come with me

Maan: I can’t, I won’t, this is my promise to you Geet, and I want to do it in front of everyone, I would never let go off your hands, ever, come what may, I will be there with you till my death, ye MSK ka wada hai

Sheetal: stop this nonsense Maan

Maan: I’m really sorry mom, I hope everyone would forgive me, let me make one thing clear, whatever happened, I take the full responsibility, Geet has nothing to do with that, I repeat, Geet ki koi galti nahi thi, jo bhi hua mere wajhe se hua, jo galti meine ki, usse mein hi teek kar sakta, issiliye meine Geet se shadhi ki, she is my wife, and she is pregnant with our child

Another shocker… bas itna hi hai ya aur kuch bacha hai?

Annie: I knew it, Geet kuch din se bahut pareshan thi

Annie goes and hugs Geet…

Annie: don’t worry Geet, I’m with you, I know that it is all bhai’s fault, bhai itna bhi kya jaldi thi? I understand, aap US jaa rahe hai, par phir bhi ye sahi nahi hai

Dadi: Annie is right, I’m also with Geet, though Maan is my grandson, he has committed a mistake

Kiran: I’m scared about the mamajis’

Dadi: unki chinta chodo, ek tali mama hai aur ek bisthar mein, humme toh ab Madan aur Jagdish ki chinta hi ho rahi hai

Maan: kissi ko pareshan hone ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein sab se baat karoonga

Dadi: aap ko jo kuch bhi karna tha woh aap ne kardhiya, ab aap bas iss mamle ko kripiya hummare paas chod do Maan bete

Dadi is also not happy with what Maan did….

No woman would be proud of such an act, no matter who it is…. Haina?

Sheetal: I am also with you maaji, I’m afraid ye meri galti hai, I failed as a mother, I don’t know if I made a mistake by sending Maan to the boarding school

Kiran: Didi, Maan aaisa bacha nahi hai, sometimes things happen out of our control, but he has accepted his mistake

Maan: I’m sorry, but I said it’s a mistake because everyone would understand that way only, but I don’t believe that it is a mistake, I don’t mean just the wedding, but everything, I love Geet, and I don’t think I did anything wrong

Yes, Maan was right, he loved Geet and wanted a lifetime with her, it wasn’t lust, it was genuine love, but Maan was not happy with the unexpected happenings, Maan too knows that it’s not the right time, but something’s are out of our control.

Dadi: ab itna lecture dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, sab samajh the hai, aap ek kaam karo, aap ko koi kaam hai toh jaake dekho, Annie Geet ko andar lekhe jao, humme bahut zaroori baat karni hai

Maan keeps looking at Geet… Geet is still bowing her head…

Maan goes near her…

Maan: Annie, tum jao

Maan takes her in…

Geet: ye sahi nahi hai

Maan: chup bilkul chup, yahi sahi hai, mein sab sahi karoonga

Geet: mujhe kuch teek nahi lagta

Maan: ek baat ko khaan kolke suno, ye tummare problem nahi hai, hummare problem hai, toh jo bhi karna hai ab se mein hi karoonga, tum koi pagalpanti mat karna

So he assumes that he has every right over Geet and he will decide when and what will happen in her life thereafter, who gave him the authority? Just a pinch of Sindhoor will decide a girl’s fate?

Maan warns her not to think of doing anything stupid again..

Geet doesn’t believe that marriage is the solution of every problem that a girl faces… but then suicide is also not a solution…

She has understood that too…

She very well understood that she has no right to end either her life or the child’s life…

Geet would take this as a challenge and face it without fear…

That night…

Maan comes to stay with Geet instead of Annie..

Maan knows that Geet will easily fool Annie and do whatever she wants…

Geet: aap?

Maan: haan, tumne clearly samjhadiya ki tum kya kar sakti ho, ab mujhe bhi patha chal gaya ki mujhe kya karna hai, tum bas sare chinta mujhpe chodke aaram karo, jaanthi haina ki tum ab single nahi ho, tum meri patni ho aur mujhse pooche bina kuch nahi karogi, smajhi tum?

Maan bhi bahut pareshan lagtha hai…

Patha nahi kal KM mein kya hoga? Jo bhi ho Maan Geet ko aaise haalat mein akhele chod ke kahin nahi jayega, jab tak isska permanent solution nahi hotha…

Geet ko ye bahut ajeeb lagtha..

Geet ko patha nahi ki jo bhi ho raha hai woh sahi hai ya galat…

Par jo bhi ho raha hai woh Geet ke bas ki baat nahi hai..

Geet had lost control over her own life…

That’s definitely not right, that much Geet can understand…

Maan did not leave her side even for a moment… she was pregnant… and going through a lot, she shouldn’t to be left alone….

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My take on this….

Is marriage the right judgement for such a big crime?

The victim is punished instead of the criminal.. actually looks like rewarding the crime, the criminal gets to commit the crime again and again, that too under the law’s protection?

What kind of justice is this?

You justify the heinous act in the name of love?

Do you even know what love is?

I can never accept this…

That’s why I don’t agree with the Ishaqzaade story line, hero commits a crime but his act is later justified that he was ignorant of the crime or he even didn’t accept it as a crime, he is just sorry and he is forgiven by the heroine?

It’s a hit story?

Once upon a time there was a film in the same storyline, that was a super duper hit??

What’s wrong with our society?

What are we teaching our sons? Or what are we wrongly teaching our girls? Go fall in love with the r****t because he loves you?

This is all wrong precedence…

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Coming back to the story, how many of you support Maan?

Present times….

At the Handa House….

Geet actually slept tight that night after a long time, Is it the company or the return to her parents' place?

Geet gets up and finds out that Maan has left already…

Geet quickly gets ready, she is not in any hurry to go to KC, she has to go somewhere else…

But she can’t let Maan know about that…

This is why she wanted to stay at Pinky’s place..

But this Dadi ruined all her plans…

Geet comes out…

Maan is having his coffee with Dadi…

Manisha is there…

Geet: good morning Dadi

Dadi: morning Geet, aap itne jaldhi tayaar ho gaye? Humme laga aap abhi tak sorahe ho

Dadi looks at Maan…

So Maan complained to Dadi that Geet is lazy?

Geet: mujhe kuch zaroori kaam hai Dadima

Dadi: Maan bete, Geet toh aap se bhi tez hai, KC join karte hi kitna seriously kaam kar rahe hai, lagtha hai Geet aapko jaldh hi take over karenge

Maan: itne subhe subhe aaisa kya kaam hai Geet? Waise bhi office opening time 9’o clock hai… uske pehle jaogi toh bahar hi kada hona padega

Geet: kyun? Mein chahthi toh KC ki doors kabhi bhi khol sakthi

Maan: rules are rules Geet, they are meant to be followed, hum hi follow nahi karte toh kaise?

Geet: then I’ll change the rules

Dadi: Maan, ye kya hai? Aap log abhi bhi ladthe hai?

Maan: chalo, mein 10 min mein ready hoke aatha hoon, hum saath chalte hai

Geet: nahi nahi, mein Pinky se milne jaa rahi hoon

Maan: office mein nahi mil sakti kya?

Geet: woh, hum mandir jaa rahe hai

Maan knows that she won’t go with him… that’s why all the tamasha…

Maan: teek hai, tum gadhi lekhe jao

Geet: mein ne cab book kardhi

Geet MSK ki gadhi lekhe goomthi tok pakad jayegi…

Maan: usski kya zaroorat thi?

Geet: aap ko gadhi chahiye na

Maan: mein Chandu ko bhulatha

Geet: ok gadhi aagayi, mein chalti hoon, bye Dadima

Dadi: bye bete

After Geet leaves…

Dadi: Maan, humme toh shak hotha ki kuch toh problem hai aap logon ke beech

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai Dadi

Dadi: humme kuch teek nahi lagta

Maan: mujhe bhi dher ho rahi hai Dadi, I must go

Maan escapes….

Geet comes late to KC…

Maan: itne dher kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: woh aaj mandir mein bahut beedh tha

Maan: tum kab se mandir jaane lagi?

Geet: Pinky jaathi hai, mein usko company de rahi thi

Maan: Geet, tumme apni friend ki padi hai aur Dadi ki koi kadar nahi, tumne aaj aaise achnak chalna nahi chahiye tha

Geet: issiliye, issiliye mein aap ke saath nahi rehna chahthi thi, ab meri zindagi aap ki hisab se nahi chalegi, samjhe aap?

Maan: ye kya ho gaya tumme Geet?

Geet: mujhe akal aagaya hai

Maan: I doubt, mujhe aaisa nahi lagta

Geet: aap se kisne poocha? Ab aap jaao, mujhe kaam karna hai

Maan: jab tak Dadi ghar mein hai tum mujh se pooche bina kuch nahi karogi, samjhi tum?

Geet: what? Why do I need your permission?

Maan: because you are Geet Khurana , bahar name plate ko dekha nahi?

Geet: you can’t do that

Maan: yes, I can, my dear wife

Geet: what?

Maan: bye biwi

Geet gets really angry…

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update

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very nice update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 25


Fabulous and Shocking Update


Geet has been trying her very best to stay away

from Maan

but when she locks herself in her room

and Maan breaks the door only to witness Geet trying to suicide

she then tells him that she is pregnant

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Fantastic and yet so Shocking Update


Maan is the only person worried about Geet's pregnancy

while she and his family just don't care

Maan is somewhere getting more strict with Geet as he does not trust

that she will take care of herself

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 26

intriguing update

so Maan married Geet

hate how the family blamed Geet

glad that Maan said he was the one to blame

liked that Maan was determined to there for Geet

he knew she was going through so much


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Too much of injustice for Geet and it is being done by everyone around her directly or indirectly. One can clearly see the kind of authority Maan is showing on her life & taking decisions for her .. Geet is on some revenge plan and I support her in this. Maan is acting like a chauvinist even though it is out of love. He’s not maintaining boundaries which needs to be corrected. Waiting for next

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Is tarhan ki shadi koi lardki accept nahi kare gi

Geet keep ignoring him and he just keep ordering her and she now doing one thing ignore

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Part – 27

At KC…

That evening Geet waits for Maan to leave…

Maan: Geet, chalte hain

Geet: aap jao, mujhe kaam hai

Maan: tum jaldhi kaam katam karo, hum saath mein hi jayenge

Geet: bahut dher ho jayega

Maan: kitne bhi dher ho, mein tummare bina ghar nahi jaa sakta

Geet: kyun?

Maan: dadi mujhe akhele andar jaane nahi degi

Geet had to go with him…

At home…

Dadi is waiting for them…

Dadi: toh Geet aap kis mandir gaye?

Geet: Mandir?

Dadi: aap Pinky ke saath subhe gaye ya nahi

Dadi is inquiring her to clear her doubts… and she is not happy…

Geet: Woh, hum shivji ka mandir gaye the

Dadi: which one?

Geet: Pinky ke ghar ke paas haina, woh

Dadi: wahi, kahan?

Geet: Dadi, mein jaake fresh hoke aathj hoon

Geet takes her tea to the room…

Maan is surprised to see her coming to the room while he is in…

Maan: tumme meri yaad kaisi aayi?

Maan gets closer….

Geet: dadi aapko bhula rahe hai

Maan: tum dadi se baat karna Geet, mujhe thoda kaam hai

Geet: nahi, aapki dadi hai, aap hi jao aur baat karo, najaane kaise kaise sawaal karte hai, buaji aur Sheetal aunty Dadima ko kaise sambalthe hai?

Maan smiles…

Maan: mere saath aao, mein bathatha hoon ki dadi ko kaise sambalthe

Maan catches her hand and takes her out….

Maan: dadi, aapko yahan bore nahi hotha?

Dadi: Maan bete, aap seedhe seedhe kyun nahi kehte ki ghar jao Dadima

Maan: nahi Dadi, aap bore hothi toh Geet ko lekhe kahin bahar kyun na jaathe ho?

Dadi: Maan, Geet aap ke saath bahar jaana pasand karenge ya mere saath?

Geet: aap ke saath

Dadi: hum iss umar mein ghar mein hi kush hai, Maan, aap Geet ko bahar lekhe jao

Maan: mujhe kaam hai Dadima

Geet: mujhe bhi mujhe bhi

Dadi: tum donno ko dekhke toh hummara shak badhke jaatha hai

Maan: chalo Geet, jaldhi tayaar ho jao, hum bahar jaathe hai

Geet: par

Maan pretends to hug Geet and he quietly takes her in…

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: Geet, dadi se behas karne se kahin bahar jaana hi behthar hoga

Geet too would agree with that….

Geet: teek hai teek hai

Geet tayaar hoke aathi…

Maan: Dadi, aap sojao, humme aane mein dher hoga

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum na, kuch din mauna vrat rakho

Dadi: enjoy bete

Maan: bye Dadi

Geet: aap, aur aapki Dadi

Maan: toh kahan chalein meri pyaari Biwi?

Geet: mujhe kya patha? Woh bhi Dadi se hi poochlo?

Maan: I know a place, you will like it

Geet knows Maan’s choice…. Uss din gaye na? Sunsaan jagah aur bas donno hi, aaise…

Ab Maan biwi biwi karte rehta toh aaise jagah pe jaana teek nahi lagtha….

Geet: mujhe na, mall mein kuch kareedhna hai, wahan hi food court mein kuch kathe hai

Geet thinks that it’s better to go to a crowded place…

Maan takes her to the mall…

Geet keeps roaming…

Maan: tujhe kuch kareedhna hai ya nahi?

Geet enters the next shop….

It’s a baby shop….

Maan follows her…

Geet stops looking at all the new born goods…

Geet looks around… she finds a cute girl dress….

What if it was a girl?

Geet starts imagining…

She then looks at a boy dress…

What if it was a boy?

Geet moves around and looks at all the different toys…

Maan is puzzled… he just follows her without any clue…

Why is she here?

Geet then looks at a cradle…

She keeps staring that…

Maan too looks at that…

Maan goes near her… he stands behind her…

Maan: Geet, tumme bachon se itna pyaar hai toh mujhe pehle hi bathathi, mein itna din tumme intezar karne nahi detha, haina? Abhi bhi kuch nahi bigda hai, mein toh kab se tayaar hoon, bas tum thoda madat karthi toh

Maan hugs her from the back…

Geet turns around in a fury and stares him…

Tears well up her eyes…

Geet runs from that place…

She takes a cab and goes home…

Dadi didn’t expect Geet to return alone so soon…

Dadi: Geet, Geet bete, Maan kahan hai?

Geet: unhe koi meeting hai

Geet rushes to her room and thinks about her baby… the one she lost… the one Maan murdered….

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Geet lost her baby and Maan murdered how can this happened

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