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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the regular updates


Part 46

lovely update..... excellently written

sad that two months have passed and there is no contact between them

at least she searching for info on rehabs in London

ah its Valentine's Day

of cos she thinks about Maan

she is restless without him

so she went to the cliff where he took her

well she moved into another apartment

she is love with Maan

Geet's thoughts eloquently portrayed

hmm so she applied to be part of a 2 week seminar in London

this just shows that she wants to meet Maan

liked how she justifies her trip

wow she is on her way to UK

great that Maan is out of Rehab

why didn't he tell Geet?

she is upset.....

wonder where Maan is?

imagine if he is in India!!

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

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geet is missing maan

geet dint get any news or information about maan

geet is cursing maan as after meeting him she is not comfortable being alone

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 46)

Winner: Kkiran, Alamelu

Runner-ups: UmaDevi97, Khwaishfan

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Part 47

Geet was about to board her flight

Going through news and all on her phone

Business ki news mein ki, new deal ye wo...she skimmed through it

But nazar padi ki Maan ka naam ki koi deal crack ki hai Maanne and something

Her eyes widen

That jerk!

He is out of the rehab and didn’t even inform her

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Geet pohoncti hai London

Hotel jaake rest karti hai

Next day seminar karti hai

Seminar mein kuch friend bhi bante hain

Seminar ke friends plan banaate hain ki chalo seminar kebaad chalo chalo city ghumne chalte hain

Geet says ok

Full babes banke jaati hai unke saath in black leather pant,sequin blouse, wavy hair& dark lips

Pub mein jaate hain

The pub happens to be owned by Maan

But Geet had just casually suggested a place

Aisa nahi ki she calculated ki Maan ki deal uske office meinsign hogi toh he will take his clients to this pub for drinks

+++++++

Maan was with his clients in the pub

He was fiddling with his phone when his eyes catch something at makes him lose his interest in his client's blabbering

He gets up, looking around

He locates Geet in a booth with her friends

He is hovering around it, not sure whether to approach ornot as she is with a group

She notices him but chooses to ignore

Ab Geet dekh nahi rahi

Maan kya kare

Waiter ko bulwaake Geet ko tissue paper pe message likh ke send karta hai ki ‘come aside’

Geet uthke booth se nikalti hai, but side mein nahi hoti

She is in clear view of her friends and his clients

“Why are you hear?”

They say simultaneously but in varying tones

As Geet doesn’t answer so Maan replies-

M- I am here with my clients....I saw your fb post

She frowns

G-You are not in my fb

He looks down

She rolls her eyes, while folding her arms to her chest realizing that he had been stalking her social media

G-Jerk!

She is mad at him for not contacting but she is also trying to analyze if he is really ok

And secondly why should she get angry on him, he doesn’t matter to her

She argues with herself

Uska mann nahi contact karne ka Mujhko naa kare. I give a damn!

Usko koi aur mil gai hogi rehab mein

She turns to walk towards her booth

M-You…you look ravishing

She doesn’t reply and walks over to her booth

Geet baith gai apne friends ke saath

Kuch der baad ,Maan bhi clients ke saath side wale booth mein aa gaya

Geet ne kuch aur hi socha tha, his not contacting her has now pissed her off

Maan was giving side glances to her while they were on side-by-side booths

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Geet ke friends uthke khade hote hain nikalne ke liye

Geet Maan ke table se lag ke khadi hai, as sab nikal rahe hain...jackets pehen rahe hain baatein kar rahe hain

He whispers

M-Stay back. I will drop you

G-I will go with them

Still whispering, huh? Stand up and talk to me in open. Ask me how I am. Tell me why you didn't my contact me! This type of behavior of yours makes me feel like I am some dirty secret of yours and I want none of that thank you!

Geet is thinking in her mind

She feels she made the right choice not dating him

He is like how she imagined a rich brat to be

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

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nice update

geet is angery on maan as he dint tell her that he is out of rehab now

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Posted: 4 years ago

I can't with them,they both are something else😂,Their story always makes us laugh..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am at a loss of words with these two. What annoys me is Geet goes to London for the sake of a "seminar" but already in the back of her head she wanted to know how he is doing. He is doing great but now she pissed why didnt he call her, but if I recall correctly 2 updates ago she didnt want to be with him. Her actions really conflict her emotions and thoughts. She needs to get it together before Maan bids her adieu for good.

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi appreciate the update


Part 47

Remarkable update.... incredibly written.

well Geet is peeved with Maan

great that she goes out....

wow she is in the pub owned by Maan

looks like they were destined to meet

glad that Maan is also there

at least he saw her

not surprised that she ignores him

liked that he sent a message to her via the waiter

finally they meet and speak

of cos Maan Maan is fflg on the FB

Geet's anger with Maan is understandable

loved that he compliments her

Geet ignores him

so he wants to drop her

why is Maan whispering?

she takes it incorretly

sad that she thinks her choice was right in not dating him

will Maan be able to her opinion?



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Posted: 4 years ago

Dono ki mu hi khatam hone ka nam nahi lay rahi tu inn ki story kab start ho gi

Geet ka angry hona jaiz hai usse geet ka add pata tha kahan kam karti hai

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Both making assumptions for each other

Will they any time talk maturely to each other

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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