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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Feeling really sad to see geet losing her mentel balance😭 bcz of jay😡

Like how maan left his hospitwl n taking care of his wife separately feeling bad to see that her children her deprived of motherly love😭

loved this os its really emotinal n heart touching 👏

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Hi,
Very happy to read yet another One Shot from you... interesting story... different but again a beautiful love story... can see the love in Maan's heart for his wife even though he knows she may or may not ever recognize him... she may always be under the same effect of her misery... she may just remember her abuser and never recollect her life before her abduction.., her life with Maan and her child may always remain a dark past erased from her memory... but Maan's relentless perseverance in trying to bring her back and just living for the day when his Geet might get back to her old life... moving forward with a slight ray of hope of seeing her get better..
Love it...
Thnx

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Nice concept

Doctor was filled with hope to cure his patient who happens to be his wife

The taurma what she went for six years being

Captive and getting absued everyday she doesn't remember her family her daughter only the person Jay who had tourched her

I think open ending seems to be like real rather than a happy one or a sad one

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nostalgicmoon

@nostalgicmoon

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

I don't know how but I took two days completing this single piece..But at the end what i am feeling is something thats incredible...Maybe because of my mood.. but hopefully maan getshis life back..Because sometimes its one person that we needs to complete our life and if they are not there it will be more than incomplete

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change12

@change12

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

nice story please continue.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Aweesome one .Lovvvd it. Would love to read a happy ending for this.. Hearing about tjhis syndrome for the first time.. Very depressing condition.. But glad tjat maan s good at what he s doing

Edited by honeygrape - 6 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

such a complex concept

i dont even understand whom do i sympathize with😕

happy ending imagine karna bhi itna mushkil horaha hai babaji!😭

well written every emotion at its place

Do keep writing!

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Ah the infamous Stockholm syndrome.

We usually find some writers romanticising it in fictions/fanfics

The forum is filled with such kind of stories,

It's very very influential on teenager minds, there was a time when I found such stories acceptable (romanticising Stockholm)

I appreciate you writing this kind of story, it's a good initiative since you have a large reader base, it's kind of awareness generation.

I would also like to mention another os of yours which is on marital rape, this one is along the same lines, and I am glad that there are few people who are clear abt right and wrong and do not justify wrongs in name of maan-geet romance/ or it being a fanfiction.

There's another disturbing topic, with quite a few stories around it, do you think you can write another eye-opener on that (even an OS)

that is Pedophilia.

Pls consider.

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

I love reading your OS's; kinda combines my negatives (lack of time, plain lazy) with your positives. You can put so much in a one shot that a whole FF seems likes a waste. Your words and sentiments are short, to the point and impactful. Definitely good writing!

Loved the characterizations and heard about this condition for the first time.

Not all lives have a perfect start middle and end and you have shown that beautifully.

Thanks for the OS

Avi

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: dqno1
I love reading your OS's; kinda combines my negatives (lack of time, plain lazy) with your positives. You can put so much in a one shot that a whole FF seems likes a waste. Your words and sentiments are short, to the point and impactful. Definitely good writing!

Loved the characterizations and heard about this condition for the first time.

Not all lives have a perfect start middle and end and you have shown that beautifully.

Thanks for the OS

Avi

I was surprised to know that you haven't heard of stockholm syndrome.

As I mentioned the forum is filled with stories that border this, but since it's mostly our beloved hero carrying out the task, we tend not to objectively analyse it, and go with the writer.

Or maybe you don't follow certain writers/stories.

I'm sorry for being too generalist here.

Edited by SundariP - 6 years ago

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