MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 4

Wow, what a start....

But I must say there is no fun if there is not any fight between siblings😆

However, I must say this that bullying your sister or brother over their looks is definitely not right.

I know in teenage everyone goes through changes physical , mental but most importantly their emotional changes leaves a deep impact on any one's personality..

Everyone is conscious of their looks and images ..

Here kabir,'s reaction to have a repo among his frnds is also natural but it doesn't mean that he treat his sis like that and made fun of her with his frnds..

Poor geet, her teenage period is surely troublesome..but I do think she will tackle with her prem Bhai...

I really prem here...he is brother cum father for geet .so protective and caring ..

I loved how he threatens Kabir and even maan is scared of him🤣

I especially loved that part when geet about to complain about him and he escaped like a cat whose tail between itslegs...

These two r so mean ..I would love if prem them a nice beating😆

But geet is also challu ...😉 not only she scared maan but also make Kabir to give her his whole week pocket money..👏

Geet's mom n dadi r also nice...

I would b waiting for nxt update soon...

Haha There Are No Siblings who wouldn't Fight!

But What Kabir did Was wrong... Geet is in her juvenile stage so her Body is undergoing little changes physically and Mentally.

Loved Geet's Family...they all pampers Geet so much.

Ohhhh So Maan is her Crush! But he too did call her names.... When Geet transforms into a beautiful girl he will be the first to look at her with popped up eyes and Mouth in a wide O 😆

Prem is a caring Brother who wouldn't leave anyone who teased his Princess.... Haha Loved How Maan literally went away from there! And also liked how he Tackled the Guy in play ground 🤣 ab tho No one will come around to tease geet again!

Waiting eagerly for the next update

Awesome start of new FF ... congrats ...

Oh Geet is princess of her elder brother ... maan is also very close to Geet family and scared of prem ... ha ha ha ....what are their ages by the way ... is Sasha and Sheetal same age of Geet .... loved the concept ...

Wonderful beginning to the story

Geets own brother teases her due to which she is being shamed by almost everyone at school even masn does that but geet has her prem bhai to look after everything and take her out of every problem

Seems like something might happen in coming updates and geet would have to live a life full of darkness may be she wouldn't have anyone to take her out of darkness.

Continue soon

update was so funny...geet is pampered by everyone. Prem threatened everyone not to tease her 😆

wow lovely n interesting starting.........

geet is lucky to get dis much of love magar kisiki nazar na lag zaye............

loved it.........

That was a fabulous start. Geet is going through a teenager phase which is normal but kabir maan and all other friends are making fun which is not okay. But I liked how all the family sided with geet and took remand of kabir. I liked how maan and kabir were scared of prem. Oh that was cute as geet still have crush on maan as she complained about kabir but not about maan. OMG the scene with Jay was hilarious. Let's see the turn of teenager geet into beautiful lady as the story goes..

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Geet crushes over maan

Geet being teased and that to by her brother and his friends. And maan also

Love the bond between Geet and Prem.

Kabir and Maan are scared of prem hona bhi chaiye

Prem as protective brother was good.

Maan darr k bhaag gya he he he

Wating for nxt

such a lovely begining, possesive brother Prem n i luv his character already bt afraid as per the title i hope the story is not about the geet being alone in future or an orphan ......

d story is so differnet n i wish to c more of loving prem in future too......

Maan is such a bad boy n poor geet's crush hehehe

waiting for more

Prem is a great big brother. Geet will have to learn to ignore all those idiots who are superficial. She needs to look inside for who she is as a person.