This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 11

Part 4

A Comfortable and Fantastic Update

Maan on seeing Geet goes to her , yes both have become

comfortable with each other and probably they still did not realize it

Maan even eats from Geet's dish , it clearly shows his ease with her

while she so cutely complains he ate her food

I liked how Maan tells Geet he will buy her ice cream as if he knows

she will be satisfied with ice cream

Both Maan and Geet talk about their past and the reason they don't have partners

this is something they both did not hesitate but spoke freely to each other

they indeed share moments as if they are friends

They are actually getting pretty comfortable with each other. Sharing about their life.

Nice update..

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Waiting for next update..

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nice update

enjoy reading

bored maan join geet sending his date

maan share his past with geet that what hardship he face after death of his father

both are now in normal talking mode after some encounter with each other

song : kuch tum kaho kuch hum kahe

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Tremendous update. awesomely written

of cos Maan made an excuse and then went to Geet's table.

Liked how he ate from her food!

wow Geet is a foodie.....

I am surprised that Maan opened up to her

sad that he lost his dad at a young age and had to mature and take up responsibilities.

despite what happened, its great seeing Maan and Geet share their about themselves

hate what happened to Geet.... she emerged stronger and is guarding herself against being hurt again

sweet of Maan to buy her ice cream

update soon

Wonderful update dear

Maan ne apni girlfriend bhaga di geet ke sath time spend karne ke liye

Both sharing their past with each other

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

Maan left his date fr Geet and even ate her food too they were comfortable with each other

Maan shared his past with Geet listening him firstly she thought he must b drunk but he sense her action and told her he is not drunk he trusting her he asked about her boyfriend and she told how he was cheating her and now both together in velentien

Thanks for the PM

Loving this jara hatke new story

Geet celebrating valentine day with her food and Maan with salad wali bimbo but both ended up together, loved it

Maaneet both are so comfortable with each other now sharing their past, loved it

Eagerly waiting for next

Start Commentor Award (Part 4)

Winner: UmaDevi97 (for participating in the song game with her two songs) & khwaishfan (for heart touching analysis of Geet's character)

Runner ups: Taahir004 Aparna3011 (for participating in the song game)

SpecialMention: Psharma21 (for participating in the guessing game), Karamjeet (for noticing that yes, somehow MG ne kismat se valentine's day saath manaya)

Congratulationsto the winner and the runner-ups👏

Note:Lets continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Lets see, who gets it most right 😉

Song game: So for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Lets see part padhke sabke mann meinkaunsa song aata hai

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M- Toh tumhe dukh nahi iss baat ka..???

He was in awe seeing her calmness

K-Kiss baat ka dukh?

M- That he cheated on you

He was shocked now seeing her with so much involved in her doing and eating

G-Dukh aur gussa tha...uspe nahi khud pe...ki made the wrong decision... I trusted a wrong person...wo bevkuf banata raha main banti rahi

M- Tumne kabhi approach karne ki koshish nahi ki..?

G- Usko? Pagal hoon kya...I have too much pride

Maan thinks to himself- wohi to torna hai Geet… Aur main wohi todunga

G- par full stalk karti hoo main social media pe

Maan laughs at this-

M- Acha. Toh kaun hai woh...?? Main bhi toh dekhun

Geet aalti paalti maarke baithti hai

G- Apna phone nikalo...tumhare se stalk karte hain

M- Kya...??? Acha yeh lo

G-Arre kholke do social media

M- Huuuhh!!! Kya hoga tumhara…Ye lo…aur ye mujhe do. Kitna khaaogi!!

He snatches her ice cream and takes a scope

She searches and shows the profile

M- Piyush Raheja...????? Tum iske saath...??

G- Tum isko jaante ho?

M- Haan!!! Mera classmate tha aur rival bhi. Kaafi kuch saha hai iski or iske papa ki wajah se maine or mumma ne... aur koi nahi mila tumhe...?? He is a Casanova... Larkiyon ko use kar ke hi aaj paisa banayehain iss ne

G- Tum jhooth bol rahe ho! Ye mere school mein tha...iske school mein ajeeb se baal the.... I mean that's what he told me

M- Aur mere college mein tha... And what more he told you...?

G- Ki wo college ka topper tha

M- Liar!!! And how did you fall for him...??? Kab tak raha ye sab...?

She frowns at his intrusive tone. She folds her arms

G-Tumhe kya karna hai?

M- Acha theek hai…. mat batao... (Puts the spoon in her mouth) is sunday free ho.???

She is taken aback

G-Kya? Kyun?

She blurts removing the spoon

M- Kyun ki main free hon!! To socha kahin bahar chalte hain…Movie..??

She widens her eyes

G-Tumhari wo item kahan gai…aaj wali date?

M- Forget her... Woh bas waise hi peechey padi thi!! Toh... Before sunrise ki tickets book kara loon..??

Maan says trying to suppress his laughter seeing her face

G-Bakwas mat karo! Tum uske peeche padhe ho... you were going to be lucky tonight naa

She says nudging him playfully and gets off the car bonnet with a jump

M- Ab kahan chali..? Jawab to do!!!

G-Yahin hoon. Cab book kar rahi hoon

He gets off the bonnet too and whispers in her ear

M- Well…I think I am lucky tonight

Geet to thandi padh gai hearing him...she moves back few steps as her cheeks acquire color

G- I will book a cab. I should leave

M- Jab mere saath aayi ho toh chodunga bhi main hi. You don't have to go in taxi. Waise bhi, raat kaafi hogayi hai

G- I am used to night shifts

He opens the car door for her

She raises an eyebrow

G-Are you ok?

M- Get used to this too, raat ko kabhi bhi free ho shift seto mujhe bula liya karo…ab itna bhi busy nahi hoon main

G-What??? Seriously you are creeping me out now. Are you ok?

M- ammmm... Nahi bass kisi jungli billi ne kaat lia tha…

He touches his neck to show the scar deliberately where she hurt him last time

She gives a formal smile

G-I will make sure I keep killing you in my life goal

Maan steps forward

So close to her that he is just a few inches apart

They can feel each other’s warm breath...

She almost forgets to breath being so close to his warm yet imposing body

M-For that my sweetheart, you have to be with me for lifetime…

he whispers in a seductive voice

She almost loses a heartbeat and quickly moves away

G-I think your date mixed something in your drink

M- Or may be my date has better taste of this ice-cream

He says wiping ice cream from her upper lip with his thumb and places it in her mouth

She is frozen at her place white as sheet

She berates herself in her mind. she knew this was a bad decision, but still she had to come with him alone

wonderful update fab