MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 48

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 74

exceptional update

as expected Geet blames Maan

at least Maan know she still loves him

will he get her to open her heart?

but for this to happen they need to talk and clear everything

Annie tells Geet she wishes she was not married to Dev so that she and Maan could be together

Geet and Maan's happiness lies in each other

so Dev and Pari leave

glad that Pari and Maan are now friends

great that Maan gets to spend time with Pari

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

74

nice update

geet thinks maan purposely stop her

maan said geet that her eyes now also telling him how much she loves him

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Guess maaneet will talk soon

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet mu Maan again fr hiding Pari but Maan didn't cleared her mu that it's was surprise from Pari

Hope Annie words about her wish make Geet think she should not spoil dev life bz she never going to give him love which he deserves

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 75




Geet is in the Oh...


The servants have kept her bags in her room...


Geet goes to unpack them for they are going to stay back for a few more days even though Geet wants to leave as soon as possible.....


Geet finds a new bag which is not one of her's....


Geet thinks that it might be Maan's ....


The servant must have kept it there by mistake instead of keeping it in the other room....


She calls him and aks to take it to Maan's room....


Servant: m'am, ye aapka hi hai


Geet: mujhe patha hai ye mera nahi hai


Servant: ye Maan sir ka nahi hai


Geet: tumme kaise patha?


Servant: Maan sir ka bags unkke car mein hai, ye dusre car mein tha


Maan packed his thngs and kept in his car along with Dev's as he knew that Geet won't feel comfortble staying alone with him at the guest house....


Now that she has become more comfortable at KM Maan thought he would also come and stay at KM itself....


Maan knew the servants would mix up the bags and so he sent Geet's things in another car....


Agar galthi se bhi mix up hotha toh Geet ko lagega ki Maan ne zabardasthi mix up kar diya hai, Maan wouldn't want to take any chances.....


Geet sends the servant off and keeps staring at the new bag for a while....


She is curious to know what's in that even if it was Maan's....


Geet gets impatient and opens the bag.....


It's full of toys and dress for Aditi....


So, it's Maan's gift for Aditi....


Geet then gets excited to know what he has selected for her.....


Geet is expecting something from Maan? that's a good sign....


Geet looks thru everything and finds nothing....


She is really disappointed....


Maan aaise kaise kar saktha? haina babaji?


Geet itna bhi kya expect karegi? keemthi jewellery? bas ek chota sa perfume.... haina?


Maan ko patha hai ki Geet ko perfumes kitna pasand hai, haina?


aur Geet usko Maan ke yaad mein apne saath rakh lethi....


Why is Geet thinking like that?


Why does she want to keep Maan in her memory forever?


Geet consoles herself that it's better that Maan didn't get her anything for then it wuld be like clinging to her past again, haina?


Aditi has finished eating her chocolate finally....


she took her time to enjoy it for there is no one to stop her in the middel....


Geet ya Dev hothe toh they get their share which is too big than her's....


Maan didn't even ask for a bite....


Aditi likes Maan for that.....


After finishing every last bit to her full satisfaction Aditi looks up at Maan and smiles....


Maan: do you like it?


Aditi: haan


Maan looks at her dress, hands and face full of chocolate....


Maan pulls over to help her clean....


Aditi asks water....


Maan pulls over at the side and looks for his bottle....


Maan gets his bottle but Aditi wants her sipper only....


Geet has not sent it for she didn't know Aditi is going with them....


Aditi: ye mera nahi hai


Maan: ye toh naya hai


Aditi: mujhe mera sipper chahiye


Maan: ye meine aap ke liye hi liya hai


Aditi: aap kyun mere liye laye ho?


Maan: Geet ne hi diya tha, aap ka naya sipper'


Aditi: ye toh bada hai


Maan: aap ab bade ho gaye na?


Aditi: haan haan


Maan: toh aap ka sipper bhi bada ho gaya


Aditi: achcha?


Maan: haan, ye lo


Maan somehow convinces Aditi to drink the water....


Aditi grabs the sipper and drinks...


Maan holds it for her to help....


Aditi finishes drinking and looks at the new sipper with chocolate stains...


She immediately tries to clean it with her hand making it more dirty....


Maan: ye kya kar rahe hai sweet heart?


Aditi: mama dekhegi toh bahut daantegi


Maan: achcha? aap Geet se bahut darthe ho? woh aap ko bahut daandthi hai?


Aditi: haan


Aditi replies as if it's a reflex then thinks and corrects herself....


Aditi: nahi nahi


Maan: haan ya nahi?


Aditi: nahi


Maan: are you sure?


Aditi: haan


Maan: chalo mein Geet ko daadtha hoon ki aage aapko aaise nahi daante, ab aap bade ho gaye na


Aditi: haan


Maan then takes out the tissue and cleans the sipper and helps Aditi clean her hands and face....


It's all still sticky....


Maan gets her down and washes off with water....


Aditi then shows her frock.... it's all dirty....


She tries to wipe it and makes her hands dirty again.....


Maan holds her and removes her dress....


He then washes her hands again....


Now she looks all good but half- naked....


Aditi: mera dress


Maan can't wear that dress again for Aditi....


Maan then looks in the bootie for any dress....


He has only got his dress....


Maan takes a flexi tee and puts it on Aditi...


it looks like a full dress for her but she looks cute....


Ab toh Geet kush hogi, haina?


Aditi ke saath saath ab Maan bhi Geet se darne laga....


Aditi is happy with her new dress.....


Maan: achcha haina?


Aditi shows a thumps up....


Maan is happy that Aditi didn't ask for her dress itself.....'


Aditi Geet ki tarah utna bhi ziddi nahi hai...


Maan: toh chalein?


Aditi: haan


Maan then talks with Aditi on the way back....


Maan: what's your friend:s name?


Aditi: Mumbai friend ya Delhi friend?


Maan: Delhi friend is Diya, right?


Aditi: haan, Diya aur aap ka naam kya hai?


Maan: Maan


Aditi: hmm, Diya and Maan


Maan: so I'm your friend?


Aditi: haan


Maan: am I your best friend?


Aditi thinks for a while.....: nahi


Maan: then who is your best friend?


Aditi: Vivaan


Maan smiles.....: woh kaun hai?


Aditi: Mumbai friend


Maan: school friend?


Aditi: haan


After a bit of talking Aditi falls asleep....


Maan drives slowly so that she can sleep comfortably....


Maan's first drive with his daughter alone.... Maan is a proud father.....


Maan keeps looking at little Aditi and drives happily....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan and Additi together. Nice update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 75

terrific update....

great that Maan knows Geet well

nice that he got something for Aditi

well Geet expected something for her as well and is dissapointed

glad that Maan and Aditi are spending time together

update sooon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet still not over Maan but her mind saying it's over but heart not

Maan is happy spending time with his daughter alone

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75

maan n aditi spend quality time

aditi become more relax with maan

maan enjoy time with his daughter aditi

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 75


Fantastic and so Lovely Update


Maan and Aditi together was so beautiful

the way he cares and he is also so convincing

to Aditi

while Geet now learns the new bag contents toys

and clothes for Aditi

and she is disappointed that Maan did not get any

gift for her

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