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Jeevana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Nice start to the story

Continue soon..

Not many to read here now as the writers are less...

So y don't you update fast n keep us happy

Waiting

PS . Congratulations for the new start

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spoorthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: priyasree

Amazing n interesting start

Glad u liked it

thanks for reading!😊

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spoorthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Interesting start...
Geet seems to be so innocent...comparing the city with her village...
she is scared of her uncle...was her uncle harassing her or something? poor girl...
Who is this Anirudh...?? I am guessing he was also not so trustworthy...

Maan's mother is a kind lady...but obviously, Maan is annoyed...
hope Geet share her fears freely with Maan's mom...she might actually help her if she tells about her uncle...

Nice one...

wo jo geet k saat ghar se bhaga tha uusska naam Anirudh hai

more about her uncle in future updates

Thanks for reading!😃

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spoorthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Would you be sending PMs too?

i don't send PM's

but lets see

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spoorthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Jeevana
Nice start to the story
Continue soon..
Not many to read here now as the writers are less...
So y don't you update fast n keep us happy
Waiting
Waiting
PS . Congratulations for the new start

pata nahi gf ko kya hogaya

na writers dikh rahe hai na readers

ilI' update fast pakka

Thanks for reading!😃

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Congrats on the new story!

Fabulous character sketch and pics

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

superb update! Geet is so innocent! Maan's mom is so helpful!

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

wo jo geet k saat ghar se bhaga tha uusska naam Anirudh hai
more about her uncle in future updates

Thanks for reading!😃

Looking forward to reading more of this one...

please update soon