Chura Liya Tumne Jo Dil Ko - repost - Epi pg 138* OSR link pg 149

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#981

distance from make geet thinks about maan n his confession to her

how he always save her

how his actions express his love but she took it in wrong manner

what she feels when maan is around her n away from her

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#982

Chapter 21

splendid update! well written!

Geet's dilemma well portrayed! glad Adi decided to intervene! Maan realises that what has happened is his own doing! but great that he decides to wait for Geet!

Geet has yet to realise she has fallen for Maan! she is aloof from everything! nice of Adi to tell Geet about Maan, his life and success!

sad that Maan left cricket as he blamed himself for his parents' death!

at least Geet knows that Maan is sincere and he does love her!

Loved Geet introspection! she has let her prejudice cloud her judgement! she now knows she hurt him so much and regrets that she rejected him!

wow... she realises Maan is a Mr Darcy! fab moment! Geet desperate to meet Maan! happy that Maan is back!

liked her restlessness! finally they meet! Maan thinks its his imagination and then sees she is really there!

adore the moment in the dargah!

dadi happy that her plan is successful! Loved Geet's cute complaints! Maan is stunned but ecstatic!

extraordinary confession! hmm he is now her boyfriend!

Maan on top of the world!

marvelous hug!!!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#983

Last Chapter!

Marvelous update! fabulously written!

Geet ecstatic being with Maan! she loves this feeling of being loved! glad that Maan is taking things easy!

great that Maaneet get time to be with each other!

Maan's days being and end with Geet! adore Geet's care for Maan! he is truly blessed to have her!

nice that they are getting to know each other as well their likes and dislikes! Raji is also helping Geet adjust to Maan!

lovely moments! liked that they are doing things for each other!

at least Geet made Maan agree to play cricket!

Maan awaiting those three magical words and she finally says it! Maan on cloud nine!

passioante moments! Adore Geet's innocence!

perfect end!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#984

thanks Avi for sharing this story again with us!

always a pleasure reading ur stories!

shall wait for an epilogue!

when will you update WTT????

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#985

Amazing part... maan wooed her with all his charm than how can she resist.. finally confessed.. loved the tabela dialogue... she left serial but still didn't forget the scenes... loved the part...

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 7 years ago

#986

wonderful update

maan's patience pay off as geet is coming close to him

geet is also understanding maan

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 7 years ago

#987

Last Ch

At last happy ending

I love you bol hi diya

Loved it to the core

Beautiful ending

But

Requesting epilogue

You said you would not be around

But we want you if its not problematic

Please complete WTT if possible

We will miss you and your stories

Good wishes

👍🏼

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893213

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Posted: 7 years ago

#988

I forgot I have written an epilogue already 😆

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

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Posted: 7 years ago

#989

thanks for updating...nice tying up of all the loose ends...would have loved atleast 3 more parts but respect writer's decision...bulldog!!! pillow paradise...superfunny!!!