~Badi Havelli~ A Maaneet FanFic Part 13/page7 -17/11/18 - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely story
Read all parts in one go
Geet hiding in tezi's Getup n teji is suffering
Maan is teji's trend nngead over heel for geet
Lovely
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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART 12

I was stunned to see what was in front of me.

As soon as I snatched the pagdi (cap), all I could see was a girl in front of me, the hair were tied in two long pigtails neatly hidden under the cap. Luck was nowhere; instead here was the female version of Tezender Handa, his twin sister.

I looked at the girl's perplexed face, she looked pale, her eyes which were mostly hidden behind the shadow of her cap, were huge hazels, her face was just like a well sculpted statue, an artist's dream. She would have looked like an angel if she had worn makeup.

I tried to remember Tezi's sister's name, it was something to do with song, what was it, I tried harder, Tezi's voice echoed in my ears, "ok, you want to know my sister's name, you guess it; I will ask you a riddle and the answer is her name

"Ok, you big tease, you enjoy teasing an old lady. Go ahead I am quite intelligent I will tell you I had said then

"ok, here it goes, she has a rhythm, she has a taal, she has a sound, she has a charm, she is beauty, she is soothing, she is in the sound of the water that flows in the river, she is the sound of the birds, she is in the bells of the temple, without her this life will be so boring

I thought hard and harder, "any hint I had asked him sheepishly

He laughed, "she is in my laughter, she is in my tears... she is in every part of this world, all you have to do is be silent and listen, she is everywhere

"Ok, you are making it difficult, but I think it has to do with music I had asked

"You are close I smirked

"Sangeet, no it's not a name of a girl, then...

I came out of my thoughts suddenly when I heard a soft voice,

"Madam, please forgive me she was saying, here I was lost in the past and this poor girl was all confused.

"Madam why are you smirking, I will not cause any scandal; I will simply go from here. But, please do not let anyone know that I am alive she was pleading

I suddenly remembered that the door was open, I quickly went and closed the door and locked it from inside.

"Luck, what have you been thinking all the time, disguising as a sardar, my God! What have you been thinking? I was so furious that I failed to see the frightened look on her face, but I realized my mistake as soon as the words left my mouth.

I cupped her face and helped her to stand, as soon as she got hold of her feet, I hugged her.

She cried as if the flood gates have opened, I did not say anything and let her pour her grief through her eyes.

After long she was able to stop herself from crying.

I directed her towards the sofa and gave her water to drink, "go hot bath is ready, have a bath, meanwhile I will arrange proper clothes for you I instructed her.

She obediently followed my instructions

While she was having a bath I called Nakul and instructed him to prepare a room for her, and asked a leading designer to come in 2 hours. Then she instructed the cook to prepare lunch as per Tezi's taste.


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SHRUTI

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Nice story...
Read all parts in one go..

So maan meets tezi now...so they will know who lucky is..
waiting to see what happens next..and none of the twin knows that the other is alive??
Dadi is so nice and she gets to know about geet..Her fear is kind of justified, poor girl has been living someone else's life for so many days.. why didn't any of the twins try to contact anyone for help..??
Waiting for the next update..for the mystery to solve..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Remember reading this intriguing story long ago... But some parts only
Great that now will be able to read the whole..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
Fond of riddles...everyone of them here...
So dadi met Geet now Maan will bring Tez...
Two siblings would finally meet ...
Waiting for more...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
daadi shock to see girl
she identify her as teji's sister n hug her to sooth

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Dadi knows she is geet ...waiting to see how geet reacts to Maans interest in her
eager to see the reunion of the twins
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
read all parts all together... although i read some parts before also in another post...nice one...geet belongs to a royal family...someone killed all her family member through fire may b brij...but she n her twin bro tezi r alive...maaneet loved each other from their college lifes but never confessed...geets family knew maans love for geet through tezi but geed didnot know...
now geet disguised a sardar driver of dadi...maan doubted her as tezi...bit later maan found tezi...n dadi also now knew that she is geet
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
Awe daadi's reaction was so wonderful
She is so matured and caring
Thanks for the update

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