MG FF: The Innocent - Chapters 20-27 on p. 41 - Complete - Page 25

Yay. End to the meaningless loveless relationship

but is it going yo cause more harm. Hmm have to wait and see

but figured geet would do something like thi reuniting Neil with his mom. Yes she should have asked maan first but

glad maan did not get mad at her

What about the background check. What does man Think of the wrong doing

Maan kinda confesses his feelings. Calling her sweetheart too

Fabulous update. Eagerly waiting for new update. Thanks.

Nice part, 💗, Maan broke his engagement with Sameera🙂 love this story.geet take Neil to meet his mother,Maan don't know about her condition,whois there? Maan's brother?

Waiting for next part 🥰💖

Thank you for update 😊

Chapter 16

Woohoo 🎉..... In your face Sameera hahah.... But the main problem is yet to start... Now there no longer a truce between the two familias. I don't think Sameera's father would sit down quietly for his daughter's so called "heartbreak".... And...... Geet is still in self denial about her feelings... Ohow the background check is here and it's not cool man not cool at all... Uh I know that squeal...? Drunken Maan is dangerous.... That's a big NO.... Wait a minute is he celebrating or mourning about the situation...? I find Geet is more explicit than Maan. She's really think the out comes of every situation carefully.... Wow..... I mean just wow 😲 he's really asking her for advice or he's pouring out his heart to her again.... Anndddd..... He's dropped another hint at her that she really didn't caught hold of it... And to be honest I'll definitely marry him if I was her cause he's giving me books... I love books too.... Yesss she's a saviour, an angel. She did it. She reunited both mother and son.... Yep as expected a back story to the divorce. Now I know why Maan and his brother don't go well with each other.... Cause he's disgusting. Maan is far more better than him. Damn.... What a timing to interrupt a sweet moment....😒 Is she serious with him like gurl he's a freaking Mafia King who carries a weapon even in his sleep.... Surely he knows how to protect himself along the others with him... And the sweetheart just melted me like a chocolate bar... Awww that's another cute moment.. erm but in other thoughts I don't think Geet would be able to go anywhere in that freaking gigantic castle... She had to stay put so when Maan returns he can find her without her getting lost... Right where he left her... Cause 1 she's still not familiar with the hallways of the what we call a "house"... 2 she might get herself in more trouble... So it's wise to stay put... But I can guess some possibilities on who's at the door... 1 it might be Adi with some god-damned urgent business to take care of... 2 might be Sameera's father who sent a team to ambush Maan off guard... 3 might be the cops for some useless QnA again... Lastly Monty... Cause Geet took Neil to meet his mother... I just had a small thought... Heheh... Hopefully Maan returns in one piece back where he left Geet... Beautiful update.... 🤗

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Oh wow 😍 Maan and Geet's relationship has progressed leaps and bounds.

Maan breaking off with Sameera.

Geet is a pure soul. She reunited Neil with his mom indeed an angel.

Gosh now worried for Maaneet safety hope they are safe.

Eagerly waiting for next

Nice update. Neil met his mother and his father seems to be a very bad person. Who is the person in Maan house are these men of Sameera father.

thanks for the update

Chapter 16

Spectacular update......... beautifully written

Gosh this Sameera 😡

Geet's thoughts are reasonable

of cos she admonishes herself for her thoughts

oh no Geet found that Maan did a background check on her

her reaction was justified

as expected Geet is shocked seeing with a drank

liked her concern

glad that Maan broke of the engagement

so he wanted to celebrate

Geet was inwardly happy but could not portray that

great that Maan responded to her questions

Loved his response and his indirect confession

Geet is overjoyed

not surprised that Geet took Neil to meet his mom

emotional reunion

at least Maan was not angry with this

he never knew what Monty did to Asha

but Maan did have a point that Geet should have asked him as Neil is his responsibility

pleased that Maan wants to talk to Geet

well there seems to be some trouble

nice that Geet was worried about Maan

adore that Maan addressed Geet as sweetheart

Maan can indeed take care of himself

update soon

Thank you. It was a great update and I also feeling like having a drink( juice for me) and celebrating the break up too. I am so glad that Maan is already hopelessly in love with Geet and I guess he wants her to know and take it from there. His not one to beat around the bush and I like that about him.

So I wonder who the angry intruder is? Sameera’s father who is not as happy as us at the break up or a very angry Monty! I’ll keep wondering and you keep writing... lol

Thank you again.

Wonderful update the way maan n geet r coming close its too good and about neil meeting her mother that was such a wonderful moment waiting to see who could be on d door trouble awaits I guess.

Part 16 🥳

Let me do my happy dance first re: the broken engagement .... now that I have gotten that out of my system , I can comment 😆

Maan is a free man & he is starting to confess his thoughts to geet 👍🏼....... he actually called her beautiful, smart & sweet 😍......

loved the way geet was concerned that he was drinking again & maan actually spilled his drink 👍🏼

And geet does have a heart of gold , she actually reunited Neil with his mom..... she is so sweet ♥️But I don’t think neil’s Father will be happy when he finds out.

This new maan is surprising me , he is dishing out the compliments for geet & they are genuine .....,,,,.........he truly likes her

Their beautiful terrace moment was interrupted 😡.........is it sam ?? Or her father ???Again maan was touched by geet’s concern for him . Our gangster is turning soft for geet . Now just worried who is pounding at the door 😕

Thank you for the fabulous update !!! 🤗