SS ~ Heart on the Line ~ Note page 44 - Page 2

Is she really pregnant?

Congratulations on your new SS

Title sounds Intriguing

Prologue is Captivating

Geet married and her husband and father seems like both don't see eye to eye

she arrives home after visiting her parents and it seems like her husband

is busy with another woman in their bedroom

Chapter 1

A Relaxing and Comforting Start

Geet had divorced her husband Rahul , oh thank God it was not Maan her husband 😊

great that Geet's family is supporting her and loves her a lot

she and her daughter has now moved into their own home

and setting up must be the worst

I'm glad that Geet is strong enough to move on in her life with her daughter

and not cry all the time on her deceitful ex husband

Chapter 2

A Lovely Chapter

I forgot to mention that Nyra is gorgeous

and yeah Pepper is cute

so Maan has woken up to the drumming sounding of the lawn mower

and when he sees in the next yard its a female doing the lawn he notices she has a sexy bottom

but when he came outside and Geet turns , Maan realizes she is pregnant

while little Nyra is just so sweet and cute

on the other hand Geet is annoyed that Maan's language was forbidden in front of her daughter

he somehow seems sociable

Congratulations for the new story

Geet's husband cheated on her and they got divorced.

Geet's family helped her and Nyra to settle down in their new place.

Maan is their new neighbour and have created bad image in geet's mind. I loved his and Nyra's little convo

And pepper is so cute

Waiting for the next part update soon

Congrats on the new story...

So Geet hada divorce and is moving on with her little daughter and another baby on the way. Nyra is sweet and adorable..

Seems like Geet's family is helping her post her divorce. Have to see more of them..

Okay, Maan is the handsome neighbour who can't is already attracted to our lady. Idk about them but Nyra and Pepper seems to be already working to be friends..😆

Looking forward to next update...

Congrats on the new SS!

A wonderful surprise

always a pleasure to read a new story from you

Any chance of you updating In the End?

Beautiful Banner

Incredible prologue

Feeling for Geet and especially little Nyra

Hate this Rahul

he does not deserve Geet and Nyra

Chapter 1

Marvelous update... superbly written

glad that Geet has divorced and is determined to move on

of cos its not easy as she loved Rahul

Rahul is a jerk

Poor Nyra is oblivious about what is happening

great that Geet and Nyra are moving into their new home

Nyra is so cute

Liked that Geet's family is supportive and are there for and Nyra

adore Nyra helping her mama

can understand Megha's concern

aww Nyra already misses everyone

Awesome introduction to Geet's family

Loved Nyra's pic

Chapter 2

Splendid update..... amazingly written

Intriguing first meeting of Maan and Geet

Gosh she disturbed his sleep and Maan is clearly vexed

so he is attracted to Geet

liked how Nyra admonishes Maan

Geet's anger with Maan is reasonable

Maan realises she is child, is married and pregnant

at least Maan controlled his thoughts

as expected Nyra is excited seeing Maan's dog

enjoyed Maaneet's banter

loved how Maan engaged with Nyra

through Nyra he got to know her mama's name

aww she called Pepper as papa

I am sure Maan and Nyra will be friends soon

already waiting for Chapter 3