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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

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isko aaise hi rehane dete hai..thodi spamming bhi ho jayegi.

@anti-spammer -- I challenge you, dekhte hai if you can find this as spam and delete it...😛

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Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
superb update! Geet is so innocent! Maan's mom is so helpful!

thanks for reading!😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Iss forum ke kuchh thode writers aur readers, ab humare hi hawale hai forum sathiyon !!!

I loved that from the other post !!!

@silent readers -- please come out of your closet..

ye yahan likhke koi phayada nahi..
but, phir bhi,
ummeed se ummeed rakh li hai humne..

itne bhari shabdon ke prayog ke baad ab aati hai comment ki bari, jo hum kal ya saturday karenge

yaad hai humne kuch 13 ya 14 readers se writing start kiya tha

but tab ki baat alag thi we had so many views!!

now there are no readers at all

na silent na active

i didn't expect k ye din bhi hum dekhenge😭

hogaya mera drama😆

comment karo I'm waiting!

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nav2010
Intersting story

glad u found it interesting😃

thanks for reading!

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

congrats for new story

interesting

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umaa

@uluvmg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Congrats for New Story... unique concept...!!

wonderful start...geet ran away from her uncle's house means she was orphan...maan hated to see his mother brought her home... wow he was college student & asked money for assignment & went away with warning to his mother about geet's wrong deeds...but seems geet was nice girl.. she was sad to not known about annirudh who was with her from school days & left their place together...maan's mom wanted to send geet to her house...excited for next..!!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: aparna3011
congrats for new story
interesting

Thanks for reading Aparna😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: uluvmg
Congrats for New Story... unique concept...!!
wonderful start...geet ran away from her uncle's house means she was orphan...maan hated to see his mother brought her home... wow he was college student & asked money for assignment & went away with warning to his mother about geet's wrong deeds...but seems geet was nice girl.. she was sad to not known about annirudh who was with her from school days & left their place together...maan's mom wanted to send geet to her house...excited for next..!!

unique kya tha yaar ussme😆

but glad u found it interesting!

Thanks for reading!😊

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Me me me.. I am genuinely interested in reading further.

Not just because the chapter makes you curious about the girl's past and how she is going to adjust to this new situation of being utterly alone in a strange place, but also coz i enjoyed the writing style.

Could you PM me if you do pms coz I am not a regular in this forum

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spoorthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Indulekha00
Me me me.. I am genuinely interested in reading further.
Not just because the chapter makes you curious about the girl's past and how she is going to adjust to this new situation of being utterly alone in a strange place, but also coz i enjoyed the writing style.
Could you PM me if you do pms coz I am not a regular in this forum

i don't send pms usually but since u said u aren't regular to this forum

tho tumhare liye special exemption 😆

im super glad u liked it

thanks for reading!

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago