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Prologue

Yeh dil chahta hai tujko ashiko ki tarah

Dundta hai tuje deewano ki tarah

Ho durr par kaha manta hai yeh dil is tarah

Kyunki yeh dil to chahta hai pyaar tumara

Milu ga jab tumse lipat kar rohuga is tarah

Jaise barish ki bonde chumti hai mitti ko.

Mujhe mein tu or tu mujh mein sama jayega is tarah

Jaise mein tu or tu mera aks ban junga.



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Hello guyss.. Welcome to my new story.. hope u like this story to..
Yeh Dil story of two lovers who met but then seprate by density. where he did all this to find his love again but cnt succed. but than after years he saw her but seeing her behaviour it pained him.. and when he ask about her she have no ans for any question.
But girl have her own Pov she to love this man deeply where there is not height of love. but how can became reason of his distraction his reason of home break.. how can she placed his wife place. how?? but when again destiny play his game they again met this time to not seperate from each other. She did everything what he said so they can stay together and happily because yeh Dil ab bas usko hi chahta hai or usko hi manta hai.. yeh dil ab uska nahii raha.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Character sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : Future of Khurana construction but he leave everything and join politics and now he represent Mumbai as MLA . Hardworking dedicated and soft corners for poor and want to do something for them so their children cnt live in poorly and By the way he belong to Mumbai.

Geet : A very simple and sweet girl. She basically from HP punjab . where she lived with her Family and she is trained classical dancer and dance is her passion and yeah She is Maan Wife. they both love each other but now they all are died

Raj Singh Khurana : Maan Father and current owner of construction and he really not like maan to join politics but when someone praise maan he really feel proud. n btw maan Dad and Maan ki jyada nahi banti..

Sumitra singh Khurana : Maan mom. love his son alot and some time trying to defend his son infront of her husband. but belong to Village she have some kind of narrow minded thinking..

Savitri Singh Khurana : Maan dadima who live in village with her younger son and come mumbai for sometimes to stay with raj family as she not like this modern fashion and she to follow old rituals but she love Maan alot as being elder from all his cousin he is most who get his dada- dadi love.

Sameera Singh Khurana : Maan First wife. (rest abt her character you will know while reading)
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!!!Part 1 !!

Mumbai a city of dreams.Many people came to to city to fulfilled their drems. Some get chance and some rejectedly go back to their home and some have no chance to stay back so they stay there to wait for their chance and in these they pick any random job for their survival. Like these many peoples from different fields come to examine their talent and once who pass it quickly they get happy and those rejected they do not loose hope and think about their surial. As they have full confidence on their talent.

The story start from Nritya Niketan Centre (dance centre) which is on Vasi Mumbai. There is great hustle bustle on in and outside of centre as today there is a dance competition and many big celebrities are joining for this annual function. From Big Cinema to Politicans all are invited. As Nritya Niketan Centre count as best classical dance school in whole world. Not from India but from foreign to many people came to learn classical dance . Mrs Sonia Sahay Prinicipal of this centre walking from one end to another to see preparation and satisfied see left from there when clerk came to him and inform that coming of guest has start and Chairman Mr Mukesh Sahay who is her husband is calling her Noded her head in yes she left with him and start welcoming guest with her husband and few trustee members. One by one all big name of country came and shook their hands with them and they pleasantly said them to go in and wait for function as with in few mins it will start. As clock show 3 pm Mrs Sonia look at his watch and seeing her in tension his husband ask what happened ? Mukesh Mr Khurana MP is still not arrived. He is chief guest of the function. If he come late then we have to reschedule all performances. Mukesh to looked at his watch and said But MR khurana is very Punctual about time. Lets wait for 5 mins may be he get s stick in traffic and Sonia to noded and then one of trustee came to them and he to ask about chief guest and they heard car voice and seeing car Mrs Sonia take relief and looked at peon who forward bouquet of flower to her and she forwarded to her old trustee to welcome him. As Car stop from driver seat a man in formal dress BLue dark pant and light blue shirt came and stood nd he about to open the door for minister but back down seeing his eyes and he gulp down his saliva seeing his sir angry expression and man himself come out and stood infront of them closing car door and as Man start walking toward them many camera flashes start playing and every media person try to capture every move of him from different angle as they donot want to miss any chance. As Man walk camera zoom on his feets to going upper showing his physique in white Kurta that fell till on his knee and Pajama nd blight grey color Nehru jacket and a small blue color hanky in jacket pocket showing his all magnestic chrisma that his walk showing that aura that he have while walking and people around him seeing him while trustee and principal smile looking at him as he reached near them and camera at once stop on his face as he remove his Glasses and give it to blue pant dress man and and shake hands with all when Mr Mukesh said. Welcome Mr Khurana and man happily shake his hands with him and said pleasure its all mine showing his smile on his M type lips and smile that can kill every girl and that strong personality that fear everyone. Come Mr Maan. Said chairman showing way to inside when Maan stop him and ask Sorry for coming than he look down saw his wrist watch and said exactly 5 mins. Sorry for your inconvience Mr sahay. But than Mr sahay said not problem Mr khurana I understood Mumbai traffic and maan noded and maan give present bouquet pass to man calling Adi. Blue pant wearing man come and take bouquet and maan look at Mr n Mr Sahay and they move forwards

Maan with other guest take first seat in Hall and where speaker of function call him to start annual function and he start function with huge clapping voice and Now I will ask Mr Maan Singh to share few words with us and as she said these words it share all over the centre and reaching to everyone ears in green room where a girl was getting ready and as she about to apply lisptic she get stop for some sec and seeing this one girl ask..? kya hua jaldi kar na . ha Avni kar rahi hu bas 5 mins tu reetu ko dekh wo tyaar hai na uska first performance hai while another girl left that girl again start doing her work. When few min later they heard loud voice of calling the reetu and suhani name for their act . jaldi kar.. she said to herself and try to put bindi when her mobile beep and seeing name a pleasant smile came to her lips and he quickly hold mobile where she read message. "All the best with a heart shape and kiss emo seeing this she blushingly smile

imp note : i need good response from u all...the lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad..if u want more n more updates from me. silent reader wake up dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec

Disclaimer: any scene or situation of this ff is an imagination. If any action match to any other thing that is merely a co-incident. I haven't copied any scene as far as my knowledge and I want to let u know beforehand. Still if anything matches it will be only a coincident.

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PS :PLS PARDON FOR ANY GRAMTICAL MISTAKE

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hoping you guys enjoy this part
and will waiting for your reviews😊😊
Happy Reading
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congratss😃
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Thankuuu bas waiting for ur revieww😛😊
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Thanks dear😃😊

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