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Posted: 6 years ago
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He came out of his house and was about go, when he noticed her, coming from the other side. That very familiar feeling of restlesness came back to him as soon as he realised that it was only two of them there, otherwise the lane was empty. He thought that was the best opportunity and he may get the chance to talk to her. But it wasnt that easy, given the way she was hell bent on avoiding him.

She was her chirpy self, lost in her own world...until she noticed him! And instantly, she became silent &nervouss. She dipped her head, ending any possibility for an eye contact.


He still stood there impetiently...not knowing what to do? She was coming closer with slow steps , would soon pass him and he didnt know how to approach her. He kept looking at her with a longing.

And just before she was about to pass him.. She looked up hesitatingly...allowing his eyes to meet hers! And making his heart to skip several beats!


He stood rooted to his place, his heart beating uncontrollably, with what he saw in her eyes. Their eyes had met only for a few seconds...but in those few seconds, she had let him to have glimps of her heart, her emotions. There were so many things in her eyes...fear, nervousness, hesitation, excitment & in between all these, there was something else too...something which he had been searching for.. .

And with that, she just passed by him...leaving him behind!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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res

Theres far too many OSs from you to read, i will read and get back as soon as

Thank you for writing on Maaneet😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Shonaa you're on a roll.
You're increasing the forum traffic tremendously. Thank you for that sweetheart.
Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww one more
Thank you
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You are spoiling us ..ok atleast me
I always search for your story as soon as log in to IF
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Finally both saw each other at same time
Maan saw the same emotion which he feelings for days now
Their eye talks changed something between them
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Posted: 6 years ago
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There were so many things in her eyes...fear, nervousness, hesitation, excitment & in between all these, there was something else too...something which he had been searching for.
Can he sleep tonight ..sure he won't
But Damn their this small interaction through eyes so touching especially when he realised may be she too feeling same as him
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Posted: 6 years ago
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wonderful update! perfectly written... that one look and their eye talk said so much!!! great that he realised she has feelings for him!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful and Amazing Part

Finally the his and seek is slowly coming to an end
as Geet too looks into Maan's eyes conveying the message he
so desperately seeks
now waiting to see what will be Maan's next move
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow you're on a roll🤪so many beautiful OSes to read.. eye contact and teenage crushes ... so lovely

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