This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 13

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan interested in Geet past to know about her and planning to break her where she get hurt more

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the award!


Part 5

spectacular update..... amazingly written

well Geet cannot leave her food lol!

of cos she stalks her ex on social media!

Indeed small world as Maan knows Piyush!

hmm Maan wants to break her pride.... so is revenge is still on his agenda?

of cos he teases her....

can understand Geet's thoughts!

Maan wants to spend time with and asks out

Geet affected by his closeness.....

update soon


cannot think of a song.....

I guess they she may refuse to go out with him

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Posted: 4 years ago

he still has something up his sleeves. How is he planning to break her pride? What about his pride? Someone needs to break that too.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update dear

Maan plane to revenge with geet

Hope geet know abaut maan before it's too late

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice part.... They got some common enemies too now... But they talk so casually now like nothing happened but somewhere maan still has some revenge thought... But love their interaction...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hmm so Maan is trying to play her. Eventually he will fall for her I guess.

Hope Geet doesn't get heartbroken another time.

Interesting update waiting for next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Start Commentor Award (Part 5)

Winner: Creampuff

Runner ups: Karamjeet, coderlady


Congratulations to the winner and the runner-upssmiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32


Note:Lets continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Lets see, who gets it most right smiley2

Song game: So for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Lets see part padhke sabke mann meinkaunsa song aata hai




Part 6

M- Or may be my date has better taste of this ice-cream

He says wiping ice cream from her upper lip with his thumb and places it in her mouth

She is frozen at her place white as sheet

She berates herself in her mind. she knew this was a bad decision, but still she had to come with him alone

M- Chalein...?

She moves away agitatedly

G-No No No. You are a creep...I am not coming with you. Never!

She starts to book her cab while walking to a well-lit area

He follows her

M- Kahan jaa rahi ho? Waise, tumhare ex ki shaadi hai in a few weeks, mujhe invitation bhi aaya hai. Chaaho toh you can come as my plus one

Geet ke kaan khade ho jaate hain. But she curbs her curiosity

G-Not interested! You are creeping me out with your ice cream feeding and what not

She thinks of it as some sexual innuendo

M- Arrey aise kaise cheap? Ice cream maine tumhe hi to hi khilai hai... Khud to nahi khai....

He says this with a fit of a laughter

She stops shocked at his laughter

G-Why are you laughing?

M- Well.. Tumhari shakal dekh ke... Bhoot dekh liya hai kya..??? Hahhaha... Shakal dekho apni hahaha... Seriously..?? Tum darr rahi ho..???

She tries to normalize....will she even admit ki wo darr rahi hai

G- Mujhe! Mujhe tumhari ice cream khaani bhi nahi....ewww gross

She looks away.....continuing to walk

G- Tum! Tummm ice cream apni date ko khilao...haan usko hi...uska atitude dekha hai...."look at me! I have boobs!"

She rolls her eyes

M- Well she has!!! Didn't she...??

She gives an angry smile

G-Really? Breaking news Maan- everybody has!

She is just too on your face about it

G- Do you realize how much silicon she has in those?

She shrugs

G-Khair mujhe kya

M- What... How do you know...???? Mere itne kareeb thi but I didn't realize...

G-Hello...I am the doctor here. Tumhe waise bhi kahan kuch pata lagna hai, tumhe ghurne se fursat thi?

M- Ohh someone has noticed this too!! I think kahin se jalne ki bu rahi hai...

G-Whatttt??? Main kyun jalun usse?? I am just saying as a doctor aur log toh notice karenge hi...aise openly ghurna band karo phir

She mimics her...

G-O sorry Maan...napkin gir gaya....

She acts by picking up an imaginary napkin and does an over the top mimic

Maan bursts into a laughter at her mimicry

G-I tell you; she wants your money!

M- I know that she wants my money. Tabhi iss time main tumhare saath hoon yahan aur chahta hoon ki yeh raat kabhi khatam naa ho

She gives him a dead pan look

G-Seriously, what do you want? s*x?

Maan raise an eyebrow

M- Uske liye brothels hain I guess

He says giving her a convincing look

G- Maine sex kaha STD nahi. You just get STDs in brothel

She sighs

G-Then what do you want?

M- Nothing.... Bass tumhara saath... It's just that ki it feels like it's me... Mujhe dikhawa nahi karna padta jo main saara din duniya ke samne karta hoon.. Tumnahi samjhogi. Ab chalein? Thand baadh rahi hai…aur raat bhi

G- Lets make this clear. You say you don’t want anything from me...bass "saath" really? Am I supposed to believe this? After kissing me 4 times for revenge you want saath? No, you want revenge. I know it.This is some kind of plan of yours, Maan Singh Khuraana

Maan thinks for awhile ki how she gets to read him this perfectly... But yeah... He is THE Maan Khurana... How can he put his feet back?

M- Ohh you got me...

He Smirks

M-I kissed you because tumne bhi koi acha nahi kiya tha uss din... Main chahta to tumhe pata bhi na chalta aur tum log kahan ke kahan gayab ho jaate... Lekin I appreciated your efforts for your family... Lekin hisaab toh barabar karna tha naa.. I think it was not harmful for you... Maybe you enjoyed... (he winks)

She gasps with shock

G-You are gross! You assaulted me...am I supposed to enjoy an assault? I should have filed a complaint for molestation. You just ruined it with your last line

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Super.maan wants spent his time with geet.he is very comfortable with her.maansing kurana is laughing the world wonder.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hmmm. Geet is right in questioning him. She does get funny feelings when touches her lips to wipe one cream way

maan loves her company. Feels no dikhawa


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Posted: 4 years ago

HAHAHA cute update fab

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