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Posted: 6 years ago




Sorry for commenting late
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Posted: 6 years ago
nice teaser, waiting for update
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: jaya6696

Brj come to km ,he doesn't like that maan is holding geet hand but he can't do anything

Waiting for next update



Yes Brij didn't like
But he can't do anything 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Brij 😡 Geet is so scared of him



She will be scare
As wll her life he threatened her
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

Geet is thinking that maan cares fr her but wat maan done its nt okk tp force her to obey him

Let see wat future hold fr them


Let see how will she cope up with him 😕
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Interesting Teaser

Brij came for Geet
but why Maan pushes her back to sit
will be waiting for the chapter



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Yes Maan did
To show Brij that Geet is his 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: mehrunnesa

Brij should remember he had deal with maan
full handa family needs to go to the police
now poor geet always afraid due to house violence



Yes violence is that she get from her family
So she is just curving for their love 😕
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1

Great teaser. Loved the way maan showed his authority on geet before brij and good to see helpless fuming brij 😃 eagerly waiting for the next part. Update soon.


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Yes Maan did to tell Brij
That now he had right in Geet not them 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ha ha ha 😆😆 Sooo good for u brij u shld get it u where enjoying beating geet right now bear all these now she is not alone maan is there for her
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Posted: 6 years ago

I Own You

Part. 10.

Geet whose face light up listening that her brother is coming to take her back to her home and she felt happy that she will meet her family but her happiness when she hear what Maan hard voice also what he said but still she didn't said him anything. Maan look at Adi then said him.

M. If Chopra didn't do meeting this time so cancel the deal as MSK doesn't wait for anyone and you both go to that land and see the how much work we need to do over there (Adi nodded his head and said him.

Ad. Yes sir I will say (then he and munshi Jii left from there, Maan then start doing his work and Geet kept sitting over there.

Geet was really nervous as her husband is take caring of her also not giving her any work more than this he is not yelling at her or beating her but then she look above where she saw Maan was still working and she again look down but she come out of thought when she hear her brother voice. Maan also look above listening to Brij voice who call him.

B. Hello Khurana jii (both Maan and Geetr look at him also because of fear Geet stand, seeing this Brij was happy but not for long as Maan held her hand then slowly make her sit back and she look at him with wide eyes but he didn't care and Brij didn't like this also he can't say anything as now Geet is his wife. Then Maan ask him.

M. Mr Handa have seat and would you like to have anything (Brij who was looking at Maan hand which he was holding Geet hand but then look at him and said him.

B. No thanks Khurana jii I am here to take Geet with him (Maan look at him and said him.

M. Okk then (Geet then left with Brij also he know all the Geet kept looking at him but he know this will be last time she will meet her so called family.

There in Handa house Geet was welcome by her family also she know why her family is loving her as she know guest are here to show them how much they love her. Later in noon time guest left and Geet was back to her routine as she start working over there and now it was late also Maan didn't come to take her that make her step mother angry then she left to kichen. Geet who was working in kitchen forgetting everything but when she hear her mother angry voice it took her breath.

K. Geet (she turn back when she saw her mother standing over there and with her look she can can that she is angry on her but on what she didn't know. Kmaini her step mother move towards and held her from her hairs and due to pain she closed her eyes. Then holding from her hairs Kamini took her out side where her both brothers and her father were sitting. She leave her hairs then slap on her face and ask her) tell us what you did that your husband is not coming to take you back (Geet was shock listening to this but then her brother Brij slap her and ask her.

B. Tell us what you did that your husband is tried from you in one day (Geet tears were following from her eyes and she softly.

G. I didn't do (listeing to this Vikram was angry then he tightly held her from her hairs she bit her lips to stop from shouting then he said her.

V. Really you didn't did anything but we did as we said to your husband staying with you one night leave then leave you (Geet closed her eyes but still he continue) also we had said him after 3 hour come and take you back as we can't tolerate you more (listening to them her heart was bleeding that they didn't want her and then he psuh her down due this her hand got injured due to broken pieces also she look at her father who was sitting onn sofa she crawl towards him and held his foot and sid him.

G. Papa jii sachii I didn't do anything (but then Kmaini said her.

K. Yes you didn't do anything but it was our mistake that you are still on our head (she turn towards Brij and said him) Brij puttar you know what you have to do with her (listening to this Brij went and after few minutes in he come and seeing him Geet was scared then he look at Vikram who make her stand also held her then he saw her hand which was bleeding he smirk at her he held her that hand which her more pain but her breath stop when she saw that Brij then kept hot coal on that hand which was bleeding and due to this she shout in pain.

G. Aa.ah.hh maa.aa (that was making her situation worst as now she was tried also felling terrible pain in her body also they all didn't stop their crulness on poor girl and seeing this Brij slap on face also before she fell down someone held her and she whisper) I didn't do anything

Maan who enter in Hnada house as he know he is late to pick up Geet as for land issue he had to went to other city with Adi and after completing his work he come back and thought to pick up Geet and when he enter in Handa house he kept looking at his mobile but when he hear weeping voice he was shock to see Geet state who was crying also suppressing her pain but before he could say anything Brij slap her and before she fell down he hear she didn't do anything he was confused but he was angry seeing her in this situation he held her tightly.


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