MG FF - Oh Saathi Re.... Thread 2 link Jan 6 pg 150 - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Interesting story concept

How did Geet reach there

Will maan be able to save her and her family are hiding something

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Fantastic update ☺️👍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Interesting..


Geet doesn't want to marry maan.. But why?


Maan is looking for her.. He wants to meet her once..


What is she doing in the woods ? what is it with the goons? Who is she looking for?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Now maan realise not every girl desperate to marry him he now feeling guilty bz of his proposal girl left her home

Maan found her and geet is in danger hope maan save her

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

what geet is up to?.........why she ran away frm home?..........dekhte hai abb maan babu kya karta hai...............


loved it.............

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Part 2


Fascinating Update


Maan did not want to step inside Handa Mansion but when

Rano herself invites him he goes in

but then he learns that Geet ran away and Maan only kept thinking

about himself at first it was to reject Geet but now he wants to meet her again

but it was admiral of him to get involved in searching for Geet

so now the thugs have gotten her , wonder if Maan already left

or he is watching Geet with these thugs

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

2

maan first become angry that geet is rejecting him but when he goes to find her starts worrying for her safety

hopw maan able to save geet from those goons

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Part – 3

Geet realizes that it was foolish and too dangerous to have come out of her hiding, but Geet was worried for that man, who is new to Hoshiarpur and doesn’t know about the gundas….

Geet keeps looking for that guy who is hiding like a coward….

She looks at the men standing in front of her in anger…

Geet knows what their evil minds are thinking about her…

When her so called well wishers and relatives itself belittle her, these gundas are just some strangers with little respect for any woman…

Gunda: toh Geet, apne aaj ki Aashiq ko dhoondh rahi ho kya?

Geet stares that rascal…

No.1 : hey ladhki, patha haina ki bhai kaun hai?

No.2 : sshhh ladhki se pyaar se baat kar bittu

Gunda: chalo Geet, aaj raat hum hi tummare Aashiq ban jaathe hai

Gunda: ek din ke kitne paise lethi ho?

No.1 : ek mahine ke liye kitna discount milega?

Ye log Geet ka naam kaise jaanthe?

As that rogue tries to step forward Geet slaps him hard, pushes him away ,turns back and starts to run…

Those men follow her…

No.1 : rukhjao saali, tumme badhe gadhiwalon hi chahiye kya?

Gunda: apun ke paas bhi isse bada gadi hai

Geet: bachao bachao

No.1. : lagtha hai woh darfok bhaag gaya

They all laugh out loudly…

Gunda tries to hold her hand and take her in…

Maan can’t wait anymore…

Maan jumps over that goon and trashes him left and right…

As their head man falls down groaning in pain, the others run away….

Geet is so scared and she runs towards Maan and hugs him tight…

Maan consoles her by holding her close, to assure her that she is in safe hands now…

Geet is panting heavily in fear….

She rests her head on his shoulders at last…

Maan takes her to the jeep…

He makes her sit comfortably in the seat and gives her some water to drink…

She drinks that and still looks very disturbed…

Maan: gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, ab woh log nahi aayenge

Geet keeps staring Maan…

Maan: so you are Geet?

Maan has to confirm it from her itself….

Geet: app ko abhi bhi shak hai?

Maan can’t control his smile looking at the speed at which the replies are coming like missiles…

Maan has to be more careful, he can’t fool her, he has to come to the point directly….

Maan: tumne aaj subha mujhe rokhne ki koshish kyun ki?

Geet is shocked for a moment, how did he find the truth?

Geet recovers immediately….. She is not afraid of him, who is he? He is just the ladhka who has come to have a free meal in the name of seeing the ladhki….

Ye kaisa pagalpanthi hai?

Ladhka ladhki donno ko equal rights hona chaiye, ek dusre se milne ko bhi aur ek dusre ko reject karne ko bhi, aaisa kyun hotha ki hamesha ladhka hi reject karein? Haina?

Geet usko badal legi, haan, ab koi Geet ko reject hi nahi kar payega kyunki usse pehle Geet usko reject karegi…..

Geet: lagtha hai ki app ko bahut joot bolne ki aadat hai

Maan: achcha?

Geet: haan

Maan: zara yahan dekho, mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki kaun sach boltha aur kaun joota hai?

Maan teases Geet, but Geet takes it seriously as if he is demanding the proof….

She comes a little closer, lifts her face and looks into his eyes….

Maneet eyelock…..

Maan has already recognized those eyes even from a distance…..

Geet is embarrassed by the looks of this stranger whom she has just met, she can sense the intentions of those powerful eyes that look dangerously attractive her for no reason at all……..

Geet tries to get away from there, moves a step aside when Maan subconscioucly stops her by holding her and bringing her back to position even while he is still under the influence of her intoxicting eyes….

Maan: ye wahi aakhen hai

Geet: nahi

Maan: mujhse joot bolne se koi faida nahi Geet, tum chahe toh bhi mujhse kuch chupa nahi sakthi

Geet: aap ko koi galat fami hui hai

Geet struggles to speak unable to control herself by his touch….

Maan: inn aakhon ko mein kaise bhool saktha?

Maan is still lost in those eyes that keep pleading him to spare them….

Maan then remembers their fight and how Geet wanted him to return back….

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: pehle aap bathao ki aap yahan kya kar rahe the?

Iss ladhki se jawaab lena utna bhi aasaan nahi lagtha…

Maan: mein tumme dhhondh the doondh the yahan aagaya, par tum kahan chali gayi thi?

Geet: mein kahin nahi gayi thi, mein yahi thi

Maan: yahi?

Geet: issi gadhi mein thi

Maan: kya? Tum meri gadhi mein kya kar rahi thi?

Maan is frustrated that while he was looking for her like an idiot she has been in the car along with him watching him happily how he got fooled by her….

Geet tells Maan what happened in the morning…

Geet goes home after the failed attempt to shoo the boy(MSK) away…

Ranno: Geet, tum aagayi, jaldhi jao aur nahaake aao, Darji tumse baat karna chahte hai

Geet gets ready and goes to eat breakfast…

She is still thinking about how to escape from this shadi ka drama…

Darji: Geet

Geet comes out of her thoughts…

Geet: ji

Darji: bahut mushkil se koi rishtha aaya hai, iss bar koi galti nahi hona chahiye, samjhi tum?

Geet: ji

Darji: babaji ke meherbani se khurana khandaan se rishtha aaya hai, zindagi ne aapko dusra moka diya hai, sab ko aaisa moka nahi milta

Geet: ji

Geet is not interested in his boring lecture…

Darji: Shamko tayaar rehna, suna hai ki damadji aagaye hai

Geet: mujhe patha hai

Darji: Geeeet

Geet: ji mein jaoon

Darji: tum kahin nahi jaa sakti, hare Brij, Brij

Brij: ji darji

Darji: aaj ye ladhki iss ghar se ek katam bhi bahar rakhti toh

Brij: mein isski tang thod dhoonga

Brij roars in anger…

Geet gets angry and runs to her room…

Darji: iss ke kamre ko band karo

They lock Geet up in her room…

Geet tricks teeto and escapes in the afternoon…

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wonderful update superb waiting to see there nok jhok

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Part - 3


Nice banter between Maan and Geet..

So Maan recognised her eyes, haan?

Who would not?


Well, Maan is the Daamaadji Daarji is referring to..

Hmm.. why do these Handa males want Geet to be docile?

Ladki ko uthnaa hi haq hai ladke ko dekhne aur pasand karne ki jitnaa ke ladke ko ladki dekhne ka haqq hai..

Hainaa?


Par Handas ke khayaal se ladki toh gawaar hoti hai..

Jo aangan mein sirf bojh bani hai aur paidaa hona ek ladki ke maathe par kalank hai shaayad!


Well, I hope Maan is the perfect dulhaa material for our dear Geet.. bechaari Maan ke gaadi mein dinn bhar rahi aur Maan ko pataa bhi nahi lagne diyaa!

Good shot that...


Well, meeting of the ladka ladki in official way, kab karvaana hai?

Handas aur Khuranas ne toh manzoori de di hogi..


Par Geet aur Maan ko ek doosre ke saath shaadi karne ki baat theek lagne mein waqt lagegaa!


Whatever you have thought, keep it simple and to the point..


Waiting expectantly for Part - 4!!

Do update soon..

Thanks for the PM..


Cheers, have a nice evening!

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