Star Commentor Award (Part 48)
Winners: (Since every comment was so close to my heart, I couldn’t decide on one winner & runner up. So her eis the list of winners)
Kkiran
Taahir004
Creampuff
Umadevi 97
Alamelu
Special Mention: ferdouz
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): ferdouz,Kkiran, Creampuff
Congratulations to all the winners
Special Announcements:
Please share the story with your friends on IF or any groups to popularize it. The reader base is getting really low. Please help me out
-~-
Part 49
He knows she must be thinking of him as the villain; “the bad guy”
But it's ok, that will hurt her less
He is okay with Geet thinking like that about him
++++++++++
Ab kuch din hue
Geet ke doston ne Geet ko convince kia ki chalo hamare saath ye wo
Toh sab ek coffee shop mein baithe the, chatting and discussing notes on seminar...aur doctor wali cheezein
Geet excuses herself from the group and walks to a side
G-Why are you following me? I am behind you!
Maan turns looking like a deer caught in a headlight
Maan Geet ko chup chupke follow kar raha tha, since he saw her
Baat ye thi ki usko contact nhi karega , usko dekh toh sakta hai na
Geet is damn serious, arms around her chest
M-Hey!
She raises an eyebrow
silent treatment gazing at Maan
After a while he blurts
M-Shall we go out?
Geet frowns
Maan ki stupid wali smile
G-you...F-F...fu....fine!
Geet turns to leave
Maan is following
G-Not now. After my seminar
M-Okay. Got it
Maan stops
Where to meet? How to contact? Geet ne kuch bataya nahi
Let him figure out
Geet ko poora bharosa hai ki Maan ne follow karke ab tak yeinfo nikal li hogi
++++++
Ab Geet shaam ko apne seminar se nikalti hai
Maan wahin reception pe khada hai, hands in his pocket
Geet apne friends ke saath hai
“Hey! I have seen this guy follow you”
“Yeah, creepy stalker”
“Is he bothering you, Geet?”
G- Let him be for now. I will tell you guys if I need any help. See you, guys
She starts walking towards Maan
She doesn’t stop to acknowledge him and keeps walking expecting Maan to follow. which he does
Friends bhi peeche peeche aa rahe hain dekhne
Maan ne apni convertible ka automatic door khola remote se aur Geet jaake baith gai, as he drives
Friends are jaw dropped
A friend says, it’s like those cliche romantic novels i used to read
+++++++
M-How was your day?
Geet zor se music chala deti hai, enjoying view of countryside
Maan music dheeme karta hai thodi der baad
M-Should we go for dinner?
G-Cool
Geet ne phir se music chala dia
Maan ne music dheeme kiya 10 min baad
M-Any specific cuisine or place?
G-No
Geet ne phir music bhada diya
Maan soch raha hai, kahan jaaye kahan jaaye
Geet ka seminar countryside pe tha aur good places are in the city so 1.5 hours’ drive
Maan ne music cound kam kiya
M-You want pasta?
G-Okay
M-I make great pasta
He says, looking straight ahead on the road
G-Okay
Geet ne music badha diya
Maan ko laga k chillayegi, par kuch nahi boli
Geet ko kuch der baad chamka
G- You live with your family!
M-I live alone
G-oh okay
Kuch der baad phir se chamka, ki if he lives alone that means she is going to his place where they will be alone
G-oh...oh...OH!
Geet 50 baar “oh” bolke chup ho gai, ab Maan ko samajh nahi aa raha kya samjhe
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
343