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Posted: 6 years ago
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very natural story beautifully scripted... would love to know the ending..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

hey dear,,,

this was such a beautiful piece of writing...
I loved the song that you chose to depict the whole scenario...

Maan sure is a goner behind Geet and such a stupid he is to be finding her everywhere and not around his house...lucky him that he spotted her around in the neighbourhood...

Geet seems to be obvilious to all the attention she is grabbing by her warm and calm nature...

She really did manage to capture his heart and mind...poor him is completely charmed by her...his insecurity that she may not even know that he existed was kinda cute...

loved how he did not shy away to meet her gaze...
loved his new found determination to make her aware of his feelings...

It was lovely...

Hey.. 😊
Thank you so much for ur lovely response dear. .. Glad that u loved n enjoyed reading. .. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

Hey.. 😊
Thank you so much for ur lovely response dear. .. Glad that u loved n enjoyed reading. .. 😊


I am kinda hoping...not only me but many others are kinda hoping that you could maybe continue this sweet story??

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Are you planning to continue this one?

or have I interrupted the flow of your posts? 😕😲
I am sorry if I did that...

No need to be.. .Don't worry.. 😊
Have not decided anything yet... I am really not sure..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma


I am kinda hoping...not only me but many others are kinda hoping that you could maybe continue this sweet story??


Pleased to know that & trust me its totally my pleasure that my writing gets all ur love n support..

Right now I don't have any proper idea to take it forward..

Let's hope... That we would be able to complete it some day.. May be..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

welcome back!!! how are you?


thanks for posting!!

terrific update! superbly written! Lovely song!

Maan is totally smitten by Geet! of cos he cannot stop thinking about her! but afraid that he that she does not know that he exists!

can understand his feelings!

loved the moment when their eyes met for the first time!

great that Maan is determined to make Geet notice him and his feelings!

hope you will continue???



Thank you dear. .😊

I am not sure about continuing... Let's see. .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Wow..New story!!!

Lovely start...

Maan is in love with Geet and in the total romeo mode..However Geet being oblivious to his amour is spending her days casually!!!

Let's see if Maan bucks up and that day comes when he will tell her his name!!!

Congratulations for the new story,,,Continue soon!!


Thank you... Hope so.. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: babelicious

Hey... soo good to see you back on the forum. As such a good piece as usual.. so lovely.. teenage love story.. and first love is one of the best concepts to read on Maaneet..

hope to see you more here.. all your stories are my favorites and bookmarked literally...

Thank you so much dear.. Happy that you liked them all n this one too.

Me too hope so... 😊

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