mannet ss: hidden. pt1 pg6 /tsr pg14

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Posted: 7 years ago
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prologue



geet cut phone angrily
G-hell!

here my dad is ready to give my bali and there he is not even picking up my call.
MAAN SINGH KHURANA once i see u na i'll cut u into pieces


geet said while throwing phone when her sister Rajji rush inside her room

R- di bad news
ladke vale aa ghe
maa is calling u downstairs

G- i'm not coming
i told u before


when rano come in her room being helpless
Ra- geet if u don't want me dead then plz come ur dad too coming back .

a shiver ran down her spine . she knew it well if she don't go downstairs then surely her maa is in big trouble


geet agreed unwilingly

..

mohinder smile widely as soon he see geet coming downstairs

mo- here she is
my daughter geet


geet look downstairs clenching her fist . she was about to yell at him when she froze looking at behind her dad
not the guest
driver behind her dad
MAANSINGH KHURANA
..

so how is it?

if i continued then it is gonna solaly CONTINUED ON IF :)

BUT I WON'T SEND PM FOR THIS ONE

..

the story belong to me only!

any problem do pm me

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Posted: 7 years ago
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INDEX



character sketch - pg4

CHAPTER 1 PG6
Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Nice prologue. Looking forward to reading update
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hooo new wala
Congo shongo
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Congrats for the new story👏
Nice prologue
Will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice prologue it seems interesting will be waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow another story! congrats on the new SS!! superb prologue!

already waiting for updates and character sketch!



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice starting. Very good one. Thanks for the new story. Please continue.
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congrats for new story

very nice prolouge
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Congrats on new story!!!
Kya woh ladka who came to see Geet is Maan?

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