This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 14

Nice update..

Continue soon..

Amazing update

Loved their bickering

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maan confess that he like to spend time with her being real self

Congrats to the winners!

Part 6

terrific update..... amazingly written

of cos Geet thinks Maan is a creep

wow he ex is getting married and Maan invites her as his plus one

hmm she refuses

at least Geet was direct with Maan

so Maan teases Geet

She makes fun of his date and mimics her

well Geet wants to know what Maan wants

liked Maan's response....

as expected she is not convinced and doubts him

seems like she knows him....

great that he did not deny......

Geet's reaction is understandable

so what song did you have in mind when writing this update?

Guess: Geet attending her ex's wedding with Maan

Geet get right idea about him that he never leave his revenge but he admit he liked her company bz he don't have to pretend and Geet not behind his money too

Part 6

Lo phir se shuru hogai jagda karne..... so Maan was planning a revenge all a long the time and Geet finally got to know his intentions. Love the line were Geet says " Am I supposed to believe this? After kissing me 4 times for revenge you want saath? 🙄

Superb update Di awesome waiting to see what happens next.....

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Awesome update....😍😍😍

Geet is tooo muchhh...😲😲😲

Maan totally enjoying Geet company...😉😉😉

She just hit the bull eye with Maan true intention about his Revenge game...👏👏👏

He got shock how she can know about his intension....

But confused her with his talks...🤯🤯

Geet want to run away from him as soon as possible...💃💃💃

But he will not go happen that...

Looking forward for next part to know

How he gonna convenience her to go out with him...

Continue soon....

I'm not good to guess song...but want to know which song you used in this part...

Sooo please tell us also the name of song which you use in this update dear whenever you post next update....

This guy is good at his game. He is admitting to things to get her comfortable before he surprises her with an attack.

Congratulations on all the Winners on Part 5

Part 6

Fun Filled , Hilarious and Feisty Update

Maan been with Geet spending time with her

is just for his revenge yet he seems to enjoy his time

he is a totally different person when it comes to having fun

and just chilling

in the manner that both Maan and Geet speaks one would think

they have known each other for a long time

so Maan tells Geet her ex will be getting married soon

was he trying to make her angry

Start Commentor Award (Part 6)

Winner: Khwaishfan Taahir004

Runner ups: Umadevi97

Special Mention: Karamjeet, coderlady

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups

Note:Lets continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Lets see, who gets it most right

Song game: So for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Lets see part padhke sabke mann meinkaunsa song aata hai

Let me start with myself, waise I base every part on a song and the whole story also has a song. But for this part the 'Preet' song was stuck in my head. So the lyrics go like this-

Aankho ki choori se
Saanson ki doori se
Judte dil subah shaam hai

Aankahi baton mein
Khatti mitthi yadon mein
Pyar ka paigaam hai

Bin bole sab jaanta hai
Dil ko dil se bandhta hai
Kitna bhola sa ye pyar hai

Aankho aankho ka ishaara
Dil ko dil ka hai sahaara
Kashmo par aitbaar hai

Preet sab sachhi ho rahi
Meet sang pakki ho rahi
Preet sab sachhi ho rahi
Meet sang pakki ho rahi

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Part 7

M-I kissed you because tumne bhi koi acha nahi kiya tha ussdin... Mai chahta to tumhe pata bhi nachalta aur tum log kahan ke kahan gayab ho jaate... Lekin I appreciated your efforts for your family... Lekin hisaab toh barabar karna tha naa.. I think it was not harmful for you... Maybe you enjoyed... (he winks)

She gasps with shock

G-You are gross! You assaulted me...am I supposed to enjoy an assault? I should have filed a complaint for molestation. You just ruined it with your last line

M- Isse humor kehte hain... Come on Geet... Thodi toh akal use karo... Haina akal ya Piyush woh bhi le gaya...?

She goes and sits inside the car but on the driver's seat

M- What.??? Move in

G-No. I am driving. Sit

M- I can't trust a woman with driving

G-Whattttt????? you misogynic a-hole!! I hate you so much. What was I thinking coming here with you? You deserve that gold digger!

M- Whatever... Move in... Weekend pe din ke time chala lena

G-Fine! Drive...you had alcohol in your system that's why I offered. Anyways, my cab will be here in 5 min

She moves out banging his car door hard

M- Fine... Ye lo.

He tosses the car keys towards her

She is not talking to him anymore

She starts walking towards the road

This was clearly a bad decision, she thinks.

Everything to do with Maan is a bad decision

Why does she trust and like all these untrustworthy men?

She seriously questions her own decision power

M- Geet maine kaha na gadhi mein betho... I can't send you in any cab at this time...

Maan has concern in his voice...

She is not listening to him

She walks towards the cab as the cab arrives

Maan stands there still

M- Toh tum nahi aa rahi...???

She doesn’t answer him and goes and sits inside the cab

She is thinking to herself, I am a strong independent woman, I don’t need any man

Maan sits in his car too and follows the cab

She doesn’t notice that

But Maan ko kya pata cab wala sahi leke jaa raha hai ki nahi, he doesn’t know her address even

Geet bhi chaalak hai, usne carpool liya hai

As valentine’s day hai to saath mein ek aur couple hai

Geet goes and sits beside the driver

Driver starts driving

After a while the driver speaks up

Driver-Madam, ye car mein jo hain wo aapke saath the naa. Wo humein follow kyun kar rahe hain?

Geet frowns ki kya and looks back to realize Maan’s car following them

The other couple squeak ki- oh wow...your boyfriend is so romantic.... tumne toh mere liye aisa kabhi nahi kiya, jaanu

Geet rolls her eyes

G- Just ignore him, bhaiya...nautanki kahin ka

Geet feels he is a misogynistic creep like Piyush and she has no interest in doing the same mistake again

Maan who was following the cab gets a call on his cell phone

M- Ghar ke number se call...???

He picks up

M-Hello!!

Servant - Maan baba!! Jaldi se ghar aiye

Mama- Ramdin kaka... Kya hua hai...?? Pareshan kyun hain...???

Kaka- Maan baba... Malkin behosh ho gayi hain... Jaldi aiye…

Maan gets a shock of his life

Maan- Main abhi aata hun…Doctor ko phone kia...??

Kaka- Nahi baba... Mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha...

Maan- Acha aap mumma ke saath rahiye. Mai doctor ko leke aata hun

He hangs up the call and speeds up his pace to overtake Geet's cab

He stops in front of the cab and rushes to the front seat.

He unlocks the door...

Maan- Geet... Please mere saath chalo mere ghar

He sounds so tensed and frightened

G-What...kyun?

Maan- Mumma.... Wo. Wo behosh… Please chalo...

Holds her hand and drags her to his car