MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 27

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Posted: 5 years ago

Pt 5

Kabir is rude....How can he say so mean words to geet... What's ger fault if his so called pervert frnds say disgusting words for geet ...

One side he is fighting to Andrew for eyeing his sister but other he cursing geet to b there ...Such a hypocrite..

Infact maan is better than him..

I liked how prem not only warned that andrew but also to kabir for being so rude..But this kabir don't felt any guilt.


But I liked the last where maaneet sat in silence and aloofed from others..

And finally maan sharing his heart to geet..

Being both a support to each other not only in between the stars but also in the light of clouds...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Prem and Kiara are cute..❤️

Geet is excited for Prem’s marriage.. pestering him to bring Kiara home.. I’m sure everyone at home will love kiara.. and then Prem and her are so in love with each other..😃

I understand geet being worried about maan, but I was worried that if she got involved too much then maan won’t like it.. and I get him as well, he wouldn’t like someone worrying about him all the time and that too geet, she’s mature and all but still so young.. from his pov, she should be enjoying her time with her friends not worry herself over by thinking about him all the time.. and so it happened and worse happened over message.. he should have talked about it to her on why he wouldn’t like to share his problems with her, why she doesn’t deserve the burden of his secret and sadness.. I hope he still talks to her and explains his pov.. why he doesn’t want to be sharing all his problems with her..


Jay looks quite very interested in geet..😆 even after getting ridiculed by Kabir and knowing Prem, he still looks very interested.. I’d like to know how maan and Kabir would react if there’s a tiny bit of chance for geet and jay though knowing geet and jay’s emotional range of a teaspoon, that looks completely impossible😆

And sir Kabir talking about immaturity🤣

Though I kinda felt bad when he complained about geet and Prem gossiping like two girls.. I think he feels like he’s missing out when these two can share each and everything with each other.. 😒

So maan will start working now.. I hope he gets out of his house as soon as possible..

Looking forward to further updates.. maybe geet will be maans friend rather than just kabir’s sister😳

Thank you for this beautiful update🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

I started reading this too 😎😎

Entertaining part

Well well geet seems to crush on maan she didn’t took a breath to make Kabir pay but she didn’t complain about maan!?

Prem is super cool he loves Geet to bits well thinking of it except Kabir who goes on and on about looks her mom and granny too loves Geet a lot

Cute part

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Posted: 5 years ago

wonderful update 6… prem was concerned about geet who was upset and in thought of maan who was always punished by his father..geet was surprised to see Karthik apologized her for his behavior and told her he loved her as protective also....loved their convo when prem joined them.... awe geet wanted to look for boyfriend with the permission of her bro prem … "Sisters & Brothers are connected throughout their lives by Special Bond" … at thunder night geet was worried for maan as how he survived outside in the open so she went to seek him who was sleeping in the small shed made geet worried but he asked her to leave but she agreed to know the reason of his punishment ... hate his dad... next day geet was waiting maan for breakfast and got upset for not joining with them.. geet was curious about kaira & prem marriage... appreciate maan who had hell life by his dad still he had to put on smile & moved on …. !!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lots of twists

Geet turned into beautiful girl well I really didn’t expect her to b only 13 he he 🤪🤪thanks to Kabir she still don’t have a BF haww 😜😜she was happy Kabir and maan left

Ho ho maan and Geet are neighbours!? Jay was awestruck seeing Geet but prem was like a nightmare chasing him well he deserves that

Geet and prem bond was soo lovely but Kabir bad Geet share a ton and Jerry relationship cute

Maan was facing something awful and this wasn’t first tym seeing them sleeping bag he always covers his life at home but now Geet witnessed it and he was in a worry she might reveal something I don’t think Geet would do that!!??would she!?

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Posted: 5 years ago

wonderful update 7...loved it...geet was worried for maan who was not with them at bf... so she texted him with no reply... wow geet kiara's bonding was wonderful both behaved like childhood friends... geet told prem about her next college to join which prem got impressed... three had dinner together... at home maan joined Kabir as per aunty's request but he was searching geet as he wanted to speak about her concerned for him... maan got emotional to see family bonding... maan told prem he was not able to study further as to seek job then prem offered as intern in his firm... geet was angry on maan when he told her to stat away from his worried as she was innocent to handle it... excited for next...!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Geet and Kiara tunning is awesome. They are really getting well together. Geet told about future plans and prem easily agreed. It came as a suprise that kabir is also going to same college. Maan is suprised to know about geet's boyfriend findings. Geet is worried about maan and maan is worried about geet. They talked and maan said no that from now onwards he won't share anything. Please get some help for maan. I liked how prem came forward and talked about maan's job..

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Posted: 5 years ago

I don’t understand maan father!? He punish maan when he drunk and maan is his only child!? How can his father do that to him!!??

And maan wasn’t ready to share this with anyone it’s by dumb luck Geet saw his state and what he was going through and she urged him to let her in to share his feelings with her which maan was reluctant!!?

I wonder where this feelings leading to!?

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Posted: 5 years ago

This was becoming every day thing now!?maan father was he even human why he treat his own son like this!?maan was being hungry and thrown out of his own house!? Why he even punishes his own son without any reason I really don’t think just being drunk was the reason!?

What was he when he wasn’t drunk !?was he good to maan!?he cares for his child!? No right!?

It’s really good Geet was with him he needs someone with her but why I feel maan was still reluctant to allow Geet completely

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Posted: 5 years ago

Omg the last part just took my breath away, maan was getting beaten by his father n cud really feel the pain in the last dialogue, dat was so heart wrenching.........

I feel so bad fr him, geet is doing her best for Maan bt maan being Maan is so not ready to get geet divulge into all dis.....

Saw a new side of Kabir in this part, obvio he also loves Geet bt den insecurity among children is so common .....i loved deir convo n PRem is just awsome n for the first time I love another character much more than maan.....

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