Maaneet New SS Yeh Dil Thread 2 last part updated on Page 14 11 dec

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Prologue

Yeh dil chahta hai tujko ashiko ki tarah

Dundta hai tuje deewano ki tarah

Ho durr par kaha manta hai yeh dil is tarah

Kyunki yeh dil tochahta hai pyaar tumara

Milu ga jab tumse lipat kar rohuga is tarah

Jaise barish ki bonde chumti hai mitti ko.

Mujhe mein tu or tu mujh mein sama jayega is tarah

Jaise mein tu or tu mera aks ban junga.


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Character sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : Future of Khurana construction but he leave everything and join politics and now he represent Mumbai as MLA . Hardworking dedicated and soft corners for poor and want to do something for them so their children cnt live in poorly and By the way he belong to Mumbai.


Geet : A very simple and sweet girl. She basically from HP punjab . where she lived with her Family and she is trained classical dancer and dance is her passion and yeah She is Maan Wife. they both love each other but now they all are died


Raj Singh Khurana : Maan Father and current owner of construction and he really not like maan to join politics but when someone praise maan he really feel proud. n btw maan Dad and Maan ki jyada nahi banti..


Sumitra singh Khurana : Maan mom. love his son alot and some time trying to defend his son infront of her husband. but belong to Village she have some kind of narrow minded thinking..


Savitri Singh Khurana : Maan dadima who live in village with her younger son and come mumbai for sometimes to stay with raj family as she not like this modern fashion and she to follow old rituals but she love Maan alot as being elder from all his cousin he is most who get his dada- dadi love.


Sameera Singh Khurana : Maan First wife. (rest abt her character you will know while reading)

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Index

Thread 1

Part 34 on Page 1

Part 35

Part36

Last part

Edited by tammana.m - 5 years ago
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Thank you guys for liking this story so much that we reached on second thread

Thanks alot (hugs )

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!!!Part 34!!!

So Mrs Khurana how are you feeling now? Ask maan seeing geet waking up. Geet throw her arms on maan neck and smile and said always good with my husband. Hmm.. that’s good. Saying this he give smooch on her lips and said lets go tumne Khanna be nahi khaya hai to which she noded .

After some months

In a bright day high breathing of two people can be heard clearly in darkness of room and soon as man left girl she quickly left the bed to collect her clothes and man smirk and as he show his face it is Sameera Boy friend Brij After wearing her clothes as girl come out she throw sheet on his face and man said.Why so angry sameera darling .. Tumhe jo mujhse chahiye wo tumhe de rahi hu.Abhi mujhe tum wo to jo mein chahti hu. Said sameera angrily. Man pull sameera towards him and make her sit on his lap. Sabar meri jaan.. sabar.. tumhe geetki maut chahiye na.. dekhogi tum bahut jald par tab tak tum mujhe saying this he start caressing her arms and placing kisses on shoulder. Us geet ko marta dekhne ke leye ab mein kuch be kar sakti hu. Said sameera hugging him.

Geet has now completed her 8 month and seeing her going to 9 month dadima arrange Godh bharai ceremony and as whole world know about Geet and Maan wedding so dadima think to celebrate their happiness with everyone. Here along with Sumitra looking for a good boy for sameera as and after knowing about their decision. Sameera parents really thankful to Raj and Sumitra. All KM is buzzing with different -2 voice as the arrangement of Geet god bharai is going on full swing. Dekhiye ise jaldi lagaiye aap ko lagta kal tak yeh decoration ho jayegi. Said Sumitra asking man ji madam aap fikar mat kijiye. Ok. Than she saw Raj and call him Suniye Aap ko jo meine kaam diya tha wo ho gaya hai na..ha baba ho gaya hai. Do not worry. Lo yeh be a gaye. Said Raj seeing his brother family. They share greetings and sameera come with water and snacks.When she left maan chachi could not stop to ask didi apko nahi lagta abhi sameera yaha rahegi to or baatein banegi .. listen this Raj n Sumitra look at each other ise leye humne socha hai hum sameera ki dusri shadi kara denge afterall she to deserve happiness .heard this chachi and chacha noded in yes and when chachi said meri najar mein ek Rishta hai.. that’s good. We will talk later about this aap log jaiye aaram kijiye. Maa kaha hai ask Raj brother wo apne kamre mein hai. Mein mil ka rata hu saying this they left and Raj and Sumitra get busy with work

Ok. Adi..I will see it ok bye. Saying this maan enter room and could not stop to smile.Aap phir hass rahe hai muj pe. Said geet . Jaan so what I do now. Mujhe nahi pata.. said geet throwing inches tape on ground. You every 2 hour check your weight and measure your tummy . Do not youthink I gain weight more now. Jaan you just check before 2 hours itni jaldi weight kaise badta hai. Listen this geet make face. Chaddo apko to batana h ibekar hai. Kya batana bekar hai ask Maan chachi who enter in their room to meet them. Chachi. Maan goes to her and take her blessing. Jeete Rahiye. Said chachi. How are you geet?ask chachi coming close to her to which she noded her head in yes with smile. Chalo I came to call you Bhabhi (Sumitra) is calling you ji. Chale said maan and he and geet left with her.

At evening sameera enter dadima room and seeing dadima Sumitra and chachi ji there she looked at them. Dadima aapne bulaya hai mujhe listen this dadima noded and looked at rest of two she take deep breath and with smile she call sameera and give her seat beside her.Sameera bahu. But then she corrected dekho betiya you know kal geet ki god bharai hai so hum sab yeh chahte thy ki dadima stop for few sec and said bahut sare rishtedar or Raj or maan ke Dost or party wale be ayege. So hum sab yeh chahte hai ki yeh acha hoga ki tum kal kissi ke samne mat hi Ao. Dekho beta galat mat samjana but tum wo Tv walo ko janti ho na. wo. Kissi be baat ka ..but sameera said its ok dadi. I will not come out from my room you do not worry.. listen this all rest women smile and dadima sent her back jao beta rest kar lo kafi der ho gayi hai to which sameera noded and left not without smirking akhir wo time a hi gaya .bas gujar lo aaj ki raat geet maan ke sathkal se to wo mera hi hoga. Saying this to herself she left.

Imp note : i need good response from u all...the lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad..if u want more n more updates from me. silent reader wake up dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec

Disclaimer: any scene or situation of this ff is an imagination. If any action match to any other thing that is merely a co-incident. I haven't copied any scene as far as my knowledge and I want to let u know beforehand. Still if anything matches it will be only a coincident.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update. Its geets baby showe. Hope her life is not in danger

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Awesome update. Sam is playing dangerous game. Geet wright problem.

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Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Nice update

Waiting for next update...

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Nice update.

Sameera planing geet death with brij.maan family try to found groom for sameera.family plan geet godh bharai and they want sameera not attend this fuction.geet life in danger hope everything goes fine.

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