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Ow poor geet is teased by boys whom she jave crushed but kabir sopil her image atleast he should stand for hsi sisiter instead himself is the reason like prem is a true supportive brother to support his sister n threaten that guys if someone have a bro like that no one can point finger on geet😊

Nice congo for the new story

Loved the start. The concept is something I usually enjoy reading with Geet being a nerd and Maan the hunk. They know each other from school .. and Geet is being ragged at school by one brother & her so called crush... aww poor thing! Glad she has her elder Bro’s support, Prem seems to have quite the reputation of getting ppl scared of him, and so sweet to see him being soo protective of his sister. Maan and the rest in school are also scared of him, lol. Want to read more and see how this progresses

Wow! I really do love your stories. This has started of so well. I have only recently started to read ffs and have now read a few. Your ff always manage to put a smile on my face when reading them. Great start and thank you! Looking forward to the rest.

I am in awe of the relationship between Geet and her elder brother Prem. That’s an ideal relationship. He’s soooo sweet and protective of her ❤️

Lol Maan and Kabir are both scared of him 😆

Can you please mention approximate ages of all four of them so that we have a better idea of their characters as the story progresses.

Aww Maan’s a bully to an extent and Geet crushes on him. Poor her 😭

I have a feeling that he’ll be crushing on her once she grows up 😃

And hopefully this time around you’ll be satisfied the storyline 😆

Hi,

Part one is interesting, so the young Maan and Geet and her brothers, Prem is the one protective and Kabir is the one a little carefree, and then we have the great Maan .... friend of Kabir and both scared of Prem.... Geet as usual the little delicate girl and teased for her nerdy looks and nature.... let us see how this story develops and moves ahead ...

Thnx

poor geet her own brother kabir teasing her with his friends

but prem protect geet from every body n warn every one including kabir to hurt get by teasing

How exciting a new story !!!

Wonderful start!!

Can totally relate to this story b/c I was sort of a nerd 🤓 growing up b/c I loved to learn ( please don’t judge me ) My older brother was embarrassed by me as well but he did stick up for me on some rare occasions.

Geet is definitely loved & adored by all her family except kabir, I am assuming she is the youngest. Her over-protective older brother Prem is a gem.

Geet is going through the ugly ducking phase right now but can’t wait til she blossoms & all the guys that teased her will be following her around !

Thank you for update & new story

Can’t wait til next part

Superb update wow it looks like geet do not have good look and everyone calls her with names wanna see her changed look waiting to see maan s reaction seeing a new geet

Congratulations on the new start to the FF. Prologue really caught my heart...It resonates with exactly what & how I feel at this moment...So am really looking forward to reading this FF.

A very very interesting start. Hahahahaha I love the way everyone loves & stands up for Geet. Especially Prem:):):) Woooooohoooooo!!!! Way to go Prem! Love you for this:):):) Kabir is a goner! Maan so narrowly escaped! Geet should have told Prem about him too. He was so worried:):):) Hmmmmm...but now nobody will tease my princess Geet...Wondering if Maan is a family friend of the Singhanias....But am I so glad that Prem came & gave everyone a damn warning! So excited for this one:):):)