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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello all


surprised??
bcoz of new index??

😆

i felt to update my new stories on thread & add all here and the previous thread was not well organised with that i need a place to update my pm list on regular basis ...


as u know i have 100 buddy in my buddy list but many of them do not respond ...


so in this thread we will do all acticitives
😛



hope u enjoy reading & do ignore gramatical errors
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PM LIST...

i'll send one pm from now onward to non active readers to know if they are intrested in reading or not .


after their rply only i'll remove anyone:)
Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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COMPLETED STORIES


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SYMPATHY OR LOVE




My first ever story in this forum


Prologue


Relations , family & friends the most simplest words with most difficult meaning more we try to understand more we get confused. Each & every person in this world have different opinion about these words . WORDS is it correct to call them only WORDS for some yes and for some they are not just words it is their life a base for making home .
Some say that they are nothing but just some burden who trap us . They give nothing but PAIN because they make u weak . They never by ur side when u needed them most . They only know how to hurt u & how to give u pain. They are just names with no meaning.
on otherside for some it's more important then their life . Life seems incomplete without them when u are sad family & ur friends make u laugh in most difficult situations they hold u and protect u so that u can't fall.

This story is about 2person with different thought on these words or more than words ..

For him it nothing for her it's everything

One is ready to destroy everything for himself and other is ready to destroy herself for her loved once .


For him help means sympathy and for help means love .


He is as cold as ice and she is as warm as fire .

Fire & ice
Fire who give us warmth by burning herself & dry ice as cold ready to burn everything .


Story of a 30 years bussiness tycoon & 22 years old middle class girl .

Two person whose meaning are different for relation , family & friends .

But how their life turn up when they bounded by his father with nothing more than a DEAL .

A deal of her loveonce happines with her whole life

She is bounded by him for her whole life a person who unable to walk .
A person who forced to do this marriage a ruthless, arrogant person who hate any helping hand which remind him his weakness . He hate when people show sympatthy to him ..

Only for his dad sake he is doing this marriage but this relation is nothing but just a forced burden for him .

A story from his sympathy to her love ...
...

Hi it's a new one WILL CONTINUE ONLY IF I GET SOME RESPONCE

Secondly i've written it bfr too in Ragna version but that story is incomplete
I'M SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY ANY INCIDENT /SCENE MATCH WITH ANY OTHER FF/SS
IS PURELY A COINCIDENCE







Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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ONGOING...


1) his dulhan



Prologue



Geet bid bye to her family with tears in her eyes she is so going to miss her family . she now Belong to someone else she is now GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA .
Geet wiped her tears again that come out of her eyes she is missing her family .
Maan look at geet and felt bad for her . they both in car and going toward km after bidaai . he passed his hanky to her.
Geet look toward him with her big innocent eyes before taking his hanky
G- thanks
Maan just nodded in yes still looking toward her
They both didn't know much about each other it was like cht magni pat bhyah
He see her for the first time in mandap itself

he saw her wiping her tears when he move his hand toward her entangling her fingures with his .pressing them a little as if assuring her .
causing her dil to go dhak dhak

as she for the first time felt a male touch .

both remain silant

there start the jorney of arrange marrige to love
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CLICK HERE


ps : I'M SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY .
THE STORY BELONGS TO ME ONLY . ANYSCENE IF MATCH WITH ANYOTHER IT'S PURELY A COINCIDENT NOTHING MORE ! STILL ANY PROBLEM U CAN PM ME .

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LIGHT OF HER LIFE?



U'll read many stories with geet being helpless & maan supporting her .

This one too is like that a sweet & small journey . Concept is not so new . BUT THE STORY SOLELY BELONGS TO ME !

BUT still if anyone has problem do inform me or pm me or leave a comment here ...
Now u decide i'll continue or not .

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Prologue







M- haan haan maa i'll take care of myself no need to worry ..
Maan shook his head listning his mom never ending instructions whenever he goes out
To not neglect his health
To take food on time
And so on...
A caring family that anyone carve of .
Almighty blessed him with every possible happines on earth .
Heath , wealth , a caring & understanding family .
Maan after agreeing to lot of instructions finally cut the call as he is outside for site seen .
He as usual on a surprise visit to a site that he mostly do to keep tab on everything .
KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS afterall known for it's quality.
That's why kc is no one construction company.

Maan was busy in checking a mail on phone when adi run toward him scared
Adi- s ssiirr vvo

M- what happen adi?
Adi- s sir vvo
M- ADI
Maan then looking at his condition forward a glass of water toward him
Adi- sir vo
Pointing in a direction where all the employess gathered adi say
Our workers were working there when they found an injured girl their .
She is alive but i don't think
Maan get angry listning him . Their someone need help and here he is giving details
M- adi u have gone mad .
Call doctors immidatly . Their is one branch of khurana hospital inform tjem we are coming .
Saying so maan rush in that direction and look toward the girl . But without wasting a second like others he immidatly pick her up & rush toward hospital not before warning everyone that the matter must not go outside .
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Ps: I'M SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY .
THE STORY BELONGS TO ME ONLY . ANYSCENE IF MATCH WITH ANYOTHER IT'S PURELY A COINCIDENT NOTHING MORE ! STILL ANY PROBLEM U CAN PM ME


Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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ON HOLD...


...



1) MYSTICAL MYTH


Prologue



We hear many story of princess , vamires , wolf. But what about ghosts? Soul?
Ever heard about them?
Yes . We always hear about them .
Do u beleive it?

Some say yes & some no

So who are they?
Does they exist?

Let's start our journey to find answers ...
Let's take a look

Story of a Princess & her love .
But who is he?
A common man ?
Poor?
Orpan?
Or what?


None can answer it ...

None
Who is he?
Why he can't say anything?
Why can't revel his identity ?
Who is he?
A vampire?
A wolf?
A ghost?
Or someone else?

Or someone othr behind this!
Journey is long & hard and no one know truth!

Let's take a look

...


A maid come running toward a lady and informed
M- hume voh kahi mil nhi rahe h ?
Hum sab jangah dundh chuke but vo khi nhi h

That lady drop herself on ground
L- now what i'll say to them?
His life is in danger !
We lost him!
We lost him
For
Forever!!!

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G- rath kyun rok diya aapne?

Geetanjali the princess of vijaygarh ask from her maid meera worridly

M- princess! Vo vo
Our soldiers found an injured man on roads
Look like he is not gonna live


G- don't say like that tell them to take him with us to palace and inform vedji about him . We will try our best to save him . It's our duty

Meera nodded immdatly

Guards carry that injured man with them to vijaygarh palace on the order of geetanjali

...

Rajguru open his eyes immidatly sensing negativity around him. He call his one of the follower makhan and say


R- inform maharaj i need to meet him immidatly

Vo aa rhi h to destroy everything .
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I'M SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY ANY SCENE MATCH TO ANYONE FF/SS/OS IS PURELY A COINCIDENCE NOTHING MORE





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DESTINATED TO BE ONE


Prologue



Leave me leave me u monster singh khurana geet said trying to free herself from his grip banging her hand on his back while maan without finching throw her on his shoulder ignoring her usual drama.

Shut up geet maan say with boring expression .

G- dekhiye Rakshas singh khurana mujhe jaine dijiye main bta rhi hu aapko main nhi manti y baal vivah .

M- Ohh sorry to brust ur bubble dear princess what do u think i am dying to get marry to u? I'm not intrested in u at all.

G- aapki himmat kaise hui? She shouted

Aapne aapne hamari geet khurana ki insult kari?

M- and u just said tum nhi manti y baal vivah
Geet bite ger tounge
G- haan hum nhi mannte nhi banna hume baal vadhu
Geet say as she was on the verge of crying
G- i i'm only turned 18 aur main aap jaise rakhas ko nhi jhel sakti!!

Nieche utarie mujhe

M- tumhe kya lagta h ? Tumhe tolrate karna aasan kaam h ? Chipkali kahi ki !!

Geet make a big face
G- main MAIN CHIPKALI?
Dekha babajii aapne dekha? Inhome mujhe chipkali kya! Mujhe

Chodiye mujhe bhagna hain ! Hum apse shadi nhi karenge .
M- in ur dreams ab zyada nacho maat vrna tumhe yhi patak dunga phir langdate hue lena phere

Causing her to stop knowing very well he won't think twice before doing it!

...

Ok girls so how it is? I'll update character sketch if i get a decent responce. Warning u before hand it's going to be comedy + romance !

Post it as i removed cursed prince .

Ps: I AM THE SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY I. IF ANY SCENE MATCH WITH ANY OTHER STORY IT'S PURELY A COINCIDENCE



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Posted: 7 years ago
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UPCOMING...



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1) hidden




prologue



geet cut phone angrily
G-hell!

here my dad is ready to give my bali and there he is not even picking up my call.
MAAN SINGH KHURANA once i see u na i'll cut u into pieces


geet said while throwing phone when her sister Rajji rush inside her room

R- di bad news
ladke vale aa ghe
maa is calling u downstairs

G- i'm not coming
i told u before


when rano come in her room being helpless
Ra- geet if u don't want me dead then plz come ur dad too coming back .

a shiver ran down her spine . she knew it well if she don't go downstairs then surely her maa is in big trouble


geet agreed unwilingly

..

mohinder smile widely as soon he see geet coming downstairs

mo- here she is
my daughter geet


geet look downstairs clenching her fist . she was about to yell at him when she froze looking at behind her dad
not the guest
driver behind her dad
MAANSINGH KHURANA
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so how is it?

if i continued then it is gonna solaly CONTINUED ON IF :)

BUT I WON'T SEND PM FOR THIS ONE

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the story belong to me only!

any problem do pm me

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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for sharing your amazing collection!

Looking forward to the upcoming stories!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for sharing your amazing collection!


Looking forward to the upcoming stories!

they will come once i complete my 2 stories😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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new collection...
good to see you added new ones Will read soon
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you always so fast with update
hats off to you

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