"Tum Mujhe Yun bhula na paoge" NEW update part 6 , Nov 27 page 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Thank you for Updating


Part 2


Emotional and Fantastic


With Maan's memory loss , Geet feels she needs her baby

much more and perhaps I can understand her

as the first time she lost her baby and now she is not sure about

Maan's recovery but having their baby would indeed be a ray of light and joy

Maan gets headaches when Geet is around so maybe that is his reason

to keep her away in the Outhouse

wow I like that jelousy courses through him as he hears that Geet is pregnant

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Part 3


Deja vu.


It happened in the past. Someone announced this to him. 'I am pregnant' echoed in his mind. Who? Sam? Did she get pregnant?


He tried hard closing his eyes.


Side of his head began to throb with excruciating pain, blocking the blur vision which had been forming in his mind. Had it not the rallying which he held tightly he would have rolled back down the stairs.

He leaned back seeking the support of the wall. He concentrated on his breathing patterns as advised by his doctor.

After a few minutes the pain subsided so was the vision and so the reminiscences of a memory.

Instead of relief, dying pain stirred the storm in his heart. This girl...

His clenched fists tightened more. Raging shiver ran through him causing his giant self to tremble.

Instead of ascending the stairs, he climbed down.

..

..

………

God is merciful.

Savitri Devi looked up thanking the almighty. The merciful lord finally granted her wish.


Her eyes welled up. This time with happiness.


She held Geet's face lovingly and kissed her forehead.


"Aap janti nahi beat aap hume kitni badi khushi de rahi hain"


"So you were aware of her illicit relationship " Maan accused Savitri Devi

.

His eyes narrowed at Geet.

Shocked. She looked up.

Her watery eyes held his burning gaze ready to turn her to ashes.

His jaws clenched. The long sharp nose flared in anger.


"and happy too for the baby conceived of adultery…" he kept his eyes fixed on Geet.


"Maan…Aap jante bhi hain yeh aap kya keh rahe hain" Savitri Devi wasn't accepting such kind of accusation from her grandson.


'Jo sacha hain'


Geet squirmed at the allegation. She knows Maan has lost his memory but he has such a low view of her.


A shiver crossed her spine making her dizzy. She held the chair for support she had been standing by. Babaji aapne sari taklife bas mere nasib mein kyun likha babaji!. Isme bechare Maan ka Kasoor nahi hain...unhe jo dikh raha hain wahi keh rahe.


"Aur aap Dadima khushiya mana rahi thi iss baat….


Iss najayas bachche ka"



"BAS! Apne bachche ke khilaf ek aur shab nahi sunugi"


Maan glowered at her appalling her gall. She glowered and turned to leave for the outhouse.


She made a big mistake when she came here.




To be continued….

Edited by Samasya - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Very nice .. waiting for more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Part 3


Sad and Curious


Dadima is so happy that finally she will Maan and Geet's baby

her great grand child

but instead Maan accuses Geet so lowly

while he had thought that maybe in the past Sam was pregnant

hope there is no Sam to re enter into Geet's life to make it more difficult

Dadima is stunt at Maan's behavior

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Poor geet.allways face maan anger.wait for next.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3

Heart wrenching update.... greatly written

great that Maan is having some flashes of his past

but he thinks of Sameera!

sad seeing him in so much pain

of cos dadima is happy hearing the news

Hate Maan.....

he was so mean and rude....

dadima was indeed shocked

unknowingly he is accusing his own wife and taunting his own baby!

feeling for Geet

her anger is justified....

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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eagerly awaiting Part 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Anxiously waiting for Part 4


please !!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 1

Very emotional

Maan memory loss is very painful for geet

Now she is pregnant which she want share with maan but she can't bec of his memory lose

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2

Lovely update

Geet share the news of baby to dadi

And felt jealous hearing it

His mind didn't recognize but his heart yarn for geet

He is fighting with him self so his dilemma turn into anger on geet

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