MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 30

It was sweet and simple update....it was actually, majorly filled with the siblings bond which was nice to see but I am not able to write more about it....

I mean Geet was being her normal little sister-self with her brother and Prem and Kabir were the big overprotective brother with maybe a bit hint of where their future would be heading ( studying wise)

The thing that really got me thinking was Maan saying his father have advantage of disability and if that is true then is that the reason why his father beat him.....to take out his frustration and Maan is trying to be the good son and be their for his dad no matter what

The end part were Maan told Geet to stay out of his business was a bit rude but he is doing what he thinks is best for Geet and he is right somewhere Geet is young and she shouldn't worry about the situation but that also doesn't mean she should turn her back just because she is young

Right now I am not even sure if my comment is making sense so I am just gonna leave it here

I like this story. And read all parts and amazed by your writing skill sis. Here I am just loving geet and she is so sweet and with her maturity she is trying to help him.

Writing about him makes me more sad. And that's you speciality making me to cry when reading about him.

Yes it's so heart wrenching moment when own father abuses...

Like to read more when story unfolds

Hi, Belated Eid Mubarak!!!

Geet’s heart and mind is so gentle...far away from the atrocities of the world.... she is not able to comprehend that the situation that Maan is in .... its very common in most households.... she is raised and protected from every pain.... it hurts and worries her to see his pain and suffering... her anxiety and her stress increases when she sees him distressed... the happiness and contentment she felt when she saw him at her house eating well and being comfortable.... she doesn’t expect anything in return from him.... except share his pain and be there for him... do not know how will she react if he really decides to not share his sorrows with her anymore.... she is very affectionate and caring of all....love her bond with her brother and now with Kiara too.... her would be sister in law

Thnx

Interesting concept

Maan having bad experience with his dad at this age is so bad.. feeling so sorry for him after reading this

But why maan doesn’t want to speak with Geet now

Hope all goes well

Cont soon

Superb update..

But I hope maan also get to study with geet

I feel so sad for maan...it’s heartbreaking to see maan like this...all his dreams are shattering in front of his eye....no one deserves this kind of horrible childhood...his father snatched his childhood and life from him....can’t wait to see maan and geet falling in love and living a peaceful life...waiting for next update

shall wait for Chapter 8

Waiting it's been long please update 🙇

Hello. trust that you are well

Part 1

I know how you feel geet😔😔

Getting bully is very hard to forget

Kabir is scared to prem maan also hehe

Maan thought feet going to complain about him hahaha he run away from their

Prem has gone with geet to college nice teach Kabir friend lesson now they are not going to bully geet

Geet has feeling for maan

Nice story 👌👍