Predestined~Repost~UPDATED Ch19@Pg40[CH18@Pg33]4th June 2019 - Page 22

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 15


Part 2

terrific update! awesomely written!

Maan's inner thoughts well portrayed! at least he acknowledged that Geet is special!

can understand Maan's feelings! he is affected by Geet!

nice that Maan is imaging Geet!!

his frustration is reasonable!

so Maan cannot concentrate at work!






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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 15


Part 2

impressive update! perfectly written!

as expected Maan does not listen to SD! adore Geet;s cribbing to her babaji! omg she thought it was not really there!

loved when Geet agreed with Maan that he should watch her clothes!

hmm wonder what else Geet has planned for Maan? of cos Maan is angry!

Maan is trying to avoid Geet but alas destiny has other plans! everything abiut her just attracts him.

Maan cannot help but stare at a wet Geet!

update soon







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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon


read all over again all those parts...only 1 day passed, they r in mumbai n both r gone case...first geet day dreamt romantic stuff n now maan...geet is nt remembering dev...who is sameera...ahlam, maan ki upar fida...maan is a cyber genious...lets c how geet examine if maan is gay or not...

He is of course straight lol!! 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 15 Part 2

Maan comes home earlier then usual and Geet was asleep
opening the door and Maan is welcomed by his cute wife
there is no doubt that he already cares for her
placing her on the bed as he thought she has fallen asleep
Geet was so cute talking to her Babaji and then realizes that she is not dreaming
her husband is actually at home
Maan knows that its difficult for Geet to wash her clothes especially now with her
injured hands still he makes sure to point out her chores has not been done
but also been sarcastic letting her know that she don't know much about household
chores but it was good seeing a strong Geet standing up to Maan
the darkness once again brings in concern and surely Maan is captured by his wife's beautiful form no matter how much he tries but it seems even nature does not want Maan forgetting his wife's images


Thanks a lot again for your amazing comments Taahir!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Updated...

Next update after 40 likes!!

Thanks to all those who liked & Commented on Previous updates. Keep sharing your views!!
Edited by WaveTeal - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice updates..
Continue soon..
Thank you for pm..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Very very nice updates. Maan is fighting his attraction so hard lol.. I almost pitied his condition here... but I don't understand why he is so adamant in pushing her away when he is somewhere getting aware of his love for the little one.. hmm waiting to see what's in his mind
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update
Like geets attitude and her bold awtar with cute innocence .
Bechara maan !
How will he avoid her ?
Eagerly waiting .
Please update soon
Take care

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