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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 119


Perfect Update


Gaythri is now thinking on Dadima's words

and she has a talk with Dev too

its great that she accepted the fact that Dev can be happy with someone else

Loved Dev and Maan's conversations

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 120


At Hoshiarpur…..

Maan makes use of every moment he has got at Hoshiarpur…

He wants to be with his family all the time, which won’t be possible elsewhere…

He is kind of getting addicted to being with Aditi and Geet 24*7….

Geet also enjoys getting all his attention all day starting from the morning masti to the naughty nights…

Maan has turned into a total romantic… maybe it’s the result of his 5 year dry patch…

Aditi on the other hand is slowly getting used to Maan’s company as nowadays she spends more time with Maan than Geet… Geet doesn’t mind that as she quietly enjoys watching the two having fun…

Geet is taking her swimming classes from Maan and is progressing well…

She’ll learn before Aditi for sure..

Time flies and they have to return to Delhi… Maan has arranged the pass for them finally…

Both of them are missing this life at Hoshiarpur…

They are not ready to part with what they have been experiencing in these few days…

They know that it’s going to continue, but still that would be different…

That evening…

Geet is doing the packing…

Maan comes with Aditi…

Geet is not in a good mood..

She is trying to pack while her mind is thinking about leaving all this behind and going back…

Maan: Geet, tum akhele kyun karthi ho? Hum bhi help karthe hai

Geet: it’ll be great help if you two stay away

Maan: are you sure?

Maan tries to get the bag from her hands from behind, but ends up hugging her instead…

Maan: I know, it’s not easy

Geet: I just want to be like this forever

Maan: it’ll be

Geet: you’ll be always with us na?

Maan: obviously

Geet: aaise hi har waqt hummare paas rahoge na?

Maan: aaise toh tum bore nahi ho jaoge?

Geet: toh aap ko bore ho raha hai kya?

Geet turns back to hit hMaan catches hold of her hands to stop her…

He just keeps admiring her…

Maan: aaise drama queen samne ho toh mein bore kaise hotha?

Geet: mein drama queen hoon?

Maan: Aditi se poochte hai?

Geet: chodo mujhe, Aditi dekh rahi hai

Maan: woh toh rooz dekhthi hai Geet, Aditi, come here darling

Aditi comes….

Maan: hum chor police khelte hai, Geet humari kapde churane aayi hai, dekho

Maan shows how Geet is packing all the stuff…

Aditi: haan, chor chor, Geet chor

Maan: hum police haina?

Aditi: haan

Maan: dekho meine chor ko pakadli

Aditi claps… : hum jeet gaye

Maan: ab isse arrest karenge

Maan puts Geet’s hands behind her back…

Geet: Maan, kya kar rahe ho aap?

Maan: chup bilkul chup, tum chor ho

Geet: ye kya bakwaas hai?

Maan: Aditi, get the duppatta

Aditi runs and takes it… she gives it to Maan..

Maan ties Geet’s hands and makes her sit on the chair…

Maan: ab chup chap yahan beijao, hilna mat

Maan pretends to threaten Geet…

Maan: Aditi, issko dekhna, kahin bhaag na jaye

Aditi goes and keeps watching Geet…

Maan does the rest of the packing as he keeps conversing with them non stop….

Geet too joins the act as this us what she wants… the trio having fun together….

Maan assures her that this is not the end but just the beginning of their long journey together….

Geet knows that Maan will do anything for them…

They start off to Delhi next morning….

Aditi is still asleep…

Geet is unusually quiet…

She is thinking about meeting the Khuranas after the truth has been revealed…

She is scared about their interpretation of the truth…

Maan: Geet, tum bhi so rahi ho kya?

Geet: hmmm

Maan: aaise muh lagake beitoki toh mein kaise gadhi chalatha hoon Geet?

Geet: nahi who

Maan: kya hua?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: mein hoona tumare saath, ab kya ho sakta hai Geet?

Geet: nahi, agar koi pooche ki meine sach ko itne din kyun chupaya toh mein kya karoon?

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hoga, sab tumare mushkilon ko samajhthe hai

Geet: shayad Dadima se ye baat kehthi toh woh aapko rokhthi

Maan: ab tum aaise kaise soch sakthi? Jo hona tha, hogaya, isme kissi ka kam aur kissi ka zyada dosh nahi hai

Geet: par woh mujhse baat hi nahi karna chahte the

Maan: Geet, bhool jao sabko, warna mein apne aap ko kaise maaf kar sakta hoon?

Ye baat Geet ko bahut pareshan karthi hai…. Geet bar bar Maan ko hurt karna nahi chahthi…

Geet: aap bhi bhool jao, aaj se badh mein aaise batein nahi karoongi, jab aap hi mere paas ho toh mujhe kissi aur ki kya fikar hai, mein sach mein bahut kush hoon

Geet holds his hand and assures him that she is really happy….

Maan: mein sabse baat karoonga, aakhir ye meri bachi hai aur woh mera pariwar hai, ab mein akhela nahi hoon Geet, ab tum meri sabse badi takaat ban chuki ho, ab mujhe koi pareshani nahi hai, mein aasani se sab ko sambal sakta hoon

Geet: Meine kamakaam aapko pareshaan kardhi

Maan: mein toh kush hoon ki ab tum apne mann ki baat mujhse khulke karthi, mein bas yahi chahtha hoon, ab mere liye tum ho, tumare liye mein hoon aur hummare liye Aditi, mein aur kuch nahi chahta hoon

Geet: mein bas aaise hi hamesha aapke saath rehna chahti hoon

Maan: ab tum chaho toh bhi mein tumme mujhse dhoor nahi jaane dhoonga, samjhi tum

Geet: mein sab samajh gayi, iss ek mahine aapke saath rehke mujhe patha chal gaya hai ki aapki kushi kahan hai, bas mein aapko aaisa hi kush dekhna chahti hoon

Maan: tum mere saath hai toh mere liye kushi aur gham ka koi farak nahi padta, ab mein na kushiyon se dartha na hi gham se

Geet: shubh shubh bolo na, ab kya gham hai aapko?

Maan: haan, iss janam ka sara gham katam ho chuka hai

Geet: shayad aaisa hi ho

Maan: tummare liye toh mein guarantee de sakta hoon Geet

Geet: aur aap ?

Maan: Geet kush hai toh Maan bhi kush hi hoga

Geet: bagwan kare aaise hi ho

Maan: ab bas tum muskurate raho, I get all my energy just from that smile of yours Geet, now I want to live longer

Geet: me too, as long as you are with me

Maan: I love you Geet

Geet: aur kitne bar bologe?

Maan: what a response? You are really great Geet

Geet: you can’t escape with just saying it

Maan: I understand, but I can’t stop saying it

Geet: I love to hear it too

Maan: then what’s the problem?

Geet: bas sabke samne mat bolna

Maan: kyun?

Geet: Maan, aap din mein so bar bolthe ho

Maan: meri marzi

Geet: aap se baat karke koi faida nahi

Maan: mujhse baat nahi karthi toh mein sojaoonga Geet

Aditi wakes….

Geet turns back and looks at Aditi…

Geet: Maan, gadhi rokhna

Maan: kyun?

Geet: Maan, Aditi ko susu karna hai

Maan knows that from the look of her face… he has learnt his lessons as a father soon….

And their journey continues…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally Geet and Maan are going back to Delhi. Waiting to know what happens next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm

Part 120

Beautiful update.... well written

glad that Maan, Geet and Aditi got closer

of cos Geet does not want to go back

liked that Maan senses this and assures her

Geet's thoughts are reasonable

loved their convo

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

120

geet is not happy as they are going back as she wants to be with maan like shw is at hoshiyarpur

maan make geet understand that everything will be fine n everyone will understand her n never think any wrong of her

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update dear

Maan and geet back to going delhi

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 120


A Lovely Update


Both Geet and Maan don't want to leave Hoshiapur

but both know that they have to return to Delhi

Geet was worried but realized with Maan by her side she will be happy

and can face everyone

while Maan himself says the same

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely part

Finally meeting family now

Cont soon

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. Both of them if they could would just lock themselves here itself. But life has to continue.

They are so open with each other now. Maan says a million times that he lives her but why does she not say it to him.

She is afraid how dadi would react to her


she does not realize dadi is so happy and feels bad for the past

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Posted: 4 years ago

lovely update................


loved it vey much.............

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