JUNOON - Pyaar ka... updt Part 100 on pg 148 Jun 26 - Page 27

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very nice update dear

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 23

So geet is avoiding maan

She blames him

But she does not even remember what fully happened

Maan loves her & would not harm her

Like that dadi is being a detective

Hoping she can help

Maan has geet cornered but it seems like they are both talking in riddles

Which they r not understanding each other

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

feeling bad fr geet...........n maan too............


nice update...........


loved it...............

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 23


Fascinating Update


Maan takes Geet to her father's apartment

he is doing this to make her comfortable

and for her to realize that he had done nothing wrong

to her father

Maan is now in a romantic mood and wants to spend time with Geet

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet needed to tell Maan that forgetting the matter was not possible and it could not be taken so lightly.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan has no clue whats going on in her brain. He doesn't try to understand her point of view.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part – 24

“wow! Humme Welcome karne ke liye donno wait kar rahe ho? I'm really happy to see you both together after a long time”

it’s Dadima…

Dadi is here at the wrong time… nahi Maan is here at the right time with Geet…

He knew about Dadima’s arrival….

Dadi: Maan bete aap apna romance ko andar jaake continue kyun nahi karthe? Aap hummare rasthe mein kadhe ho

Ab Geet ko sab samajh mein aagaya..

Geet: Maan, Dadi ke samne? Mujhe neeche utharo

Maan puts her down…

Geet: andar aayiye Dadi

Dadi hai toh Geet kyun daregi?

Par Geet ko kya patha ki Dadi toh Maan ki madat karne aayi hai…. Cupid banke…

Geet gets Dadi’s blessings…

Dadi: aap donno aaise hi hamesha ek saath kush raho

Geet: Dadi, chaliye, mein aap ke liye chai banathi hoon, woh kya haina? Mujhe kadvi coffee se sakt nafrat hai

Geet looks at Maan and hints that she hates everything about him….

Dadi: Maan bete, aap kade kade kya dekh rahe ho? Manisha se kehke hummara samaan neeche se lekhe aayiye, Chandu akhela itna samaan kaise lekhe aayega?

Maan: kitna samaan?

Ab toh Dadi yahi camping karegi…

Dadi: aap jaanthe haina ki hummare do do bahu hai, hum unke saath lad ladke tak chuke hai, toh humne socha, chalo apne pothe ke saath kuch din aaram se rehte hai

Maan: aap ne bahut achcha kaam kiya hai Dadima

Maan ko yaad aatha ki woh abhi bhi Darji ke room mein hi rehta…

Ab Dadi aagayi haina?

Maan ko shift karna padega kyunki abhi bhi Handas ka room ko koi use nahi kartha, Geet ko bhura lagega…

Maan calls Chandu and asks him to get Dadi’s things up and keep them in the living room while Maan quickly shifts his things to Geet’s room with the help of Manisha…

Dadi is busy with Geet chatting in the kitchen… she won’t notice…

Maan orders the servants to finish the job as quickly as possible….

He goes to the kitchen to keep dadi away…

Maan: Geet, meri black coffee?

Geet: Manisha ko bhulao, woh banayega

Maan: woh thoda busy hai Geet

Geet: toh aap hi banalo

Dadi: ye kya bete? Aap kyun nahi banathe?

Geet: woh kya haina Dadi? Inko meri haath ki black coffee pasand nahi hai

Maan: Geet, aaj toh mein tummare haath ke coffee hi piyoonga, warna Dadi mujhse naraz ho jayenge, haina dadii?

Dadi: haan, aap Geet ko encourage karo toh woh achcha banathe, har baat mein aap ka gussa kaam nahi aayega, dar se kaam nahi hotha Maan bete, pyaar se hi duniya chaltha hai

Geet: aap ne sahi kaha Dadima

Maan: toh aaisi baat hai?

Maan gives a romantic look…

Dadi notices it…

Dadi: lagtha hai ki humme jaake thoda aaram karna chahiye

Maan stops her…

Maan: nahi Dadima, aap yahi raho, aap kitne din ke badh Geet se mille hai, aap uske saath batein karo

Dadi: hum last weekend hi mille the, aapko patha nahi? Aap ko Dadi ka yaad notha toh aap bhi aathe

Maan ko ye news patha nahi tha ki Geet KM gayi…

Kissi ne kuch nahi bathaya..

Sab naraz hai ki Maan ne Geet ke aane ke baat ko chupaya…

Maan is feeling bad that Geet is happy to be with everyone else except him…

Dadi: Maan, kya soch rahe hai aap?

Maan: kuch nahi Dadima, aap kya keh rahe the?

Dadi: ye Geet toh humme bhool sakti, par aap ne bhi humse chupaya?

Maan: meine kya chupaya?

Dadi: yahi ki Geet bahut pehle hi Delhi aa chuki thi

Geet is worried now .. dadi ko kaise patha chala?

Geet: mein bas do hafte pehle aayi thi Dadima

Dadi: wahi toh, humme ek hafte pehle hi patha chala na?

Maan: woh Dadima, aap jaanthi haina ki Geet kitne din badh aayi hai, woh chahathi thi ki hum ek hafte kissi disturbance ke bina ek dusre ke saath bithaye, mein bhi intrezar kar raha tha

Dadi: achcha, ab hum disturbance ho gaye hai?

Maan: Dadima, pyaar mein kabhi kabhi aaise galthiyan hotha jaatha hai , haina Geet?

Geet: kya?

Maan: meri coffee, thanks Geet

Geet ne toh 5 sugar cubes dala hai…

Maan chak ke dektha….

How could he drink that ?

Maan stares Geet….

Geet: coffee kaisa hai?

Maan: bahut achcha, jaise mujhe pasand hai

Geet: toh peethe kyun nahi?

Maan: Dadima, aap log batein karo, mein zara dekhke aatha hoon ki kaam ho gaya ki nahi

Maan escapes with the coffee…

Yahan rehtha toh uss coffee ko pina padtha….

Dadi goes to take rest and leave the love birds alone…

Geet: ye aap ne dadi ko yahan kyun bhulaya?

Maan: meine nahi bhulaya

Geet: joot mat bolo, mein sab jaanti hoon

Maan: tum na, kabhi nahi sudhrogi, hamesha galat hi sochthi ho

Geet: aap apna Dadi ko sambalo, mein jaa rahi hoon

Geet tries to go…

Maan stops her as usual…

Maan: kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet: chodo mere haath

Maan: tum yahi rahogi, mere saath, samjhi tum?

Geet: ye kya zabardasti hai?

Maan: zabardasti samjho toh zabardasti hi hai, par tum yahan se jaa nahi sakti

Geet: teek hai, chodo mujhe

Geet goes to her room and sees Maan’s things there…

Geet shouts… : Maaaaaan

Maan comes in a hurry…

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: kya?

Geet: ye, aapka samaan

Maan: haan, meine hi yahan rakhne ko kaha tha

Geet: ye yahan kyun hai?

Maan: kyunke, aaj se ye hummara kamra hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum aur kitne din mujhse baag the rahogi? Mein samajh nahi raha hoon ki tum mujhse baagthi ho ya hummare rishthe se?

Geet: rishtha? Kaisa rishtha? Kaunsa rishtha?

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 24

oh so Maan knew about dadima's arrival

of cos she teases Maan

liked that dadi is there to play cupid

as expected Geet indirectly hints that she hates everything about Maan

at least Maan realises that Geet would be upset if they use the Handas room

great that he will move their things

glad that dadi keeps Geet busy

not surprised that Maan uses dadi to her Geet to make coffee him her

so Maan is upset that Geet prefers to spend time with everyone else except him

Gosh she made coffee with 5 sugars

Maan adamant that she stays

Geet is indeed angry seeing him stuff in her room

pleased that he confronts her

her question was expected


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Waiting for next update .....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Either Maan does not get it or Remember the past or is he acting. Can he not figure out geet is mad at him

wish geet would just spit it out


now dadi is here too


looks like they are Married too. No wonder Maan has taken the Liberty to stay in the same

Room in front of dadi

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