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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Congratulations on ur new story dear

Liked it!!

Liked the song you choose to depict the scenario. Well knitted story. Maan was all lost to find his dream girl everywhere but found her around his neighbourhood. Maan has fallen for Geet hard but Geet is obvious of his existence and his admiration for her. Glad that Adi's words made Maan feel insecure and Maan was determined to Maan Geet notice his presence and his feelings for her.

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Sure...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3613254/kissa-hum-likhenge-index-updted

@Keepdreaming: Thanks for asking dear...😃 I did not even think of it...

@Shonameet: Thanks for sharing your index 😃

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#33

lovely one shot, the way it depicted the starting phase of love.

the feeling so beautiful and delicate, of attraction, of fascination towards that one person who is capturing the entire mind and world..the feeling of falling in love.

I loved the water droplets part, he was so mesmerized, as if he was standing close to her, his mind completely on her moves, and with a reflex action he turned around to save himself from the droplets.

and then realizing that she is oblivious to his existence, he became restless, he wanted her to feel if not in the same way then at least know about him, and that will happen when he enters into her world by drawing her attention to him even if it is for a moment for that is not the end but a beginning.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Sure...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3613254/kissa-hum-likhenge-index-updted

Lovely collection ... you seems have different writing style with songs

Will read ... do pm MOD to open your thread

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Shonameet

This emoji is so cute yaar...
It looks like someone is writing a love letter for the first time. . Kahin ye maan toh nhi. .😉😆

Take ur time.. 😊

😆

it is for the inspiration of writing. the name of the expression/emoji is inspiration..😆

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

@Keepdreaming: Thanks for asking dear... 😃 I did not even think of it...

@Shonameet: Thanks for sharing your index 😃

I always greedy for more 😉

Thnx @shonameet