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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 7

I don't blame maan for telling geet to study away.. even through she only wanted to help him but I'm sure it must be making maan really uncomfortable seeing geet worrying about him all the time.

like he said before this the time for geet to have fun and not worry..

but same goes to him as well.. it's not fair that at the time when he should be happy having fun with friends he is living in constant fear .. worrying about his future and planning to become independent...

I was hoping that maybe prem might help maan with University that way at least maan will be away from his abusive father for a while and can live his life in peace..

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 6

Kabir is not such a bad guy after all. He does care about his sister.

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 7

Maan does not want to expose Geet to what his life is like.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 2.


Interesting.


Geet is unable to date as no one dares to approach her as she is the geet singhania sister of Prem singhania. It feels so bad when everyone makes a distance from u. No one is talking to u or something. She is left all alone ,except for her friends. Poor soul.


Haha, that was funny geet called Jay as kabir's boyfriend making her nani go crazy. Poor boy is always left cornered with all the family members taking geet's side.


Geet n Prem had fun playing basketball.

Geet threw the ball in maan's garden by mistake.


Omg! What's that maan being thrown out n looks like he was beaten up or something.


He was in terrible pain n hurt. There was anguish in his eyes. He wanted to get away n forget it all. He was trying unsuccessfully to stop his tears.


Geet had witnessed this. She shouldn't have. She is too young n protected to witness anything of that sort.


She tried her best to cover up that she hadn't seen anything but maan understood that she did.


He was scared that she might reveal it to others. He was worried that everyone would mock him around. He didn't want anyone's pity or anyone mocking him around.

He had done everything to keep it away from all.


Well anyone in his place would do that to save themselves from humiliation n embarrassment. Whatever it is, it's his family matter n should stay indoors only.

Edited by maaneetsangel - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 3..


Interesting.


Maan came to meet geet. He pleaded her to not reveal his story to anyone. He also wanted to know what did she knew.


They talked n she was shocked to know that he was suffering so much all alone. Though he didn't reveal much but still, he went without food, his father abused him. He had no one to look upto. He doesn't have enough money.


These things are too much at his age. Still he doesn't have any bad feelings for his dad. He understands that he is going through a bad phase. Which is actually good upto some extent. He knows that his father loved him a lot. He is facing some issues n has taken to drinking , hence this torture. He is hopeful that one day everything would be fine.


Geet offered help. She wanted him to confide into someone, if not at least in her. She was adamant n made him accept n promise her that he would share it with her. He had to give though reluctantly.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 4..


Interesting.


Jay I feel has forgotten his treatment he got from Prem last time. Lolz. But I felt that maan didn't like him eyeing or thinking about geet. He too wants to keep her protected. He is thankful to her for keeping his secret safe.


He doesn't want anyone to pity him, or bad mouth his dad. He doesn't want anyone to talk about his personal life. He doesn't want to be a laughing stock.


He is going through so much at such a young age, where he should enjoy n plan his future. Poor boy.


My heart went to him seeing him going hungry. I hate to see anyone going without food.

Geet is such an angel. She gave him food n a shawl to protect from cold. She is trying to help him with whatever she can.


What an irony it is, there are two houses next-door, one is full of life, warmth, care , love n affection, where as the other is filled with only evil, hurt, pain, abuse.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 5 ..


Interesting.


Geet n her friends went to watch the football match.


Prem n kiara arrived. Geet was happy to meet her. They both instantly clicked.


Prem warned all the boys to stay away from geet.


Kabir behaved like a complete jerk. His friends have a dirty mind. He blamed geet for it. How is she at fault for their wrong thoughts. Why is the girl at fault always without any actual fault of hers.


It's her own brother blaming her.


Geet was hurt.


Maan consoled her. It looked like both are mending the other's injured hearts.


Maan knows how to keep his two world's separate. He is happy when outside with friends n in college. He enjoys every bit of it.


While in home he is tortured. What's his fault if he is so handsome at such a young age that the girls want him.


His father is not in his right state of mind.


Maan is really a strong boy.


Geet was shocked to know about his sufferings.


I liked the poetry. Those lines, in between the stars. They are so beautiful. Full of depth. Depicting the true feelings from their heart.

Edited by maaneetsangel - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 6.


Geet was upset about the whole fiasco. But she didn't complain to prem much to kabir's relief.


Kabir apologized to geet. He told her the reason why he behaved like a complete jerk.


Though his act was wrong but reason was to protect her . He could do in some other way instead of shouting on her.


They finally patched up.


Both the siblings shared a great bond just like tom n Jerry.


That's so unfair on kabir's part, he wouldn't allow her to date when he himself does that.


It's raining cats n dogs. Geet is scared of the thunderstorm. Still when she remembered maan, she the concern for him overtook her fear n she went for him.


My heart cringed seeing him suffering like that.

Poor boy, doesn't have a way out. But I liked what he said, it's between his dad n him n he would like to keep it that way.


Geet showed her care n concern for him which he appreciated but doesn't want her to do all this n witness his suffering.


Geet was waiting for maan but he didn't turn up.


Looks like he is not feeling well.


Everyone in the family are so cool n pamper geet a lot.


Nani is a sweetheart. I loved that idiom, sneeze like rainbow glitters.. Haha that was funny.


Prem gave her permission to date a guy her age thinking she wouldn't like to do that. But I guess he is underestimating his baby sister.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 7..


Geet spent time with kiara n Prem. They both became friends n clicked with in no time.


Geet is worried for maan. But he wants her to stay away.


Geet is going to the university of her choice. But Prem has asked Kabir to join the same university in order to keep an eye on geet, so that they could protect her.


Maan admired the bond between the singhania family.


Maan is going to look for a job n not continue his studies. He wants to be independent soon n can't afford the fees.


That's so unfair on his part. Hope he gets to complete his education.


Geet is hurt by maan's words. He actually is not wrong in whatever he said to her. Anyone in his place would do the same. He doesn't want her to worry for him n stress over it. He wants her out of it. She is too young to be a witness to his miseries.


She also told that it's cruel, abuse n stuff though she was only concerned about him n wanted to help him out but whatever it is , he doesn't like anyone bad mouthing his father or even thinking bad about him. Well anyone in his place would react the same way.

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Posted: 5 years ago

A very sensitive subject. It about children abuse .How a boy is been abused by his father he sleeps out in the open and nobody knows about his life. In morning again he is like smile and laugh with his friends but someone know nows about his pain .A girl his friend sister who has loving happy family. A brother like Prem .

Even being abused Maan doesn't feel its a crime his father is doing he thinks he is his father he has all rights to beat Maan but is it.

The most touched scene was when Geet handed him food in night in the garden. I would also like a elder brother like Prem. Kabir is also good .But the best his Maans character u have portraited in such away he is been at night have to be with out food but again in day he is a jovial person.U made us cry by writing his character no person should have such life. Your stories are fantastics but these is a smart piece.

HATS OFF TO YOU for picking such a different subject.

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