MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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aashi14

@aashi14

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Posted: 6 years ago

#141

amazing story n totally differnt from d normal concept.

looking forward to read more n i really hope it has gt a happy ending wid couple being together in love.

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 6 years ago

#142

Chap 2

So after pancakes comes clouds, what are you doing Kawaii? Sweetening a heart-breaking tale as such? I hate to think what became of them? Where does love go? More importantly how can they not know that their love is disappearing without realisation? Maybe the love is still there for Maan and Geet but what happened that living together became impossible?

that is such an awkward siation, how does one navigate when your ex and love are in the same room? And in their case it isn't different from the first. when love and ex is the same person? i hate what became of them, i probably will repeat this like a million times through the story but i i REALLY HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM, its so sad.

Of course a house full of inquisitive guests regardless of how kind they try to show but their questioning gaze is enough at times to drill out the confidence one tries to embed. So i totally understant what Geet is going through, possibly out the minute the party finished or withstand within the peripheral until its clear to make a dash. Theres nothing really that Geet and Maan should feel bad about yet it cant be helped.

What changed? was now they were strangers again, from Mr and Mrs they were back to Mr and Miss. BTW I hate that female change their title yet male are still MR arrgh😡 lol

but that strange feeling must have been unpleasanta nd hallow. He was trying and that hurt, i suppose what they shared was natural and not forcely applied, the heart definitely knows its difference. i feel for both of them, i cant blame anyone either not until we know of whats changed but then again one cant blame the he or the she. Everybody has equal rights to drams and a future, he shouldn't force her to change that just because she is married to him and nor should she change that just because society thinks its her role to make a home. OK im ranting right? lol but i don't think that was the problem between maan and Geet, but whats changed?

looks like with distance and leap also awaits them, do i expect some sort of transition. the pain they feel now showed be healed by then but whats this reference of no love, has the heart already severed its ties and the divorce was the last nail in the coffin. Is their love trully dead? Because it definitely deosnt sound like that

I HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM😆

Ok already waiting for the next, and hopefully see you soon 😃

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

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Posted: 6 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: SundariP
Ye kya bakwas hai?
You write stories like these n keep us waiting for updates😳

I so much agree on this 😕

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#144

Chapter 1

This is such a Mind Blowing Start

Maan and Geet have been in love and its rather hard to believe

that they both fell out of love

the care he always took loving and pampering his wife

their memories were a sweet one but now they both talking divorce

is this the only solution to sort issues in a relationship

both seem to try to hard at it to forget their past memories but why

if divorce was the only solution then surely they would have been always

having these sweet lovable memories

careers is part of life its not who the person is , one cannot just fall in love and then fall out of love

it almost feels like both want each other in their lives yet they have an understanding that divorce would be best

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#145

Yaar ye to maanmarijiya hAi jab chahe alag hogaya I did not expected this but it's a little emotional updy

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#146

Ch2

Started with the clouds and ended with the same

Maan finding figures in the clouds that reminded me of my childhood

During then we sisters also used to look at the sky trying to find horse elephants and what not

Marriage

A law

That binds two persons

Divorce

A law

That severs the ties between the two

Forever and ever

With no hold on each other

And that was the essence of the part

Aptly titled

The clouds

Covers the destiny for sometime

But when clears

The life shines with happiness

Beautiful update

👏

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 6 years ago

#147

superb update..

quite differnt from what you have written till now so going to take my time to understand it all...

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 6 years ago

#148

Waiting for an update

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#149

Superb Chapter

Maan and Geet must have been in love with each other

they married and still enjoyed their togetherness then what has happened

why both felt suffocated

its only them that didn't make time to keep the love flowing

a marriage can surely stand careers , few fights and even misunderstandings ,

sometimes even extra marital affairs

but suffocation now that seems way to drastic

especially now when both are in the same room they doing everything to avoid each other

love cannot just disappear because of divorce papers

Maan still seems very much concerned about Geet and now knowing that she will be leaving the country , he feels emptiness while she seems so formal

is Geet hiding her pain or is there more that has led them to this divorce

one cannot fall in love and then fall out of love it just does not happen like that

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Anitha Nallasivam

@anitha_tooty

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#150

i feel so sad for Maaneet but very happy to have u back

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