JUNOON - Pyaar ka... updt Part 100 on pg 148 Jun 26 - Page 26

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Posted: 3 years ago

Does Maan play a part in the incident from the past or was it someone else? Maan knows about it though.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan knew the past was bothering Geet and made sure he accommodated her in every way.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan got a ring and wants to propose. But he knows Geet is not even comfortable with him.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Since Maan was not the one to spike her drink, he wasn't a total scoundrel. Both were under the influence.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan probably got drunk out of his own actions. Geet had no such choice. Thats why she hates him.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Where Maan went wrong is when he told her to hide and forget the matter rather than apologizing.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 22

Shocking updste

Happy that maan wanted to propose

But what happened in their intoxicated state

& they did not communicate after

Why do I smell more trouble

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part - 23

Present times….

Geet comes back from her thoughts….

But Maan had totally miscalculated Geet, she is not the one to forget the past and move on, it’s not her fault, her misfortunes followed her like a shadow….

Geet remembers everything to this date…. Haan, ye aaise aasaani se bhoolne wali baat nahi hai….

Geet wants justice…

Geet vows to take revenge….

From the next day Geet stops talking or seeing Maan at KC…

How could she forgive everything he did?

One evening Dadi calls Maan…

Dadi is not satisfied that Maan didn’t accompany Geet when Geet came to KM and she is also not satisfied with Geet’s answers about Maan…

Dadi: Maan bete, aap kaise hai?

Maan: great dadi, bas thoda busy hoon , you know this big project is coming up

Dadi: ok ok, I don’t want excuses, aap abhi kahan ho?

Maan: ghar pe hi hoon dadi

Maan: Geet se baat karao

Maan: Geeeet

Dadi: haan Geet

Maan: Geet bahar gayi hai, friends ke saath dinner

Dadi doesn’t buy it…

Dadi calls Geet…

Dadi: where are you Geet?

Geet: ghar pe hi hoon Dadima

Dadi: zara Maan ko phone dijhiye, unka phone nahi lag raha hai

Geet: Maaaan?

Dadi: haan, Maan, hummare pothe

Geet: ji, Maan kissi client se milne gaye hai

Dadi confirms that there is something fishy….

Dadi can’t wait to start her act…. Ab aayega mazaa….

Next day….

Geet is about to go home with Pinky…

Maan comes…

Maan: Geet, rukho

Geet: I’m going home, koi bhi kaam ho toh kal dekhte hai

Maan: it’s important, Pinky, Geet badh mein aayegi, tum jao

Pinky: Geet, tum phir aana

Geet: Pinky Pinky

Pinky leaves…

Geet: Pinky gayi toh kya? Mein cab book karoongi

Maan: aaj tum mere saath aarahi ho

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan

Geet: par

Maan takes her forcefully to the car…

Geet had to go with him…

Maan takes her home…

Geet is scared to go with him…

Maan: get down Geet, ghar aagaya, itne jaldhi apne ghar ko bhool gayi?

Geet gets off..

Maan enters the lift while Geet takes the steps…

Maan gets out of the lift on the next floor and joins her, kahin bhaag jaathi toh….

Their apartment is on the sixth floor…

No one takes the steps… the steps are so dirty…

Maan pulls her and takes her to the lift on the next floor…

Geet: ye kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: ye mujhe poochna chahiye Geet

Geet tries to get off the lift..

Maan holds her tight and pulls her back inside….

He is still that same man, Geet has not yet found a way to tackle him?

Ye Geet ka plan mein nahi tha, achanak ye phir se DD banjayega, ye toh Geet ne socha nahi tha….

Itne hone ka baad bhi ye Geet ko kyun nahi chodtha?

Aur Geet chahe toh isse dhoor jaa sakti thi, par woh bhi Maan se kuch kam nahi hai… ussko bhi MSK ke saath ladna hai, chahe jo bhi ho… haina?

Ab toh darne ki kya baat hai? Geet ke paas khone ke liye kuch bachi hai kya?

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan forcefully holds her against the wall and corners her…

Maan: bahut ho gaya tummari mann maani, ab mein aur bardasht nahi kar sakta, samjhi tum?

Maan inches closer…

Geet is angry, her eyes emitting fire…

But they seem to be weaker than Maan’s fire…

The lift stops and the door opens….

Geet quickly pushes him and gets out….

Maan looks at her and smiles looking at her childish zidd…

Maan ke samne ye sab chaltha nahi..

Maan ka pyaar toh isse dekh ke aur badh jaatha…

Maan is liking this rebellious Geet for a change…

Rona Dona band aur ye nayi tareeka Maan se ladne ke liye…

Bas, bahut hogaya Gandhigiri, ab toh Gundagiri ka waqt hai…

Ye aaise waqt hai ki Rahul Dravid bhi Gunda ban gaya!!

Maan opens the door and waits for her to enter… you know MSK is the perfect gentleman, ladies first…

Geet is not ready to enter…

Maan: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet looks at Maan and stares…

Maan: ye bhi tummare papa ka hi hai, aur dekho name plate bhi nahi badla, ye aaj bhi tera hi hai, aur sab kuch bhi, ye teri zindagi hai, aur mein bhi tera hi hoon, patha nahi tumme ye sab kab samajh mein aayega?

Geet: ab toh mein sab samajh gayi hoon

Geet looks at him in determination…

Maan gets closer…

Maan: kya samajh gayi ho Geet?

Maan looks into her eyes…. He is searching for something that is long gone from those beautiful eyes… love for him…

Geet can’t reveal her truth yet…. She has only crossed half the road…

Geet: itni bhi kya jaldi hai, dhere dhere aap ko bhi patha chal hi jayega

Maan: mein aur intrezar nahi kar sakta, tum mujhe samajhthi kyun nahi?

Geet: ab mein aapko bhi achchi tarah se jaan gayi hoon

Maan: aaisa hotha toh mera kaam kitna aasaan hotha? Tum samajhthi nahi ki tummare wajhe se hum donno ki keemti waqt barbad ho rahi hai, jo tera hai, usse apnane ke liye itna kyun darthi ho Geet?

Geet: mujhe patha hai ki kya mera hai aur kya nahi

Geet thinks, mujhe ye bhi patha hai ki tumne mujhse kya cheena hai…

Geet’s eyes moisten even now when she thinks about that…

Maan has noticed that…

Maan: phir se shuru mat hona, chalo andar

Maan holds her and takes her in…

Geet was lost in her thoughts for a moment… she didn’t realize that she went in with him….

Geet ko kaise bhi yahan se jaldhi jaana padega….

Maan: chalo, aaj ghar ki malkhin wapas aagayi hai, ab mujhe savdhan rehna padega, warna ye mujhe bahar pekh deghi

Geet thinks that he is right… you just wait and watch Mr.Khurana.. woh din bahut dhoor nahi hai….

Geet: mujhe yahan kyun lekhe aaye ho? Jaldhi bathao mujhe jaana hai, Pinky meri wait kar rahi hogi

Maan: meine Pinky ko inform kardhiya hai, aaj se tum yahi rahogi, mere saath

Geet: ye kaise ho sakta?

Maan: Geet, teri problem kya hai?

Geet: mein yahan nahi reh sakti

Maan: kyun?

Geet: mujhe yahan nahi rehna toh nahi rehna

Maan: aaise kaise chalega?

Maan gets near Geet and pulls her into a hug…

Maan: tum meri ho Geet, mein tumse dhoor nahi reh sakta

Geet struggles to get off his hold….

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan lifts her….

Maan: koi faida nahi, aaj mein tumme nahi chodoonga, subhe se dekh raha hoon, aaisa bhi kya gussa hai? Abhi maan bhi jao na Geet

Maan whispers in his husky tone….

Maan turns fully romantic, Geet ke language mein kahe toh Maan pura ka pura Dhust Danav ban gaya hai, phir se ….

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 23

well dadi is indeed intelligent

her suspicions regarding Maan and Geet are confirmed

so Geet can never forget nor forgive Maan

she is out for revenge

Maan forcefully takes Geet with him

now he confronts Geet

he shows the name plate with her dad's name

great that he wants to know what she wants

of cos she refuses to stay there

Maan tries to manofy her

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update

Waiting for next update.. .

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