Chura Liya Tumne Jo Dil Ko - repost - Epi pg 138* OSR link pg 149

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ambeern

@ambeern

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Posted: 7 years ago

#961

Awesome update

Geet understand her feeling for maan

Loved it

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#962

Chapter 21

Absolutely loved the litmus test results and ofcourse the idea too...seems aisi test ki baatein hi smjh aati hai Geet Jhalli ko...she is otherwise not able to realize her feelings...

Geet is a confused soul...everyone around her is vouching for Maan and is happy with their supposed relationship...am glad she is re-thinking things...

Aww Adi is such a cute and loyal friend...chahe kitna bhi Maan se pange le but at the end of the day he knows his friend's feelings are genuine...that was sweet...

Maan is a poor soul sulking over his love...I loved how he respected her wish to stay from her...I loved all his self thoughts...that analysis was so amazing and true to the point...

Geet is missing him too much...and how cute she is to look for solace in chocolate...:)

Adi is super awesome...and it is not like he said some wrong things to defend his friend...all that he said was true...but the way he said or the his timing was awesome...am sure Geet must have understood all that...

oh god...Poor Maan...Cricket? He left it blaming it for his parents death...poor him...he has so much inside him even though he pretends or he is a bulldog at the exterior...

I so wish Geet take him out of his guilt and he starts playing cricket again...

Geet ko bhi Maan ki bimari lag gyo kya...analyzing herself in the mirror hehehe...but ofcourse her thoughts were humble as opposed to what Maan generally thinks infront of the mirror...hahaha

I am glad she is thinking past all the supposed diseases...and is actually reflecting on her feelings when he is close to her...

Oh that realization that Maan was her Darcy was amazing...:)

finally...she finally realized he looks hundred times better than Arjun Kapoor...hahaha...

Geet kuch bhi realize krle hai toh Jhalli hi...her and her craze for serials drama...is ladki ka kuch nahi ho skta...

Her Maan was so dreamy...:)

oh this Teri Deewani track was my fav and now here in this story was so beautiful...they both prayed for each other and their prayers were heard...:) lovely

oh he did not want to rush again...that was lovely of him...

Dadima is always a cutie...:) oh that Maaneet moment was beautiful...

her questioning him (this scene from the show is another one of my favs)...their conversation was so beautiful there...questioning one another...having missed each other for a week...one hoping to hear what is in her mind and heal himself and the other wanting to decrease the gap between them and confess whateven she realized in this week...

Bull dog is back...yay!!!...aah finally all is set...

Edited by sahibasharma - 7 years ago

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zida

@zida

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Posted: 7 years ago

#963

Waooo
Superb pt
Finley geet realize

her love for maan
Hope now geet confess her love for maan soon

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#964

I am so sad that this one is going to end with just a chapter more left...

going to miss this one so much...

different and unique Maaneet...

Have you thought of writing an epilogue to this one Avi?

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893213

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Posted: 7 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
I am so sad that this one is going to end with just a chapter more left...
going to miss this one so much...
different and unique Maaneet...
Have you thought of writing an epilogue to this one Avi?

hmm! socha hai

thanks Sahiba
ek tum ho jo sab kuch notice kar rahi hai 😃 warna sab dreamy keh ke chale gaye
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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#966

Ch 21

Amazingly beautiful update

So many compressed in a single update

Missing Maan

Rethinking and re-evaluating all the incidents of the past

Going step by step and seeing all the happenings from different aspect

Realisation of love

And most of all

His caring and sicerisin

All made Geet

Took him as her favourite character Mr Darcy

Of Pride and Prejudice

Her going to Dargah

Searching for him

His carefulness

Not to hurry her

Iconic scene of stucking dupatta in button

And all that follows

We are dead

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#967

Last Chapter

I forgot I have written an epilogue already LOL

Edited by dqno1 - 7 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 7 years ago

#968

Thanks everyone for the wonderful likes and comments

I truly enjoyed each and everyone of them

I am not sure I will be around here much from now on so I wish you all well

Have fun!

Love always.

Avi