MG FF - Oh Saathi Re.... Thread 2 link Jan 6 pg 150 - Page 28

same chapter 22 updated again??

Originally posted by: Alamelu

same chapter 22 updated again??

Thanks for pointing out...

Editing....

geet dont show anything..........otherwise maan is going to get one point.........just b as u r..............

lovely update..........

loved it.............

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geat is jealouse seeing maan talking with payal a business partner

Great update!

So the J bug hit Geet...

And Maan is sure to notice it well enough!

Adi knows that Geet is Maan's personal secretary?

Kaise?

Well, jo bhi ho..

Geet and Maan scenes are too good even if apart...

Thanks for this update!

Try to prolong your dialogues.. it will get the reader to feel more!

Just suggesting!

Thanks for the PM.

And cheers to many more interesting updates...

hi thanks for the pm

how are you and your family?

Part 23

Fantabulous update...... superbly written

with dadi's help Geet is already way ahead of Maan in this challenge

of cos Maan is dismayed not seeing Geet around

liked how he admires Geet

Maan is indeed losing the battle

as expected Geet attends the inaguration

She does feel left out

at least Maan asked Adi to take care of Geet

not surprised that Geet is jealous seeing Maan with Payal

update soon

Very nice update dear

Who is this guy

Geet is jealous with payal

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

Maan was relief that today he don't have to act but she declared she is his personal secretary so she is also going on inauguration with him

He knows no use to argue with her he will get late and he always on time

There she feel left out as business talk started but maan signal adi to take care of her

Geet get jealous seeing maan hugging payal not making any social distancing like he have problem with her maan observing her and knows her thoughts

Part 23

Fascinating Update

Why is this Maan playing around , running away

from Geet

but wow I like that she got jealous

but Maan is the one that needs to really get jealous and that too very soon

Part – 24

Geet is keenly observing Maan and has forgotten everything else….

“hi gorgeous”

Someone greets Geet….

Geet turns towards the compliment’s owner….

A dashing young man with an enviable physique is standing before Geet….

He is the tall guy Maan was earlier talking with, he is looking handsome with a well toned body…

Geet: halo

“I’m Dev, Dev khanna”

“I’m Geet, Geet Handa”

Dev likes the way she mimicked him…

Dev: Adi, who is this black and white beauty? I haven’t seen her before

Dev is Mr.Khanna’s son … KC is doing business with them over a decade….

Adi: this is Maan sir’s sec

Geet interupts..: I’m Maan’s relative, I have joined KC for my internship

Dev: oh, that’s good

Maan is also constantly keeping a watch on Geet…

Dev: you look beautiful in this outfit

Geet: thanks

Dev: would you like to join me for a drink?

Geet: I don’t drink

Dev laughs…: coffee then?

Geet: chai

Dev: chai will work for me, come

Dev takes Geet with him…

Dev: so you are basically from

Geet: Hoshiarpur

Dev: I’m a sudh desi Delhi boy, just like Maan

Geet: hmm

Geet is still searching for Maan…

Maan has gone with that kaur..

They have disappeared…

Dev: my father is a builder, but I’m a model

Geet: ok

Dev: I want to be an actor, Salman is my idol, see

He shows his biceps…

Geet: good

Dev: you will soon see me in bollywood

Geet: next Salman bhai?

Dev: don’t I look like a star

Geet: you do

Geet laughs out loud…

Dev: I’ll still take this as a compliment

Geet: seriously, you have got the good looks

Dev: I know

Geet: so are you in talks with YashRaj or Dharma productions?

Dev: I know you don’t believe me?

Geet: no no, I was just kidding

Dev becomes her fan already..

Maan calls Geet….

Geet: halo, where are you?

Maan: I’m going to Gurgaon site, the driver is waiting for you

Geet is not happy with Maan leaving her like that…

Dev: what happened Geet? Who was that?

Geet: Maan

Dev: where’s Maan? I didn’t even see him, actually I haven’t seen anyone except you Geet

Geet: Maan has left

Dev: no problem, I’ll drop you

Geet: the driver is here

Dev: and by the way, tomorrow is my birthday

Geet: advance birthday wishes

Dev: no no, you should come and wish me tomorrow

Geet: tomorrow?

Dev: yes, I have a small boarty at the Meridian, you should come with Maan

Geet agrees as soon as she hears Maan…

Geet: I’ll be there, now I must be going

Dev: see you tomorrow

Geet: sure

Geet leaves…

She waits for Maan at KC…

She gets restless knowing that Maan has gone with that kaur…

She calls Maan….

Maan: bolo Geet, kya baat hai?

Geet: aap aaoge ya Gurgaon mein hi settle ho jaoge?

Maan could feel the heat…

Maan: tum abhi tak function mein ho kya?

Maan asks her back….

Geet: mein kahan bhi hoon, aap ko kya?

Maan: tum office aagayi na?

Maan gets a bit concerned…

Geet likes that better…

Geet: mein toh aagayi hoon

Geet hints that Maan has not yet come back…

Maan: mein bhi pohunch gaya

Geet is happy… she goes out to the lift with the mobile …

Geet: aap kahan ho?

The lift just opens and Maan comes out….

Geet: aap aagaye?

Geet runs like a kid waiting for the parent….

Maan didn’t expect such a welcome…

Maan is taken aback and he steps back into the elevator itself…

Geet gets in too…

The door closes…

Maan: kya baat hai Geet?

Geet: itne dher uske saath kya kar rahe the?

Maan is shocked by her direct inquiry…

Maan: kiske saath?

Geet: wahi, Ms.kaur

Maan: tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet: haan, mein pagal ho chuki hoon, aap uske saath kabhi nahi jaaoge, samjhe aap?

Maan: what? Are you serious?

Geet: I’m damn serious, don’t do this again

Maan: it’s purely business

Geet: you don’t need such a business, that’s my order, don’t you dare going out with her again

Maan: what if it’s a business meet?

Geet: ask her to meet your secretary hereafter, tell her that she can reach you only through your secretary, tell her that you need my permission to meet anyone, I’ll show her her place

Geet is very serious…

Maan: is this even possible? Does your words make any sense?

Geet: I don’t know, I don’t want to see her anywhere near you

Maan knows that Ms.kaur is into him and he has quashed her interests right there itself… she left in a fury and Maan went to Gurgaon alone…

Maan was just playing with Geet as he is amused to see her being possesive about Maan…

Maan keeps watching Geet in awe…

Maan: bas, hogaya? Aur kuch?

Geet: nahi

Maan: are you sure?

Geet: haan, abhi ke liye itna hi, aage ka toh aap ke upar hai

Maan: toh door open karoon kya?

Geet just then realizes that they are in the elevator…

Geet: mein khol sakthi hoon

Maan: ek minute Geet

Geet turns back and looks at Maan…

Maan: what were you doing with Dev?

Geet: talking business

Geet gives him a taste of his own medicine…

Geet opens the door and leads the way…

Maan had to wait a minute for it would look like he is following her…