MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#121

so beautiful bt painful...my heart is already crying through this part...maan was so much love with her...even he cared n cares for her...then y she is thinking its not true...they remembered everything...both of them r at same pace with pain...n their hearts tell us they r still in love with each other then what...expectaion n expression of love by boys n girls r different...was it th cause of their separation

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#122

Very nicely crafted ...

Time to say bye forever was hurting them

Now both were checking them out ...

May be some want is still lurking around...

Who will first surrender to their heart will...

Waiting for more

Continue sooner

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#123

Superb update

I'd not like manneet sepration

Geet goes to India meet her parents

I hope tHi period of time they refuse their love and reuNit again

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angel0912

@angel0912

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#124

I think story is movinv very slowly

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#125

they got divorced I the first hapter itself.didnt expect this to happen this soon..

even through they are getting divorced they still love each other.. and are hurting..remembering their memories together..

maan clearly is not happy

then what caused this separation???

geet too seemed so happy in the past.. then why she wants to be separated from Mann????

loved it..

continue soon

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#126

Painful part especially after the past memories. They were so much in love. Could it be that their expectations from each other clashed with the realities. Maan's realization was dead on. Till the divorce was finalized they still belonged to each other but now they both feel adrift and miss that connection. waiting for next to see how they move on in life.

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#127

Awesome update

After divorce bhi khuch khuch hota hai dono ke hearts mai

They are missing each other

Their thoughts are reminding them their pasts

They are so much in love then why this divorce comes between

Beautifully written

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#128

thanks for the pm!

Chapter 2

magnificent update! beautiful written!

lovely banner!

they both are clearly missing each other! sad that they divorced! perhaps this separation will bring them closer!

adore the past! they were so happy and in love... then what happened?

of cos they never expected to see each other so soon! ! indeed they were uncomfortable but the love and care is still there!

Maan feels like he is losing something...

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#129

wonderful precap! shall wait.

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#130

Nice update. They still feel the connection. The bitter sweet memories still haunting them. But when he heard she's going away he couldn't take it as there still something bet them. Beautifully written